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5/18 c24 On-ri
OMG! Such a lovely ending to such a drama filled story... Almost cried tears of joy here but unfortunately I'm not quite that dramatic :P

Still an amazing story but I'm quite sad that it is all over :(
5/4 c13 lalalalalllala
WHAT!? and AWESOME
5/4 c24 Guest
Holy ZEUS! You honestly could not have came up with a better ending, that was perfect! Is was amazing, and cute, and just adorable!
5/3 c21 Guest
You know, if you changed up the last sentence a bit it could be the ending right there. Not that I would want it to be!
5/3 c18 Guest
Are they going to take up the care home?!
5/3 c12 Guest
I knew that was going to be the rule as soon as Percy told Thalia Chiron needed to talk to them. It is a reasonable rule and orphanages (even though this isn't a orphanage) and care home probably have that rule, but this is FAN FICTION! You don't need to be realistic in fan fiction!
5/3 c11 Guest
Awwww! Cute chapter! And the underwater kiss thing in the last chapter was clever! Very very clever, if I am being honest! Did you plan that ahead, when you said it started raining or did you think of that when you were writing the end?
5/3 c7 Guest
I had to do that too! I read "It doesn't matter", then I read some of the next line before going back and asking myself, wait! who said that!?
5/1 c20 GeekyGreekForEver
I loved it! You are an amazing author. I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes. I just love your stories. You are one of my favorite authors.
4/28 c18 GeekyGreekForEver
Oh no. The care home is abandoned. What shall we do? So what? Its a care home.
4/28 c17 GeekyGreekForEver
Ha. I like drunk Percy. I don't know why but... You know why right?
4/28 c14 GeekyGreekForEver
Awesome! So romantic. They run away... Ah.
4/25 c10 Owlyone
really? underwater kiss?
4/19 c24 2Percabeth66
congrats u have succided in making me cry:'C great story.
4/12 c24 4The H.E
AWESOME! I love it so much! Percy is SO SWEET! Oh my gosh! I hope I meet someone like him someday! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! AHHH!
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