for Points Of Reference5/1/2012 c2 7
Well written, but please fix the sentence about the deep red as emeralds are in fact, green.
Well written, but please fix the sentence about the deep red as emeralds are in fact, green.
3/1/2012 c1 
2Zucker Kuchen
This is oh so gorgeously written. The descriptions are lovely and its flows very nicely. I enjoyed every well-written sentence immensely and do hope you continue!
2Zucker KuchenThis is oh so gorgeously written. The descriptions are lovely and its flows very nicely. I enjoyed every well-written sentence immensely and do hope you continue!
2/29/2012 c1 5Stripedsplashing
This story is really beautiful, but I don't understand what in the world you were talking about :D Probably because I didn't watch the second movie, but I kind of think stories should stand alone.
Anyway, I love your writings :D
5StripedsplashingThis story is really beautiful, but I don't understand what in the world you were talking about :D Probably because I didn't watch the second movie, but I kind of think stories should stand alone.
Anyway, I love your writings :D