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4PhoenixFireFourteen
such a beautiful story, cant believe you killed Scorpius! but u had a good reason :)
4PhoenixFireFourteensuch a beautiful story, cant believe you killed Scorpius! but u had a good reason :)
4/30 c12 Guest
HaHa Mean Girls reference
HaHa Mean Girls reference
3/29 c11 44slightlysmall
YAY! ALBUS/ELLA! I was waiting for this part to happen because it makes me very very happy. Next, on to the Scorrose! K? K. Thanks, Nayla! Loved this chapter. So much happiness. all the making out and awesomeness and such. (ugh, my reviews are getting shorter. Sorry about that! Only a few more chapters and I'll be to the part I haven't read yet. Promise.)
44slightlysmallYAY! ALBUS/ELLA! I was waiting for this part to happen because it makes me very very happy. Next, on to the Scorrose! K? K. Thanks, Nayla! Loved this chapter. So much happiness. all the making out and awesomeness and such. (ugh, my reviews are getting shorter. Sorry about that! Only a few more chapters and I'll be to the part I haven't read yet. Promise.)
3/29 c10 slightlysmall
Since you are deaf, maybe I should shout my review... eh. Maybe not. This was awhile ago. :)
I think you handled this well. I love the way that Rose has her talk to Carina and Leah for advice, but it just blows up in her face and screws everything up worse... and Ella trying to go back with the razor makes sense and sucks and I'm glad Rose caught her before she did. Great work on this! (Except that now maybe I'll have I Kissed a Girl stuck in my head...)
Since you are deaf, maybe I should shout my review... eh. Maybe not. This was awhile ago. :)
I think you handled this well. I love the way that Rose has her talk to Carina and Leah for advice, but it just blows up in her face and screws everything up worse... and Ella trying to go back with the razor makes sense and sucks and I'm glad Rose caught her before she did. Great work on this! (Except that now maybe I'll have I Kissed a Girl stuck in my head...)
3/29 c9 slightlysmall
Poor Ella. My heart still breaks for her. :( I do wish there was a bit more leadup as to why Rose suddenly loves Malfoy, but I really like the scene in this chapter, how he's being honest with her, and she's actually nice back. :)
Poor Ella. My heart still breaks for her. :( I do wish there was a bit more leadup as to why Rose suddenly loves Malfoy, but I really like the scene in this chapter, how he's being honest with her, and she's actually nice back. :)
3/29 c8 slightlysmall
Ugh, I forgot you ship Neville/Luna. That's it, end of the story for me. :P I'm just kidding, Nay! I think you did a good job handling a sensitive subject here. It was scary, but tastefully done. But so, so sad. Oh, Ella... don't feel like a spare. :( Love Albus realizing he loves her. That part was adorable.
Am I late on the bandwagon for finding the lyrics to P!nk's "Perfect" in this? No shoutout? :P anyway, lovely lovely work still.
Ugh, I forgot you ship Neville/Luna. That's it, end of the story for me. :P I'm just kidding, Nay! I think you did a good job handling a sensitive subject here. It was scary, but tastefully done. But so, so sad. Oh, Ella... don't feel like a spare. :( Love Albus realizing he loves her. That part was adorable.
Am I late on the bandwagon for finding the lyrics to P!nk's "Perfect" in this? No shoutout? :P anyway, lovely lovely work still.
3/28 c7 slightlysmall
Lovely chapter. Wait.. Torchwood is an anagram for Doctor Who? I never knew that either... :(
Also, I had forgotten why your story was called Light of Day so it was nice to see the title in there. And I love how your last section is all about love revelations, and Rose realizes she's in love with Scor, and her first thought after realizing that was "Oh **." It's just so... you. I dunno if that makes sense, but yes. Lovely lovely work.
Lovely chapter. Wait.. Torchwood is an anagram for Doctor Who? I never knew that either... :(
Also, I had forgotten why your story was called Light of Day so it was nice to see the title in there. And I love how your last section is all about love revelations, and Rose realizes she's in love with Scor, and her first thought after realizing that was "Oh **." It's just so... you. I dunno if that makes sense, but yes. Lovely lovely work.
