for Sonata in G, Mvt II7/19/2012 c13 
8Raynebow-NinjaChick
I read both Movement I and II tonight, and I'm very...I suppose overwhelmed may be the word. In my fanfiction reading, especially for Criminal Minds, it is hard to find a piece that balances a tragic incident with light-hearted moments. You have done just that. The death of her mother made me cry, as well as the funeral, and you've done well with all of the characters. A beautiful piece I can only compare to classical music.
8Raynebow-NinjaChickI read both Movement I and II tonight, and I'm very...I suppose overwhelmed may be the word. In my fanfiction reading, especially for Criminal Minds, it is hard to find a piece that balances a tragic incident with light-hearted moments. You have done just that. The death of her mother made me cry, as well as the funeral, and you've done well with all of the characters. A beautiful piece I can only compare to classical music.
7/4/2012 c12 4The Lieutenant Sarcasm
First of all, you should know that you made me cry. Like full on cry my eyes out. And then my sister started giving me funny looks. Anyway, it's been great so far! I usually only review on the last chapter of completed stories but I just couldn't continue without letting you know how great it's been so far!
4The Lieutenant SarcasmFirst of all, you should know that you made me cry. Like full on cry my eyes out. And then my sister started giving me funny looks. Anyway, it's been great so far! I usually only review on the last chapter of completed stories but I just couldn't continue without letting you know how great it's been so far!
6/29/2012 c13 happygirl21
I really like this story i had never thought of gideon having a kid... Very good story keeps me waiting for each chapter...
I really like this story i had never thought of gideon having a kid... Very good story keeps me waiting for each chapter...
6/28/2012 c13 50hxchick
This was just...yeah, it brought me back to when my own mom died...I thought Rachel's feelings and reactions were realistic and I feel bad that she'll have to leave her house, but after what happened there, she probably doesn't want to stay.
I can't tell you how much I loved this story and this entire series, and I can't wait for you to start the third movement!
50hxchickThis was just...yeah, it brought me back to when my own mom died...I thought Rachel's feelings and reactions were realistic and I feel bad that she'll have to leave her house, but after what happened there, she probably doesn't want to stay.
I can't tell you how much I loved this story and this entire series, and I can't wait for you to start the third movement!
6/23/2012 c12 hxchick
That was just...wow! It was powerful and sad all at the same time. I wanted to smack Scott, but I was glad that everyone else kind of got along for the most part and I'm glad Gideon was there to comfort Rachel in the bathroom when she was sick. I can't WAIT for the next chapter, but I'm sad because I know it's the final one (for this movement).
That was just...wow! It was powerful and sad all at the same time. I wanted to smack Scott, but I was glad that everyone else kind of got along for the most part and I'm glad Gideon was there to comfort Rachel in the bathroom when she was sick. I can't WAIT for the next chapter, but I'm sad because I know it's the final one (for this movement).
6/15/2012 c11 hxchick
This was both wonderful and horrible at the same time! Wonderfully written but horrible that Rachel and Gideon have to go through it. Poor Rachel, how would one get their mind around what happened, especially at that age. I can't tell you how much I love this story/series and I'm sad that this one is almost over...can't wait for the next chapter!
This was both wonderful and horrible at the same time! Wonderfully written but horrible that Rachel and Gideon have to go through it. Poor Rachel, how would one get their mind around what happened, especially at that age. I can't tell you how much I love this story/series and I'm sad that this one is almost over...can't wait for the next chapter!
6/15/2012 c10 hxchick
I've been on the road traveling otherwise I would've reviewed this chapter earlier...sorry.
It is a GREAT chapter! You set everything up really well...it's a normal day and then all of the sudden, BAM! Everyone's life is turned upside down by a psychopath. I'm glad Frank didn't hurt Rachel physically, but the psychological scars will be harder to heal. The emotions came across crystal clear and they were very vivid. I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
I've been on the road traveling otherwise I would've reviewed this chapter earlier...sorry.
It is a GREAT chapter! You set everything up really well...it's a normal day and then all of the sudden, BAM! Everyone's life is turned upside down by a psychopath. I'm glad Frank didn't hurt Rachel physically, but the psychological scars will be harder to heal. The emotions came across crystal clear and they were very vivid. I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
6/15/2012 c11 22Kairi the Strong
All I can say or think is 'Oh gosh, Rachel..." and cry. But wonderful job, all the same...
22Kairi the StrongAll I can say or think is 'Oh gosh, Rachel..." and cry. But wonderful job, all the same...
6/15/2012 c11 Antigona
When I wa before talking about Gideon two quotes came to my head, poet Anne Sexton once wrote, “It doesn’t matter who my father was; it matters who I remember he was.” “Children begin by loving their parents; after a time, they judge them; rarely, if ever, do they forgive them.” Oscar Wild. Sorry if there is any mistake english is not my first language.
When I wa before talking about Gideon two quotes came to my head, poet Anne Sexton once wrote, “It doesn’t matter who my father was; it matters who I remember he was.” “Children begin by loving their parents; after a time, they judge them; rarely, if ever, do they forgive them.” Oscar Wild. Sorry if there is any mistake english is not my first language.
6/15/2012 c11 Antigona
Magnificient thet is the only adjective thet comes to my head when I want to describe this chapter, I think that here we see more then the death of a parent we also see fall of high expectecions of another. You said that you didn't know If you did a good job treating the death of a parent, I talk for experience when I say that you managed to emphatize greatly with the situation, there is that feeling of numbness but also you don't want to sleep in fear of seeing your mother come home and thinking it all has been a dream and then waking up and confronting the grief again. In the end I think that writting is first and foremost an exercice of emphaty and you managed that with no problems, hence magnificient.
Magnificient thet is the only adjective thet comes to my head when I want to describe this chapter, I think that here we see more then the death of a parent we also see fall of high expectecions of another. You said that you didn't know If you did a good job treating the death of a parent, I talk for experience when I say that you managed to emphatize greatly with the situation, there is that feeling of numbness but also you don't want to sleep in fear of seeing your mother come home and thinking it all has been a dream and then waking up and confronting the grief again. In the end I think that writting is first and foremost an exercice of emphaty and you managed that with no problems, hence magnificient.
6/7/2012 c10 12ShannonJethroGideonCastleSnape
OMCP! this was the chapter i was scared of! poor Rea! having to see that happen, i cried a little for the pain and sorrow she felt and for Jason and what he had to go through
12ShannonJethroGideonCastleSnapeOMCP! this was the chapter i was scared of! poor Rea! having to see that happen, i cried a little for the pain and sorrow she felt and for Jason and what he had to go through
6/3/2012 c9 50hxchick
I'm glad Rachel seems to be getting along with both of her parents, but it makes me nervous for what's to come. I can also see Sarah being mad at Gideon for involving their daughter in a case and for Rachel to not want to talk about it. Great chapter!
50hxchickI'm glad Rachel seems to be getting along with both of her parents, but it makes me nervous for what's to come. I can also see Sarah being mad at Gideon for involving their daughter in a case and for Rachel to not want to talk about it. Great chapter!
6/2/2012 c9 2ReidTobuscusLover
Goodness me I love these stories! I'm impressed with your knowledge of music as well! Just this morning I have read your entire first mvnt and as much of this on as there is! They are amazing! Please don't stop writing! Oh and do you play any instruments?
2ReidTobuscusLoverGoodness me I love these stories! I'm impressed with your knowledge of music as well! Just this morning I have read your entire first mvnt and as much of this on as there is! They are amazing! Please don't stop writing! Oh and do you play any instruments?