9/23/2012 c2 31TEKNAM
O_O Whoa... Imagine if Sam and Alex met THIS Clover... HOLY SON OF GUN...

I should preface what I'm about to say by stating that I've played ANY of the Devil May Cry games. Therefore, my opinion may come off as... flawed, but still...

First and foremost, I applaud that Clover still seems very much in character. I personally like a bit of OOC once in a while... and this seems like she's going to be bouncing back and forth between canon and OOC. Looks like there's much to expect from this. :)

Secondly, there are a few points of bad spelling and grammar. If you decide to rewrite this, i would like to volunteer as a beta reader. ;)

For the most part, it's well written. :)
12/10 And looking forward to more!

3/4/2012 c1 41yugioh5d
Very good opening chapters to this story. I like your take on my orignal story. I am glad that you took over my story from me as i think you have done a lot better job. I can hardly wait until the next chapter so update real soon. until next time this is yugioh5d signing off.