3/28 c6 slightlysmall
So much happening in your chapters... Hooray for Jade coming out! but boo for being in love with Ella... she belongs with Al. How many more chapters until Ella's secret comes out? I can't remember... but this is another great chapter. I enjoyed it!
So much happening in your chapters... Hooray for Jade coming out! but boo for being in love with Ella... she belongs with Al. How many more chapters until Ella's secret comes out? I can't remember... but this is another great chapter. I enjoyed it!
3/27 c5 slightlysmall
Oh yeah... meds. I forgot. :( But then Rio... and it's all so sad and I am remembering now what happens to Ella later and why and it makes me mad. And this... yeah. Sorry, no coherent review for this chapter, but DFTBA.
Oh yeah... meds. I forgot. :( But then Rio... and it's all so sad and I am remembering now what happens to Ella later and why and it makes me mad. And this... yeah. Sorry, no coherent review for this chapter, but DFTBA.
3/27 c4 slightlysmall
I love this chapter. Dealing with Jade and Ella is really... I dunno if brave is the right word, but I'm gonna roll with it. It's brave of you to deal with the subject and I appreciate it. The cliffhanger is totally mean though, even when it's already written, because it means I have to keep reading /right this very instant/ or else I will die because I can't remember his explanation... :-/ Lovely work though, Nay. DFTBA.
I love this chapter. Dealing with Jade and Ella is really... I dunno if brave is the right word, but I'm gonna roll with it. It's brave of you to deal with the subject and I appreciate it. The cliffhanger is totally mean though, even when it's already written, because it means I have to keep reading /right this very instant/ or else I will die because I can't remember his explanation... :-/ Lovely work though, Nay. DFTBA.
3/27 c3 slightlysmall
Ugh, Nayla. You are mean. Being me (and I'm sorry about it!), I keep looking at comma splices and other small grammar errors and getting slightly annoyed. But you tell a damn good story, which irritates me even more because I have to keep reading! Technically I have read this through chapter 17, but now I'm being kind and reviewing like I should. I'm interested to know why in the world Malfoy stinks and what happened with Jade and Ella, and I know I love the next 14 chapters, but I'm about to go remind myself why.
Ugh, Nayla. You are mean. Being me (and I'm sorry about it!), I keep looking at comma splices and other small grammar errors and getting slightly annoyed. But you tell a damn good story, which irritates me even more because I have to keep reading! Technically I have read this through chapter 17, but now I'm being kind and reviewing like I should. I'm interested to know why in the world Malfoy stinks and what happened with Jade and Ella, and I know I love the next 14 chapters, but I'm about to go remind myself why.
3/22 c25 60UnicornsAndRainbows20089
I have to say that I loved the ending; I would have perfered if Rose died; but you know still :P. Great Story overall as well. This is actually the very first Scorose I have read that I have actually liked, so great job for that. Your a great writer.
60UnicornsAndRainbows20089I have to say that I loved the ending; I would have perfered if Rose died; but you know still :P. Great Story overall as well. This is actually the very first Scorose I have read that I have actually liked, so great job for that. Your a great writer.
3/22 c24 UnicornsAndRainbows20089
I totally saw that coming xD. I love the fact that Rio is with Bradly xD. great chapter!
I totally saw that coming xD. I love the fact that Rio is with Bradly xD. great chapter!
3/22 c23 UnicornsAndRainbows20089
Awe! I have tears! D: This was a really good chapter, I love how they waked Jade up and the speech Rose wrote was really cute :). I also like the idea of throwing the hats off to the year behind you, is that a aussie thing?
Awe! I have tears! D: This was a really good chapter, I love how they waked Jade up and the speech Rose wrote was really cute :). I also like the idea of throwing the hats off to the year behind you, is that a aussie thing?
3/22 c22 UnicornsAndRainbows20089
I like how Mae and Jade went together despite being the onnly out girls in school. I'm really surprised with the fact that Rose got into the Auror acad. I also love how she knows exactly what she want's to do xD. Great chapter!
I like how Mae and Jade went together despite being the onnly out girls in school. I'm really surprised with the fact that Rose got into the Auror acad. I also love how she knows exactly what she want's to do xD. Great chapter!