for Totally Spies: Working A Deep Cover10/25/2012 c17 
1ettenohjasomrehalliv
I do hope that you'll update soo, I really like the progress of the story. More power! :D
1ettenohjasomrehallivI do hope that you'll update soo, I really like the progress of the story. More power! :D
6/11/2012 c16 Guest
I found your story by chance and read all 16 chapters in two days. You are an epic writer, I love the mystery and suspence and the little side stories with Sam, Clover and Alex all liking Cole. You have the girls personalities down perfect from the show, and you leave your audience wanting more that's the mark of a good writer. Noticed the odd grammar mistakes early on but my grammar is rubbish, yours is way better.
Post again soon. Want more!
I found your story by chance and read all 16 chapters in two days. You are an epic writer, I love the mystery and suspence and the little side stories with Sam, Clover and Alex all liking Cole. You have the girls personalities down perfect from the show, and you leave your audience wanting more that's the mark of a good writer. Noticed the odd grammar mistakes early on but my grammar is rubbish, yours is way better.
Post again soon. Want more!
6/6/2012 c16 6Bearybeach
Nice. I've got to say; this story is getting better and better in every chapter.
And sorry about not reviewing earlier, I spent the day visiting a castle, Hearst Castle if you haven't heard of it. It's really beautiful.
Can't wait for the next update :)
Bearybeach
6BearybeachNice. I've got to say; this story is getting better and better in every chapter.
And sorry about not reviewing earlier, I spent the day visiting a castle, Hearst Castle if you haven't heard of it. It's really beautiful.
Can't wait for the next update :)
Bearybeach
5/27/2012 c15 Guest
Awesome
Awesome
4/16/2012 c14 5Mangafairy101
Ha? Why so soon? I can't believe it, Avalon already knows who he is! But i kinda have to admit, the urinal scene was so odd. I mean, the clicked "just like that" instantly, Avalon didn't even ask for his name or anything. Then all of a sudden, he wants he's bodyguards to leave as if he and Cole were long time buddies or wat not... Yep Cole! Avalon knows who you are! But how?
OMG Warlord, you have to update! I wanna know what happens next. This story is one irresistable magnet!
Please update, Si?
5Mangafairy101Ha? Why so soon? I can't believe it, Avalon already knows who he is! But i kinda have to admit, the urinal scene was so odd. I mean, the clicked "just like that" instantly, Avalon didn't even ask for his name or anything. Then all of a sudden, he wants he's bodyguards to leave as if he and Cole were long time buddies or wat not... Yep Cole! Avalon knows who you are! But how?
OMG Warlord, you have to update! I wanna know what happens next. This story is one irresistable magnet!
Please update, Si?
4/16/2012 c13 Mangafairy101
Great chapter. Very imaginative and fun to read!
Ahaha, I cant believe that Avalon is next door them! They should all brace themselves tonight...coz' all they'll be hearing is forever "Oh Avalon!" hehe.
Wwwhoa! So now its Alex who kisses Cole, and she turns red and gets all shy? *sigh* who's next? Samantha? Lol
Great chapter. Very imaginative and fun to read!
Ahaha, I cant believe that Avalon is next door them! They should all brace themselves tonight...coz' all they'll be hearing is forever "Oh Avalon!" hehe.
Wwwhoa! So now its Alex who kisses Cole, and she turns red and gets all shy? *sigh* who's next? Samantha? Lol
4/16/2012 c12 Mangafairy101
This Orient Express train sounds like fun, I could imagine everything!
Yeah Avalon is a total pervert, 8 young girls! That's more than a handful, he's a major glutton, never seems to get enough (I'll say!) Maybe those girls will be Avalon's sex part-timers, Ahaha!
And i can't believe that Clover kissed Cole after she made a pact with the girls. I have a feeling that this wont turn out so well...
This Orient Express train sounds like fun, I could imagine everything!
Yeah Avalon is a total pervert, 8 young girls! That's more than a handful, he's a major glutton, never seems to get enough (I'll say!) Maybe those girls will be Avalon's sex part-timers, Ahaha!
And i can't believe that Clover kissed Cole after she made a pact with the girls. I have a feeling that this wont turn out so well...
4/16/2012 c11 Mangafairy101
Lol the motel scene where that ponytailed man thought the girls were prostitutes made me laugh. And I see thier mission isn't yet over. They still need to spy on Avalon again on some train(forgot the train's name again *sigh*)
I so feel sorry for Cole. Sam, Alex and Clover are all over him, like a creepy crush/love tria...no! Rectangle or square, ahaha. This is so much fun!
Lol the motel scene where that ponytailed man thought the girls were prostitutes made me laugh. And I see thier mission isn't yet over. They still need to spy on Avalon again on some train(forgot the train's name again *sigh*)
I so feel sorry for Cole. Sam, Alex and Clover are all over him, like a creepy crush/love tria...no! Rectangle or square, ahaha. This is so much fun!