for Nightingale12/10/2012 c13 RandomCitizen
Man if Batman found out you got distracted making googoo eyes... XP
Man if Batman found out you got distracted making googoo eyes... XP
12/3/2012 c12 Guest
great story! i love it! keep it up!
great story! i love it! keep it up!
11/29/2012 c12 Guest
hey SS this is MM update! it's really good!
hey SS this is MM update! it's really good!
11/5/2012 c12 
12Impar
This is a great plot! It takes you on like a tour of the huge collection of villians in Gotham, and everyone knows gotham has probably the largest collection. anyway, great story keep it up!:)
12ImparThis is a great plot! It takes you on like a tour of the huge collection of villians in Gotham, and everyone knows gotham has probably the largest collection. anyway, great story keep it up!:)
10/15/2012 c12 Pumpkin Queen
I can't wait for the next chapter! This is on
my top 5 batman fanfics. Please post a new chapter soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter! This is on
my top 5 batman fanfics. Please post a new chapter soon.
9/20/2012 c12 2Rave72
I know I said that I was going to wait until the story was done to review, but hey. Why not now? Anywho, I absolutely LOVE it so far. Definatly what I expected from my amazing best friend. :3 Allie's character is very well thought out, and I like how you reveal one of her personality traits in every chapter. So much better than what I am doing with Zoe, haha. It kinda made me sad, though, when you said you were not going to introduce anymore major bad guys. The first thought in my head was; "So, no Scarecrow?" xD Just kidding. It is actually a good thing that you put a limit on how many villains there are. Too many villains would make the plot too complex. Wonderful job! If Irated this on a scale of 1-10, it would be a 5
2Rave72I know I said that I was going to wait until the story was done to review, but hey. Why not now? Anywho, I absolutely LOVE it so far. Definatly what I expected from my amazing best friend. :3 Allie's character is very well thought out, and I like how you reveal one of her personality traits in every chapter. So much better than what I am doing with Zoe, haha. It kinda made me sad, though, when you said you were not going to introduce anymore major bad guys. The first thought in my head was; "So, no Scarecrow?" xD Just kidding. It is actually a good thing that you put a limit on how many villains there are. Too many villains would make the plot too complex. Wonderful job! If Irated this on a scale of 1-10, it would be a 5
9/17/2012 c12 Guest
HI i like this story
RATE :D EPIC out of 1 to 10
GOOOD WORK
HI i like this story
RATE :D EPIC out of 1 to 10
GOOOD WORK
9/3/2012 c12 9IceCReaMloVeRx
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what Allie is going to do. And I'm loving the way how you have Batman and Nightwing in character. I couldn't even tell if they were a bit OOC. I didn't notice so great job! Also I'm loving the little hints with Nightwing and Allie in the previous chapters;) awesome! Update soon and I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
9IceCReaMloVeRxAwesome chapter! I can't wait to see what Allie is going to do. And I'm loving the way how you have Batman and Nightwing in character. I couldn't even tell if they were a bit OOC. I didn't notice so great job! Also I'm loving the little hints with Nightwing and Allie in the previous chapters;) awesome! Update soon and I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
8/23/2012 c12 8DXD
This is amaziiiiiiiiing! I've been patiently waiting for this chapter :D I'm so glad your back. XD
This is amaziiiiiiiiing! I've been patiently waiting for this chapter :D I'm so glad your back. XD
8/20/2012 c12 Speckledlamb1993
Hello there! I'm so happy to see that you've posted again! Please, please don't assume that your readers have lost interest just because you don't see reviews...I had to stop myself from coming to this site for a while because it was too addictive!
Keep writing, and I look forward to your next post!
Hello there! I'm so happy to see that you've posted again! Please, please don't assume that your readers have lost interest just because you don't see reviews...I had to stop myself from coming to this site for a while because it was too addictive!
Keep writing, and I look forward to your next post!
8/20/2012 c12 5Lucy Ellain
MY GOD! finally! haha I was so worried you werent going to update that i would have grab my torch and pitchfork! I loved the chapter by the way. No way was it sloppy, it kept up with the plot and kept me excited as hell! UPDATE SOON! XD
5Lucy EllainMY GOD! finally! haha I was so worried you werent going to update that i would have grab my torch and pitchfork! I loved the chapter by the way. No way was it sloppy, it kept up with the plot and kept me excited as hell! UPDATE SOON! XD