for Believe in Me12/31/2012 c1 
6Skye Izumi
Now that was totally unepected, but for ssome reason it works.
Making Red a CPU, but it gives an explaination for her search, her past. Even if it is a fan explaination, it works.
Secondly I really laughed when the DBZ refereneces came up.
6Skye IzumiNow that was totally unepected, but for ssome reason it works.
Making Red a CPU, but it gives an explaination for her search, her past. Even if it is a fan explaination, it works.
Secondly I really laughed when the DBZ refereneces came up.
4/25/2012 c1 13Perfect Beauty
This story is very interesting. You did a good job being detailed. I liked it.
13Perfect BeautyThis story is very interesting. You did a good job being detailed. I liked it.
4/25/2012 c1 37Whiitewolf
This was a great read. I already really like the character IF.
It was sweet, and I felt a connection with the story, despite it not being very long.
I also enjoyed the fight scene. It's not often you find one well done. They normally end up awkward. But yours was great.
A fantastic read, and I definitely enjoyed it. :)
37WhiitewolfThis was a great read. I already really like the character IF.
It was sweet, and I felt a connection with the story, despite it not being very long.
I also enjoyed the fight scene. It's not often you find one well done. They normally end up awkward. But yours was great.
A fantastic read, and I definitely enjoyed it. :)
4/20/2012 c1 14ChibiSoulReader
Aww *tear* that was so sweet. The more of these stories I read the more I fall in love with the characters. Awesome fight scene by the way, I like it's descriptions. I hope you write more like this~
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14ChibiSoulReaderAww *tear* that was so sweet. The more of these stories I read the more I fall in love with the characters. Awesome fight scene by the way, I like it's descriptions. I hope you write more like this~
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4/19/2012 c1 12. Jhuoiiy Marie Boboli
^_^ ..Aw, EeeOo0h.
How sweet ;)
Is this just a game or is there a series of this?
...I just googled for images of these two.
They look SO young.
You did awesomenessfully with this thaaang..
xD
I like!
12. Jhuoiiy Marie Boboli^_^ ..Aw, EeeOo0h.
How sweet ;)
Is this just a game or is there a series of this?
...I just googled for images of these two.
They look SO young.
You did awesomenessfully with this thaaang..
xD
I like!
4/19/2012 c1 10Dzuljeta
This was an interesting story... although the fandom means nothing to me, I liked the way you described things ;)
10DzuljetaThis was an interesting story... although the fandom means nothing to me, I liked the way you described things ;)
4/18/2012 c1 42Akela Victoire
Not bad at all! No grammar/spelling errors that I can see, it ran smoothly... Great work!
42Akela VictoireNot bad at all! No grammar/spelling errors that I can see, it ran smoothly... Great work!
4/1/2012 c1 1Nue7
You're so much better than me!
Anyways, Is this based off Rednal's comics on the NIS America forums?
1Nue7You're so much better than me!
Anyways, Is this based off Rednal's comics on the NIS America forums?
3/4/2012 c1 Yue Yami
Wouldn't it be great if this was put in the sequel but sadly it won't come to be.
Good job at keeping IF's somewhat hesitance to RED's wifey calling.
But I wish she accepted for real instead out of humor in the game.
Wouldn't it be great if this was put in the sequel but sadly it won't come to be.
Good job at keeping IF's somewhat hesitance to RED's wifey calling.
But I wish she accepted for real instead out of humor in the game.
2/25/2012 c1 Solias
If only it was like this in the original.
Red and IF are my favorite couple.
If only it was like this in the original.
Red and IF are my favorite couple.
2/22/2012 c1 Kuroiame7
This was a great story. This is my favorite pairing that invoves IF. You did a great job.
This was a great story. This is my favorite pairing that invoves IF. You did a great job.