for The Adventures of the Hidden Child5/9/2012 c15 James Birdsong
Cool six chapters
Cool six chapters
5/8/2012 c15 
2Deany-Elle
I've been reading this for some time and haven't reviewed, sorry for being so rude. I love this story and it's really nice going to my email and seeing you have updated. Cassandra is an endearing character and I like how she is not without faults. It is nice to see that someone seems to agree with me that a child growing up with Holmes as a guardian would harbour his love of knowledge and develop considerable deductive powers of their own. Although Holmes can be seen OCC I do agree with you that anyone would change, if ever so slightly, to accomodate a child. But apart from that he is very well characterised. I think it's sweet to see the two on Christmas and this chapter was very well written, which brings me to another point; I admire how Cassandra's speech is kept Victorian, as it should be. I look forward to more updates and keep up the fantastic work.
2Deany-ElleI've been reading this for some time and haven't reviewed, sorry for being so rude. I love this story and it's really nice going to my email and seeing you have updated. Cassandra is an endearing character and I like how she is not without faults. It is nice to see that someone seems to agree with me that a child growing up with Holmes as a guardian would harbour his love of knowledge and develop considerable deductive powers of their own. Although Holmes can be seen OCC I do agree with you that anyone would change, if ever so slightly, to accomodate a child. But apart from that he is very well characterised. I think it's sweet to see the two on Christmas and this chapter was very well written, which brings me to another point; I admire how Cassandra's speech is kept Victorian, as it should be. I look forward to more updates and keep up the fantastic work.
4/23/2012 c13 Sup25
Chapter 13 was amazing! I loved the plot and How in the end Holmes did Help Jess. Pleas keep writing And post soon, I'm ding to read the next chapter's. Keep writing.
Chapter 13 was amazing! I loved the plot and How in the end Holmes did Help Jess. Pleas keep writing And post soon, I'm ding to read the next chapter's. Keep writing.
4/21/2012 c13 allonsy
Namaste.
My heart's still pounding hard.
It was amazing .. just wow.
I actually cried!
Superbly written and great imagination.
Although Mr. Holmes is not what Mr. Sherlock Holmes really is.
But it was fantastic.
Right from the first chapter, i coudnt stop reading even though i have an english exam due day after tomorrow.
Waiting eagerly for the new chapter.
And i know you imagined the Jeremy Brett's Sherlock in this one. Well, i imagined Benedict. It was quite funny in few places.
Namaste.
My heart's still pounding hard.
It was amazing .. just wow.
I actually cried!
Superbly written and great imagination.
Although Mr. Holmes is not what Mr. Sherlock Holmes really is.
But it was fantastic.
Right from the first chapter, i coudnt stop reading even though i have an english exam due day after tomorrow.
Waiting eagerly for the new chapter.
And i know you imagined the Jeremy Brett's Sherlock in this one. Well, i imagined Benedict. It was quite funny in few places.
4/7/2012 c11 Sherlockian
Well I never thought I was going to be this hooked on the story, but I am! It keeps getting better and better, of course there are some spelling errors, but nothing that hinders the reader. Keep up the good work.
Well I never thought I was going to be this hooked on the story, but I am! It keeps getting better and better, of course there are some spelling errors, but nothing that hinders the reader. Keep up the good work.
4/5/2012 c10 2bravehearttegan
'I stayed still. He had never done anything like this before and I was confused by it. I tried to understand what he was doing, but I couldn't. I squeezed my eyes closed and tried to control my breathing. I listened to Homes' heart, counting the beats, then moved unto counting the number of breaths he took.' ... Bloody-hell, wish I came up with those lines in my stroies! YAY for GREAT writing!
Tegan
2bravehearttegan'I stayed still. He had never done anything like this before and I was confused by it. I tried to understand what he was doing, but I couldn't. I squeezed my eyes closed and tried to control my breathing. I listened to Homes' heart, counting the beats, then moved unto counting the number of breaths he took.' ... Bloody-hell, wish I came up with those lines in my stroies! YAY for GREAT writing!
Tegan
3/31/2012 c9 James Birdsong
Very cool fanfic. Very good nine chapters
Very cool fanfic. Very good nine chapters
3/31/2012 c9 Sherlockian
Interesting! Love the relationship between Cassandra and Mycroft. Can't wait to read more of them and see how they develop.
Interesting! Love the relationship between Cassandra and Mycroft. Can't wait to read more of them and see how they develop.
3/30/2012 c1 i hate you
NO. YOU ARE A MORON! HE WOULDVE GIVEN THE CHILD TO SOMEONE ELSE HOLMES IS NOT THE TYPE TO WIPE SNOTTY NOSES AND FEED BABY BOTTLES! ALTHOUGH HE DOES SHOW CARE FOR WATSON IN ONE STORY THATS BECAUSE HE'S KNOWN HIM FOR YEARS! HE WOULD NOT TAKE A BABY IN THAT HE FOUND OUT IN THE RAIN ANY MORE THAN HE WOULD GET MARRIED (FOR LOVE)! And your grammer sucks btw.
NO. YOU ARE A MORON! HE WOULDVE GIVEN THE CHILD TO SOMEONE ELSE HOLMES IS NOT THE TYPE TO WIPE SNOTTY NOSES AND FEED BABY BOTTLES! ALTHOUGH HE DOES SHOW CARE FOR WATSON IN ONE STORY THATS BECAUSE HE'S KNOWN HIM FOR YEARS! HE WOULD NOT TAKE A BABY IN THAT HE FOUND OUT IN THE RAIN ANY MORE THAN HE WOULD GET MARRIED (FOR LOVE)! And your grammer sucks btw.
3/13/2012 c7 Irene Holmes
Loved this chapter, so much!xD
Loved this chapter, so much!xD
3/8/2012 c5 Irene Holmes
Fantastic story! Update soon please!xD
Fantastic story! Update soon please!xD
3/8/2012 c4 Irene Holmes
Awesome chapter, Cassandra is too cute!^.^
Awesome chapter, Cassandra is too cute!^.^
3/8/2012 c3 Irene Holmes
Crazy amounts of love for this story!xD
Crazy amounts of love for this story!xD