for The Missing Scene11/9/2012 c1 Guest
i luv the cookie part
i luv the cookie part
5/28/2012 c1 howtodoyou
screw you moron. this is fucking retarded
screw you moron. this is fucking retarded
5/24/2012 c1 DarthVader
lol I love your list of what we get for giving tips! :D
I just wanted to say, it's interesting and I sort of expected the "spark" between Nat and Kitty to be more defined, but really I think it's better without it, because it's more bittersweet. Just thought I'd comment... :D Also, I don't think Nat is that confident in himself to do that. He's so awkward around girls, you know?
(it was a lot better than those crazy people on here who write fanfiction about a romance between bart and Kitty - that's nasty, I don't know why they do that lol :P)
lol I love your list of what we get for giving tips! :D
I just wanted to say, it's interesting and I sort of expected the "spark" between Nat and Kitty to be more defined, but really I think it's better without it, because it's more bittersweet. Just thought I'd comment... :D Also, I don't think Nat is that confident in himself to do that. He's so awkward around girls, you know?
(it was a lot better than those crazy people on here who write fanfiction about a romance between bart and Kitty - that's nasty, I don't know why they do that lol :P)
4/19/2012 c1 deostoer
Who said goodbye nattyboy or Bartimaeus.
You should read "Sorcerer's Ascension" and all other books in the series. From your profile ( you are very funny btw I especially liked the this is this cat...) and the books you have read and written about I think you will like this series ( book 3 and 4 are especially funny) also suggestion for profile
When life gives you lemons... Lemon fight!
Who said goodbye nattyboy or Bartimaeus.
You should read "Sorcerer's Ascension" and all other books in the series. From your profile ( you are very funny btw I especially liked the this is this cat...) and the books you have read and written about I think you will like this series ( book 3 and 4 are especially funny) also suggestion for profile
When life gives you lemons... Lemon fight!
2/21/2012 c1 
8RAHbooks
Wow! If it weren't for the italics I wouldn't be able to tell what was from the book and what you added. Of course I've never actually read the book...Anyway, missing bits like this are what fanfiction is all about!
8RAHbooksWow! If it weren't for the italics I wouldn't be able to tell what was from the book and what you added. Of course I've never actually read the book...Anyway, missing bits like this are what fanfiction is all about!
2/20/2012 c1 5DarkAznVampZard-AnimeFreak67
I enjoy the scene, but it would be nice if it were longer. I would expect them to do some eye communication before kissing like that.
I think you should do one those alternate ending things. It would help the world.
5DarkAznVampZard-AnimeFreak67I enjoy the scene, but it would be nice if it were longer. I would expect them to do some eye communication before kissing like that.
I think you should do one those alternate ending things. It would help the world.