for Meant to Be4/20/2012 c7 
7battlevalkyrie
Oh no, no death for Seven. I'm re writing the end of the show. ;-) just so everyone knows, I hate the whole admiral timeline seven dying and Tuvok going crazy. I'm picking up after the picnic date and re writing the show, but I added that Belize didn't leave that episode did not happen, the Doctors book flop did happen. Yes of course, this is our beloved Doc drama will always ensue in his presence, but don't worry he's one of my favorite characters, ill do him justice. ;-) stay tuned folks and thanks for the reviews!
7battlevalkyrieOh no, no death for Seven. I'm re writing the end of the show. ;-) just so everyone knows, I hate the whole admiral timeline seven dying and Tuvok going crazy. I'm picking up after the picnic date and re writing the show, but I added that Belize didn't leave that episode did not happen, the Doctors book flop did happen. Yes of course, this is our beloved Doc drama will always ensue in his presence, but don't worry he's one of my favorite characters, ill do him justice. ;-) stay tuned folks and thanks for the reviews!
4/20/2012 c7 61scifiromance
I'm sorry I'm late, I was going to read this straight after I PM'd you but I got kicked off the computer!
Anyway, I loved this! Your tweaking worked out great, I prefer it to the episode. :) The idea of her just going into his quarters to prepare a meal for him was so romantic, I thought it was funny that he was thinking what a bad day he'd had and then as soon as he saw her in the dress and she kissed him he thought it was the best day ever! :) The crew's reactions were VERY well written, although I'm feeling a little worried there's going to be drama with the Doctor...
I'm glad the future Admiral didn't come in this chapter, I've been writing that so often I'm glad of a change. This doesn't mean Seven's going to die though does it? Hopefully their relationship will keep progressing! :)
I'm off to read your new fic now! :)
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61scifiromanceI'm sorry I'm late, I was going to read this straight after I PM'd you but I got kicked off the computer!
Anyway, I loved this! Your tweaking worked out great, I prefer it to the episode. :) The idea of her just going into his quarters to prepare a meal for him was so romantic, I thought it was funny that he was thinking what a bad day he'd had and then as soon as he saw her in the dress and she kissed him he thought it was the best day ever! :) The crew's reactions were VERY well written, although I'm feeling a little worried there's going to be drama with the Doctor...
I'm glad the future Admiral didn't come in this chapter, I've been writing that so often I'm glad of a change. This doesn't mean Seven's going to die though does it? Hopefully their relationship will keep progressing! :)
I'm off to read your new fic now! :)
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4/9/2012 c6 bookworm134
I'm really enjoying your view of things...I Hope you continue with this story...
Keep up the good work!
I'm really enjoying your view of things...I Hope you continue with this story...
Keep up the good work!
3/14/2012 c6 scifiromance
Aww, I really wish these scenes had been on the show! You wrote everyone so well. I loved how everyone noticed her happy and I think you're right about her relationships with Harry and B'Elanna. I also think this is exactly how Chakotay would've acted with her, and the fact that they watched "The Notebook" was so sweet. :)
WELL DONE! :D Please write more soon! I'm extremely glad you're making this longer!
Thanks for reviewing "The Talent of Dreaming" too. :)
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Aww, I really wish these scenes had been on the show! You wrote everyone so well. I loved how everyone noticed her happy and I think you're right about her relationships with Harry and B'Elanna. I also think this is exactly how Chakotay would've acted with her, and the fact that they watched "The Notebook" was so sweet. :)
WELL DONE! :D Please write more soon! I'm extremely glad you're making this longer!
Thanks for reviewing "The Talent of Dreaming" too. :)
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3/13/2012 c5 scifiromance
AWWW! :D This was beautiful, absolute perfection! I adore this, if I could favourite it several times over, I would! Her fears at the beginning were very understandable and well written, and Chakotay was so sweet and reassuring that I love him even more. :) I particularly liked how he spoke to her about the implants, how he compared himself and her was so in character it was exactly like the show! :) I wasn't expecting the Omega particle either, but it made perfect sense.
