for Obsessions3/14/2012 c1 Phoebe Sophia
This is great, I really enjoy how you write these, almost poetic. Please update soon!
This is great, I really enjoy how you write these, almost poetic. Please update soon!
3/14/2012 c2 
3Midnight Phantasma
Nice!XD You did an awesome job on Undergrowth! It stayed true to his character, though in my opinion he's pretty phsychotic!;) No shocker that he's a ghost now^^ Lol!
Good job and I can't wait for your next update!XD
GBY
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P.S. You think you can do Pariah Dark at some point?
3Midnight PhantasmaNice!XD You did an awesome job on Undergrowth! It stayed true to his character, though in my opinion he's pretty phsychotic!;) No shocker that he's a ghost now^^ Lol!
Good job and I can't wait for your next update!XD
GBY
-MP
P.S. You think you can do Pariah Dark at some point?
3/14/2012 c2 23Fluehatraya
Aww, Undergrowth sounded so lonely and detached from humanity as a "flesh-walker". Even his name for humans suggests that, regardless of whether or not he's a ghost.
This was a good chapter, and I am looking forward to the next.
Must . . . resist urge . . . to admit that . . . plants are superior!
23FluehatrayaAww, Undergrowth sounded so lonely and detached from humanity as a "flesh-walker". Even his name for humans suggests that, regardless of whether or not he's a ghost.
This was a good chapter, and I am looking forward to the next.
Must . . . resist urge . . . to admit that . . . plants are superior!
3/11/2012 c1 3Midnight Phantasma
Very interesting, I've always liked reading about the motives behind ghosts' actions and I like this one very much ^-^
You did an awesome job on this;) I can't wait for the next update and do you think you could do Undergrowth next? I'm very curious as to what you would come up with for him;D
Thanks for the fab read;)
GBY
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3Midnight PhantasmaVery interesting, I've always liked reading about the motives behind ghosts' actions and I like this one very much ^-^
You did an awesome job on this;) I can't wait for the next update and do you think you could do Undergrowth next? I'm very curious as to what you would come up with for him;D
Thanks for the fab read;)
GBY
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2/28/2012 c1 9PandaInTheStars
Wow. In all the cartoonishness of Danny Phantom it's easy to forget that all the ghosts had actual lives before they died. You did an excellent job of portraying Nocturne's motives. I can't wait to see you do more ghosts! It's always fun to flesh out somewhat two-dimensional characters.
9PandaInTheStarsWow. In all the cartoonishness of Danny Phantom it's easy to forget that all the ghosts had actual lives before they died. You did an excellent job of portraying Nocturne's motives. I can't wait to see you do more ghosts! It's always fun to flesh out somewhat two-dimensional characters.
2/23/2012 c1 3Assassin4life
O.O Thats all I have to say. I loved it so much! I had always loved Nocturne and wondered how he bece a ghost, it seemed fitting that he died wanting to dream the ending was the best part!
3Assassin4lifeO.O Thats all I have to say. I loved it so much! I had always loved Nocturne and wondered how he bece a ghost, it seemed fitting that he died wanting to dream the ending was the best part!