for The Road to Confidence4/9/2012 c5 
13Brit98
So I was just checking my email one last time before I went to bed and I saw you updated. I was thinking, "Finally!" Nice chapter and nice story. I really, and I mean REALLY, liked it. Hope you make more stories. Good luck on your SAT Math test. Hope you do well. For the last time (on this story) Bye.
~Brit~
P.S If you could read my story New Allies, and review, i'd be really grateful. Well, for real, Bye!
~Brit~
13Brit98So I was just checking my email one last time before I went to bed and I saw you updated. I was thinking, "Finally!" Nice chapter and nice story. I really, and I mean REALLY, liked it. Hope you make more stories. Good luck on your SAT Math test. Hope you do well. For the last time (on this story) Bye.
~Brit~
P.S If you could read my story New Allies, and review, i'd be really grateful. Well, for real, Bye!
~Brit~
3/10/2012 c4 Brit98
Wow. Another great chapter. That kinda whomps that school gets in the way. It happens to me too! Ug! So I hope you can write and update the next chapter soon! Bye!
~Brit~
Wow. Another great chapter. That kinda whomps that school gets in the way. It happens to me too! Ug! So I hope you can write and update the next chapter soon! Bye!
~Brit~
3/6/2012 c3 5MsFrizzle
Dear PandaInTheStars,
I am usually a bit wary of OC but you do a good job on Will. I'm really enjoying seeing the story from a fresh set of eyes. I like your writing style where you imply a lot of background story with just a few words.
I also like the way you have the world outside of Amity pass Phantom off as a hoax.
I sort of cringe at all the collateral damage and of course it ends at an annoying cliffhanger.
5MsFrizzleDear PandaInTheStars,
I am usually a bit wary of OC but you do a good job on Will. I'm really enjoying seeing the story from a fresh set of eyes. I like your writing style where you imply a lot of background story with just a few words.
I also like the way you have the world outside of Amity pass Phantom off as a hoax.
I sort of cringe at all the collateral damage and of course it ends at an annoying cliffhanger.
3/3/2012 c2 23Fluehatraya
Wilhelmina! YES! Awesome name.
Agh, cliffhanger! I am tortured with anticipating what comes next!
Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
23FluehatrayaWilhelmina! YES! Awesome name.
Agh, cliffhanger! I am tortured with anticipating what comes next!
Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
3/3/2012 c2 13Brit98
wow. really good story so far. you've got me hooked. Is this your first story? If so, welcome to fanfiction. If not, welcome anyways and keep writing! your good at it. I like all the details you've put in. hope you update soon!
~Brit~
13Brit98wow. really good story so far. you've got me hooked. Is this your first story? If so, welcome to fanfiction. If not, welcome anyways and keep writing! your good at it. I like all the details you've put in. hope you update soon!
~Brit~
3/3/2012 c1 9The Cinderninja
I've realy not got a clue where you plan to take this, which is cool. (I don't like when stories are predictable), and it's pretty much nothing like anything else I've read (kinda getting tired of overdone plots. Oh, this looks like something new. :3)
And of course, there's the fact that so far I've liked everything you've posted. Definitely adding this to my alerts and seeing where you go with it. c:
~Dash
9The CinderninjaI've realy not got a clue where you plan to take this, which is cool. (I don't like when stories are predictable), and it's pretty much nothing like anything else I've read (kinda getting tired of overdone plots. Oh, this looks like something new. :3)
And of course, there's the fact that so far I've liked everything you've posted. Definitely adding this to my alerts and seeing where you go with it. c:
~Dash