for Gunslinger5/16 c6 Iprefertoread86
More more more! Well written and I love stories of modern man sucked into a game world. More!
More more more! Well written and I love stories of modern man sucked into a game world. More!
2/22 c5 Guest
Wow this seems really good so far! Please keep it up!
Wow this seems really good so far! Please keep it up!
4/18/2012 c4 
18White Phantom
What a dastardly fellow. it's going to be interesting when he meets with the hero.
update soon!
18White PhantomWhat a dastardly fellow. it's going to be interesting when he meets with the hero.
update soon!
4/17/2012 c4 Artjr
I can honestly say, you had me interested in this story at the first chapter, but its very slow going. Also with the fact that...well, with chapter 3, I'm kinda turned off to the story. The very slow pace is a part of the problem, but not as much as the content; for instance, what is the point of James' being in Azeroth other than to wander around and eventually do Elune's bidding? The gore isn't really an issue since this is World of Warcraft where walking dead still eat people when caught or someone gets tortured by Scarlet Crusade for being "tainted". I don't want to be rude, but I dont believe that this story is going to be a very popular or waited for story as is. I'll gladly put it on alert just in case you improve it, but I won't hurt myself waiting for an update.
I can honestly say, you had me interested in this story at the first chapter, but its very slow going. Also with the fact that...well, with chapter 3, I'm kinda turned off to the story. The very slow pace is a part of the problem, but not as much as the content; for instance, what is the point of James' being in Azeroth other than to wander around and eventually do Elune's bidding? The gore isn't really an issue since this is World of Warcraft where walking dead still eat people when caught or someone gets tortured by Scarlet Crusade for being "tainted". I don't want to be rude, but I dont believe that this story is going to be a very popular or waited for story as is. I'll gladly put it on alert just in case you improve it, but I won't hurt myself waiting for an update.
4/16/2012 c4 Big Pierce
Good job again on the story! I think that it seemed a little rushed, but that was probably me reading it that quickly out of eagerness for the new story. The horror aspect was a change, for the better if I may add, and I liked it. The only thing really, is that the gore might turn off some readers, but other than that, it was a wonderful addition to the story and I can't wait for the next part!
Good job again on the story! I think that it seemed a little rushed, but that was probably me reading it that quickly out of eagerness for the new story. The horror aspect was a change, for the better if I may add, and I liked it. The only thing really, is that the gore might turn off some readers, but other than that, it was a wonderful addition to the story and I can't wait for the next part!
4/13/2012 c3 18White Phantom
I like your story so far :)
The detail in the beginning where he was dying was excellent and I loved the way you portrayed Elune. I'm also intrigued by how you've introduced what I expect is the villain.
You do have a few typos, but they don't really detract from the story much. The story is interesting and makes up for it.
Update soon!
18White PhantomI like your story so far :)
The detail in the beginning where he was dying was excellent and I loved the way you portrayed Elune. I'm also intrigued by how you've introduced what I expect is the villain.
You do have a few typos, but they don't really detract from the story much. The story is interesting and makes up for it.
Update soon!