As if I would ever complain about long chapters, especially when they're this good! :D PLEASE write more SOON!
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AWWW! :D This was beautiful, absolute perfection! I adore this, if I could favourite it several times over, I would! Her fears at the beginning were very understandable and well written, and Chakotay was so sweet and reassuring that I love him even more. :) I particularly liked how he spoke to her about the implants, how he compared himself and her was so in character it was exactly like the show! :) I wasn't expecting the Omega particle either, but it made perfect sense.
As if I would ever complain about long chapters, especially when they're this good! :D PLEASE write more SOON!
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3/11/2012 c4 scifiromance
Aww, I LOVE it so much! I think this might be my fave chapter so far! :D Your writing of their thoughts is just so unbelievably insightful, I'm really impressed. A lot of brilliant characterisation, WELL DONE! :D
Thanks so much for all the reviews and don't worry about the time lapse, real life comes first. I'll try to update "The Talent of Dreaming" tomorrow and I just published the "Bonds of Love, Ties of Family" sequel, "Frontiers of Exile". I hope you like that too. :)
Off to read your new fic,
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Aww, I LOVE it so much! I think this might be my fave chapter so far! :D Your writing of their thoughts is just so unbelievably insightful, I'm really impressed. A lot of brilliant characterisation, WELL DONE! :D
Thanks so much for all the reviews and don't worry about the time lapse, real life comes first. I'll try to update "The Talent of Dreaming" tomorrow and I just published the "Bonds of Love, Ties of Family" sequel, "Frontiers of Exile". I hope you like that too. :)
Off to read your new fic,
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3/11/2012 c4 bellislefan
loved this chapter. i just hope they get over their feears and chakotay finds out about the fail safe before she gets hurt.
the holodeck is the ventu waterfall she liked is't it? XD
loved this chapter. i just hope they get over their feears and chakotay finds out about the fail safe before she gets hurt.
the holodeck is the ventu waterfall she liked is't it? XD
2/22/2012 c3 scifiromance
I love this more and more with each chapter! :) You're great at the banter between the Bridge crew, especially the Doctor and Tom's bickering, (that was just the kind of thing the Doctor would say!) and the leola root pizza, that was so funny!
I think you've hit the nail on the head with Janeway and Chakotay's relationship, those are the kind of thoughts I always imagined going through his head.
Yes, the layout is a lot better this time, much easier to read. Don't worry about it though, it took me a little while to figure out how to type for the site.
WELL DONE! :D PLEASE update SOON! (I'm getting repetitive with that request aren't I? lol.)
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I love this more and more with each chapter! :) You're great at the banter between the Bridge crew, especially the Doctor and Tom's bickering, (that was just the kind of thing the Doctor would say!) and the leola root pizza, that was so funny!
I think you've hit the nail on the head with Janeway and Chakotay's relationship, those are the kind of thoughts I always imagined going through his head.
Yes, the layout is a lot better this time, much easier to read. Don't worry about it though, it took me a little while to figure out how to type for the site.
WELL DONE! :D PLEASE update SOON! (I'm getting repetitive with that request aren't I? lol.)
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2/22/2012 c3 16xXSilent-CrescendoXx
I see you like Harry, I've never really explored him in my stories as a character before (I'm one of those people that found him to be quite a minimal character) so it's quite nice to have him get a little attention in a story.
I loved that thing about The Doctor 'If it's not about him it's not important' - so true, lol!
This was a really good second chapter, can't wait to get to the C/7 date!
16xXSilent-CrescendoXxI see you like Harry, I've never really explored him in my stories as a character before (I'm one of those people that found him to be quite a minimal character) so it's quite nice to have him get a little attention in a story.
I loved that thing about The Doctor 'If it's not about him it's not important' - so true, lol!
This was a really good second chapter, can't wait to get to the C/7 date!
