for She remembers3/15/2012 c1
7bmkenny
First thing to say i REALLY liked the way that you started it, like a small introduction of Donna; but in particular i liked the way that you describe her grandfather's way to react to the whole thing because it's a little obvious that he does have that pity in this eyes when he looks at Donna even on the show and specially on the last episode of Donna's season.
Loved when you said 'skinny man and a blue box' just made me laugh. and the way that you ended the story with her remembering everything, but somehow you should try to explain why she didn't die like the Doctor thought she would and all of that (: Keep going (:
7bmkennyFirst thing to say i REALLY liked the way that you started it, like a small introduction of Donna; but in particular i liked the way that you describe her grandfather's way to react to the whole thing because it's a little obvious that he does have that pity in this eyes when he looks at Donna even on the show and specially on the last episode of Donna's season.
Loved when you said 'skinny man and a blue box' just made me laugh. and the way that you ended the story with her remembering everything, but somehow you should try to explain why she didn't die like the Doctor thought she would and all of that (: Keep going (:
