for The Adventures of Tintin and Juliet II12/8/2012 c6 Rose
Oh my Buddha! Your Tintin stories hqve been the first ones Ive read and their AWESOME *-* Continue
Oh my Buddha! Your Tintin stories hqve been the first ones Ive read and their AWESOME *-* Continue
9/28/2012 c4
4Fnuggi
man, I really, really hope you'll update this soon - can't wait to read what happens next
4Fnuggiman, I really, really hope you'll update this soon - can't wait to read what happens next
9/4/2012 c5 Guest
Ever going to finish?
Ever going to finish?
7/3/2012 c5
1Pink-Pencil-Girl303
Don't be silly, I'm sure no one hates you! I'm just glad that you didn't give up on this story, because it's really good! :)
This was a really great chapter; long and interesting. But the mob guy's New York accent confused me a lot. Did I miss something huge? Because I thought they were in Belgium! Because Juliet lives there... right? In that case, the mob guys wouldn't have New York accents, as good as it might sound. Actually, I'm not sure if there's a Belgium mafia, but it's something worth looking into. And if you want to go with a more well-known European mafia branch, your options are endless! English, French, Italian, Irish, etc... But an American mafia family in Belgium just doesn't make sense.
But maybe I'm a dolt, I did miss something huge, and they are in America, in which case I'm sorry. :/ The mob guys are well-written! Anyway, as for the main part of the story it's getting really interesting! I can't wait for the next update when we get to talk to Juliet's father (hopefully)! ;D
1Pink-Pencil-Girl303Don't be silly, I'm sure no one hates you! I'm just glad that you didn't give up on this story, because it's really good! :)
This was a really great chapter; long and interesting. But the mob guy's New York accent confused me a lot. Did I miss something huge? Because I thought they were in Belgium! Because Juliet lives there... right? In that case, the mob guys wouldn't have New York accents, as good as it might sound. Actually, I'm not sure if there's a Belgium mafia, but it's something worth looking into. And if you want to go with a more well-known European mafia branch, your options are endless! English, French, Italian, Irish, etc... But an American mafia family in Belgium just doesn't make sense.
But maybe I'm a dolt, I did miss something huge, and they are in America, in which case I'm sorry. :/ The mob guys are well-written! Anyway, as for the main part of the story it's getting really interesting! I can't wait for the next update when we get to talk to Juliet's father (hopefully)! ;D
6/23/2012 c1
1lovesmysteries.girl
It's good! I will keep reading it. But for now, I'm busy searching for tintin fanfics...
1lovesmysteries.girlIt's good! I will keep reading it. But for now, I'm busy searching for tintin fanfics...
5/8/2012 c4
4Samurai-Mina
Ah ! The suspense... You know, it's pretty mean to do that to your readers ! But then again, I kind of do the same with mines so ... Hehe..
Anyway, that chapter was so .. wow. I can't describe it in words ! At the beginning, with Tintin and Juliet that got into a ... compromised situation.. (Juliet, you naughty little girl !) and at the end, when they found out that the bad guy (Can't remember his name Dx) isn't (Maybe) so bad after all !
It's like you put a delicious piece of meat right in front of Snowy's nose but just out of his reach so he can't have it ! Ahh! It's not fare ! I want to know what happens next ! Argh !
-_-' Okay, I think I should calm down .. So, until then, I'll wait for your next chapter !
Mina
4Samurai-MinaAh ! The suspense... You know, it's pretty mean to do that to your readers ! But then again, I kind of do the same with mines so ... Hehe..
Anyway, that chapter was so .. wow. I can't describe it in words ! At the beginning, with Tintin and Juliet that got into a ... compromised situation.. (Juliet, you naughty little girl !) and at the end, when they found out that the bad guy (Can't remember his name Dx) isn't (Maybe) so bad after all !
It's like you put a delicious piece of meat right in front of Snowy's nose but just out of his reach so he can't have it ! Ahh! It's not fare ! I want to know what happens next ! Argh !
-_-' Okay, I think I should calm down .. So, until then, I'll wait for your next chapter !
Mina
5/6/2012 c4
1Pink-Pencil-Girl303
Whoa, this story is finally heating up! :D That was a pretty hot kiss scene with Tintin and Juliet; you wrote that very well! As far as the mystery goes, it's a bit slow-moving, but the plot is picking up now so I think it's going to get really exciting soon! Confused!Juliet is interesting to read, and your portrayal of emotions was very realistic in this chapter. My favourite part by far was imagining Tintin sitting on the couch with his shirt unbuttoned, wondering if he should button it back up! lol! :D Please update with more soon, I'll be waiting eagerly!
1Pink-Pencil-Girl303Whoa, this story is finally heating up! :D That was a pretty hot kiss scene with Tintin and Juliet; you wrote that very well! As far as the mystery goes, it's a bit slow-moving, but the plot is picking up now so I think it's going to get really exciting soon! Confused!Juliet is interesting to read, and your portrayal of emotions was very realistic in this chapter. My favourite part by far was imagining Tintin sitting on the couch with his shirt unbuttoned, wondering if he should button it back up! lol! :D Please update with more soon, I'll be waiting eagerly!
5/2/2012 c4
5blarglemuffin
I was waiting for the an intimate moment between them like this. So angsty, I love it.
5blarglemuffinI was waiting for the an intimate moment between them like this. So angsty, I love it.
4/30/2012 c3
4Flora11
I like it, but it doesn't have the same greatness that your 1st story had. I didn't find it as capturing or exciting. It was still ok, but your writing was... different.
Peace out Flora11.
4Flora11I like it, but it doesn't have the same greatness that your 1st story had. I didn't find it as capturing or exciting. It was still ok, but your writing was... different.
Peace out Flora11.
4/24/2012 c3
4Samurai-Mina
Woh, that was a pretty sad chapter ! I almost cried ! Poor Juliet...
But when Richard and Snowy played together, that was so adorable ! And the professor Calculus always make me laugh a lot. But if I was Tintin, I would want to punch him ... -_-' Anyway, great chapter, has always !
Mina
4Samurai-MinaWoh, that was a pretty sad chapter ! I almost cried ! Poor Juliet...
But when Richard and Snowy played together, that was so adorable ! And the professor Calculus always make me laugh a lot. But if I was Tintin, I would want to punch him ... -_-' Anyway, great chapter, has always !
Mina
4/16/2012 c2 Samurai-Mina
Yeah ! The sequel ! :P Like it so far ! Great style here too ! And I really like your character Juliet, she has a strong personality.
Hope Tintin and Juliet can finally have their date !
Can“t wait for the next one !
Yeah ! The sequel ! :P Like it so far ! Great style here too ! And I really like your character Juliet, she has a strong personality.
Hope Tintin and Juliet can finally have their date !
Can“t wait for the next one !
4/3/2012 c2
3Aasura-chan
Just like I said at your previous story, I really like your style and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Juliet and Tintin are cute and the plot seems interesting again. :)
Story goes to fav and alert list for sure. :D
Keep up the good work! :)
3Aasura-chanJust like I said at your previous story, I really like your style and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Juliet and Tintin are cute and the plot seems interesting again. :)
Story goes to fav and alert list for sure. :D
Keep up the good work! :)
3/31/2012 c2
4MissGuardianAngel
Aww. You and your cliff hangers. But I can't get enough of this story! Please update.
4MissGuardianAngelAww. You and your cliff hangers. But I can't get enough of this story! Please update.
