for Stream of Consciousness6/30/2012 c1 FERP Fighters
This poem was so cute! I can't say I'm a fan of the couple, but I can definitely say this poem is beginning to create pictures of the two together! Your writing was that effective! Nice!
This poem was so cute! I can't say I'm a fan of the couple, but I can definitely say this poem is beginning to create pictures of the two together! Your writing was that effective! Nice!
2/26/2012 c1 
18Gunlord500
Hmm...I didn't think this was too bad at all, Rawkhawk. Poignant, considering the subject matter, and you committed yourself to a rhyming scheme very well. ^^
18Gunlord500Hmm...I didn't think this was too bad at all, Rawkhawk. Poignant, considering the subject matter, and you committed yourself to a rhyming scheme very well. ^^
2/26/2012 c1 28Sorceress of Shadows
*Scowl* Y U HATE ON THIS POEM?
'Cause it's good. Some lines seem odd to read, but other than that, you did fine. And that last line? Bloody brilliant!
... *Didn't see the pun in the summary 'till now*
*Facepalm* Fail, Sorceress. Fail.
28Sorceress of Shadows*Scowl* Y U HATE ON THIS POEM?
'Cause it's good. Some lines seem odd to read, but other than that, you did fine. And that last line? Bloody brilliant!
... *Didn't see the pun in the summary 'till now*
*Facepalm* Fail, Sorceress. Fail.