for A Bitter Pill6/10/2012 c1
1Mirkwood Knife Ears
this was pretty good. Impressive how you changed Hawke after all she was put through and the Fenris romance was beautiful :D
1Mirkwood Knife Earsthis was pretty good. Impressive how you changed Hawke after all she was put through and the Fenris romance was beautiful :D
3/29/2012 c2
9Enchanter T.I.M
*sigh* so the 3 year mark passed meaning...oh bloody hell getting all weepy at wha HAwke went through. YOu did good in the show dont tell, to let us know how much they damaged her and fenris. Still hope theres a good healing process...and a mace in Danarius skull in the future.
Also nice change up for her absnese, but without her title as champion...ooh I hope the templars dont come after her.
9Enchanter T.I.M*sigh* so the 3 year mark passed meaning...oh bloody hell getting all weepy at wha HAwke went through. YOu did good in the show dont tell, to let us know how much they damaged her and fenris. Still hope theres a good healing process...and a mace in Danarius skull in the future.
Also nice change up for her absnese, but without her title as champion...ooh I hope the templars dont come after her.
3/22/2012 c1
31Of Quirky Excellence
Please re open this and continue! It cannot end like this! I am in the process of writing a story like this, too. I will post it soon!
31Of Quirky ExcellencePlease re open this and continue! It cannot end like this! I am in the process of writing a story like this, too. I will post it soon!
