for jO beKKe at hUgWurts with Commentary!12/13/2012 c1 
2Nuala Gale
The mystery sentence, in case it has not yet been translated, attempts to state, "I thought we'd stopped it!" Wow, this is a bit much, isn't it? Did someone really write this?
2Nuala GaleThe mystery sentence, in case it has not yet been translated, attempts to state, "I thought we'd stopped it!" Wow, this is a bit much, isn't it? Did someone really write this?
11/2/2012 c1 4Flora11
Oooook... Seriously, did this person know how to spell? And I believe it is Professor Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. Not... Whatever they 'wrote.' We need a translator!
Peace out (a really unpleasantly suprised) Flora11.
4Flora11Oooook... Seriously, did this person know how to spell? And I believe it is Professor Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. Not... Whatever they 'wrote.' We need a translator!
Peace out (a really unpleasantly suprised) Flora11.
5/27/2012 c2 julia
Wow... this is the worst fanfiction I have ever heard of... Is the original deleted? Surely, surely she MUST be trying to be horibble on purpose! Now, you see this is exactly the kind of fanfiction that gives dedicated writers a bad reputation.
As much as her writing is repulsive, though, don't put up commentaries like this. I've seen a good lot of them, mind you. And none of them are very pretty. I'd rather you ignore her, get a good few writing ideas, and do some good to this site; the best writers are getting fewer and fewer, now - what has the world come to?
Ah, well. Write on.
Wow... this is the worst fanfiction I have ever heard of... Is the original deleted? Surely, surely she MUST be trying to be horibble on purpose! Now, you see this is exactly the kind of fanfiction that gives dedicated writers a bad reputation.
As much as her writing is repulsive, though, don't put up commentaries like this. I've seen a good lot of them, mind you. And none of them are very pretty. I'd rather you ignore her, get a good few writing ideas, and do some good to this site; the best writers are getting fewer and fewer, now - what has the world come to?
Ah, well. Write on.
4/17/2012 c1 5DracoLover156
THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE WORST STORY IN HISTORY! JO BELL IS A FREAKING MARY-SUE! AND THE GRAMMAR IS WRONG...-dies- Thank you for commenting on it... -dies-
5DracoLover156THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE WORST STORY IN HISTORY! JO BELL IS A FREAKING MARY-SUE! AND THE GRAMMAR IS WRONG...-dies- Thank you for commenting on it... -dies-
4/15/2012 c1 Radha
Hi. We have a problem here... jo bel has reposted...*sigh* can we never defeat this troll?
Link (remember to take out spaces etc.): w w w (.) fanfiction (.) net / u/ 3902585/ jo _ be l2
Hi. We have a problem here... jo bel has reposted...*sigh* can we never defeat this troll?
Link (remember to take out spaces etc.): w w w (.) fanfiction (.) net / u/ 3902585/ jo _ be l2
4/13/2012 c1 7GothKat2SlashFan
M-my eyes… I swear… this is worse than My Immortal… at least My Immortal makes a little sense…a little… I'm supporting you, author. I'm hoping you haven't lost your sanity, and I'm glad that jo bel's account has been deleted…
Just checking: is your sanity still there?
7GothKat2SlashFanM-my eyes… I swear… this is worse than My Immortal… at least My Immortal makes a little sense…a little… I'm supporting you, author. I'm hoping you haven't lost your sanity, and I'm glad that jo bel's account has been deleted…
Just checking: is your sanity still there?
3/31/2012 c2 5Maharani Radha
O.O Shortest chapter in the world! YEAH! But so offensive. Geez! She's a jerk!
5Maharani RadhaO.O Shortest chapter in the world! YEAH! But so offensive. Geez! She's a jerk!
3/17/2012 c1 8DragongirlM
I legitimately CHOKED on this fic. Who wrote this? Ah well, great commentary; keep it up! :)
8DragongirlMI legitimately CHOKED on this fic. Who wrote this? Ah well, great commentary; keep it up! :)
2/26/2012 c1 5Maharani Radha
? MORE HP ABUSE? Ai Valar! I thought we were PAST this with My Immortal. Apparently not. Ok...what the hell did I just read? Seriously, what did I read? This has worse spelling and grammar than My Immortal. SOMEBODY had better tell the author to leave before I start swearing in Hindi. Trust me, you don't want that.
Where did you find this?
5Maharani Radha? MORE HP ABUSE? Ai Valar! I thought we were PAST this with My Immortal. Apparently not. Ok...what the hell did I just read? Seriously, what did I read? This has worse spelling and grammar than My Immortal. SOMEBODY had better tell the author to leave before I start swearing in Hindi. Trust me, you don't want that.
Where did you find this?
2/25/2012 c1 Justmeagain123
this has got to be the tied-worst story I've ever read (with Imma Wiserd and My Immortal). But the commentary was funny :)))
this has got to be the tied-worst story I've ever read (with Imma Wiserd and My Immortal). But the commentary was funny :)))
2/22/2012 c1 K Finance
Oh dear lord! Umm, I had never read or heard about this crap fic and I mourn the loss of that innocence. I think this might be worse than "My Immortal" (assuming that is possible in the world of crap fics).
I, like you read that sentence a few times over...and I still have no idea what it's supposed to say. (?)
K Finance
P.S. Since when did Dumbeldor have black hair. {the books even say that when he was young (when Tom Riddle was at Hogwarts) he had auburn hair!}
Oh dear lord! Umm, I had never read or heard about this crap fic and I mourn the loss of that innocence. I think this might be worse than "My Immortal" (assuming that is possible in the world of crap fics).
I, like you read that sentence a few times over...and I still have no idea what it's supposed to say. (?)
K Finance
P.S. Since when did Dumbeldor have black hair. {the books even say that when he was young (when Tom Riddle was at Hogwarts) he had auburn hair!}