2/22/2012 c2 61scifiromance
Aww, so sweet! They were very much in character, especially the line where Seven misunderstood and said "I don't understand, is there something wrong with the holo-imagers?" That was just the kind of thing she'd say, not wanting to get her hope up. I also liked how Chakotay kept note of how many times she blushed, that was cute. :) I can't wait to read about how their date goes! PLEASE update SOON! :D
Thank you so much for your lovely review, I'm glad you think I did your wonderful idea justice. Everyone who has reviewed commented on what a great idea it was, so thanks! :)
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PS. I did mention you in my author's notes for the chapter but my spell-checker deleted your pen name and I didn't notice, I'll go and correct that now.
61scifiromanceAww, so sweet! They were very much in character, especially the line where Seven misunderstood and said "I don't understand, is there something wrong with the holo-imagers?" That was just the kind of thing she'd say, not wanting to get her hope up. I also liked how Chakotay kept note of how many times she blushed, that was cute. :) I can't wait to read about how their date goes! PLEASE update SOON! :D
Thank you so much for your lovely review, I'm glad you think I did your wonderful idea justice. Everyone who has reviewed commented on what a great idea it was, so thanks! :)
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PS. I did mention you in my author's notes for the chapter but my spell-checker deleted your pen name and I didn't notice, I'll go and correct that now.
2/22/2012 c2 bellislefan
just read meant to be and i think it's great can't wait for the next chapter.
just read meant to be and i think it's great can't wait for the next chapter.
2/21/2012 c1 16xXSilent-CrescendoXx
Hiya!
First of all, welcome to the C/7 community, lol. It's always nice to see new 'blood', as it were. What are you talking about 'huge blunders'? I saw absolutely nothing wrong with this, it's a fantastic first chapter!
I loved that sneaky little dig at the Captain; I always thought it was weird that Harry never got promoted. I suppose there was no real need for him to be, but at times it would have been nice for Voyager's eternal optimist to have a little pick-me-up.
And then there's the potential of Chakotay and Seven's first date, I can't wait to see where you go with this one. :)
I mean it, it's a great start to your first fic, thanks for posting. ^_^
16xXSilent-CrescendoXxHiya!
First of all, welcome to the C/7 community, lol. It's always nice to see new 'blood', as it were. What are you talking about 'huge blunders'? I saw absolutely nothing wrong with this, it's a fantastic first chapter!
I loved that sneaky little dig at the Captain; I always thought it was weird that Harry never got promoted. I suppose there was no real need for him to be, but at times it would have been nice for Voyager's eternal optimist to have a little pick-me-up.
And then there's the potential of Chakotay and Seven's first date, I can't wait to see where you go with this one. :)
I mean it, it's a great start to your first fic, thanks for posting. ^_^
2/21/2012 c1 61scifiromance
Awww, this is so sweet! WELL DONE so far, this has a lot of promise. :) Your characterisation of Chakotay was really well done, him pondering about the Captain's reluctance to promote Harry showed his relationship with her, always hoping she'd be reasonable. Of course, his thoughts about Seven were perfect, you had him thinking about why his feelings had changed, his worries for her, then his decision to act on them! :D
PLEASE keep writing this! This is brilliant for a very first fic and I can't wait for more! :) I'll put this on the C/7 community and promote it in my next chapter, which will be the first chapter of your "ballerina" fic, that idea was lovely, I just HAVE to start writing that today! :)
Thanks,
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61scifiromanceAwww, this is so sweet! WELL DONE so far, this has a lot of promise. :) Your characterisation of Chakotay was really well done, him pondering about the Captain's reluctance to promote Harry showed his relationship with her, always hoping she'd be reasonable. Of course, his thoughts about Seven were perfect, you had him thinking about why his feelings had changed, his worries for her, then his decision to act on them! :D
PLEASE keep writing this! This is brilliant for a very first fic and I can't wait for more! :) I'll put this on the C/7 community and promote it in my next chapter, which will be the first chapter of your "ballerina" fic, that idea was lovely, I just HAVE to start writing that today! :)
Thanks,
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