for Digimon Adventure Zero 0311/30/2012 c5
8kitsunelover300
Hi there. I just realized that I never reviewed on this chapter. I'm really sorry about that! But better late than never.
I think this would be a good spin off to the digimon series and it would introduce some digimon that haven't been used as partners before. So maybe it WAS necessary for the others to having digimon that haven't appeared in the show already.
Takasu is in the makings of being a good leader and the other two remind me of Matt and Kari.
Now that Daemon and his "King"(I feel like Hollow Ichigo from Bleach when I say that) are on the move, the three of the new Chosen team will have to hurry up if they want to find the others in time. Only 9 to go!
With a few spelling errors aside, this was a well written chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! I will be anticipating Haine's debut as well.
8kitsunelover300Hi there. I just realized that I never reviewed on this chapter. I'm really sorry about that! But better late than never.
I think this would be a good spin off to the digimon series and it would introduce some digimon that haven't been used as partners before. So maybe it WAS necessary for the others to having digimon that haven't appeared in the show already.
Takasu is in the makings of being a good leader and the other two remind me of Matt and Kari.
Now that Daemon and his "King"(I feel like Hollow Ichigo from Bleach when I say that) are on the move, the three of the new Chosen team will have to hurry up if they want to find the others in time. Only 9 to go!
With a few spelling errors aside, this was a well written chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! I will be anticipating Haine's debut as well.
11/26/2012 c5
4Insanity outcast
On ** I could always just review as a guest user. So wise up f$&k-tard* you won't be getting rid of this jackass.
On an unrelated note
I liked this chapter lot and I head a Wizardmon hint , my characters are coming up! Also a demon lord being controlled like that, well let's just say I see ulterior motives
*I took out the main profanity, just to be helpful. Also this is not trying to get even… This is name calling
4Insanity outcastOn ** I could always just review as a guest user. So wise up f$&k-tard* you won't be getting rid of this jackass.
On an unrelated note
I liked this chapter lot and I head a Wizardmon hint , my characters are coming up! Also a demon lord being controlled like that, well let's just say I see ulterior motives
*I took out the main profanity, just to be helpful. Also this is not trying to get even… This is name calling
11/6/2012 c5
5An Anon Fellow
Interesting to see a Digimon like Daemon being pushed around. I wonder what King is trying to do.
5An Anon FellowInteresting to see a Digimon like Daemon being pushed around. I wonder what King is trying to do.
11/6/2012 c5
23Tamer Arisa
This was just cool! I really wonder what Daemon's up to. Poor Takasu and Coronamon " They got all the work to do.
23Tamer ArisaThis was just cool! I really wonder what Daemon's up to. Poor Takasu and Coronamon " They got all the work to do.
11/5/2012 c5
7hydraslayer123
good chapter. can't wait for the next one! update as soon as you have the chapter typed! (please)
7hydraslayer123good chapter. can't wait for the next one! update as soon as you have the chapter typed! (please)
11/5/2012 c5
4San child of the wolves
Lovely chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it. I believe the character King was my character. And I have to his the introduction was great.
4San child of the wolvesLovely chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it. I believe the character King was my character. And I have to his the introduction was great.
8/10/2012 c4
7hydraslayer123
you need to learn something. you are correct that everyone on Fanfiction is insane, but the truth is we're all insane, and hallucinations are visions into reality.
7hydraslayer123you need to learn something. you are correct that everyone on Fanfiction is insane, but the truth is we're all insane, and hallucinations are visions into reality.
7/25/2012 c4 Insanity outcast
( walks away reeling out a cord and holding a detonation box)
You know what forget it! I tried reasoning with, you I tried to fight our war by a set of rules, then you come in and just do whatever the hell you want when you can't find a logical way out! Forget it ! (presses down on the detonation box and jackpot's base explodes). Now let's just call it even and move on before I start to Loose my temper.
( walks away reeling out a cord and holding a detonation box)
You know what forget it! I tried reasoning with, you I tried to fight our war by a set of rules, then you come in and just do whatever the hell you want when you can't find a logical way out! Forget it ! (presses down on the detonation box and jackpot's base explodes). Now let's just call it even and move on before I start to Loose my temper.
7/9/2012 c4 Jackpot 21
Hate to break it to ya, but I won (appears and slaps him with a duck that get's rid of his powers and is hit five times before being sent blasting off again) BTW, don't review if you can accept your loss!
Hate to break it to ya, but I won (appears and slaps him with a duck that get's rid of his powers and is hit five times before being sent blasting off again) BTW, don't review if you can accept your loss!
7/9/2012 c4 Insanity outcast
oh no ( appears and slaps jackpot with a trout three times nocking him out cold and see's Shu) oh hi Shu ( throws the trout at Shu nocking him out) and just for the record I won
oh no ( appears and slaps jackpot with a trout three times nocking him out cold and see's Shu) oh hi Shu ( throws the trout at Shu nocking him out) and just for the record I won
7/9/2012 c4
5An Anon Fellow
Got to love having these identical Digimon to use as enemies for various things. And now it's Champion Time.
5An Anon FellowGot to love having these identical Digimon to use as enemies for various things. And now it's Champion Time.
