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2Forever Reading aka meg
Never read this mix before however so far I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to seeing how everything works out after what happening in Ch. 9 'Offering'.
2Forever Reading aka megNever read this mix before however so far I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to seeing how everything works out after what happening in Ch. 9 'Offering'.
1/6 c10 a random broski
Lol i luv your story i hioe joo update soon and all that jazz. Oh and your "rambles" are... amusing i guess lol. I hope you find the inspiration to uodate cuz it seems that you havent in forever. In my terms lol. Oh and being the yuki hater i am, thank you for dropping her. No offense to the yuki supporters of the world btw.
Lol i luv your story i hioe joo update soon and all that jazz. Oh and your "rambles" are... amusing i guess lol. I hope you find the inspiration to uodate cuz it seems that you havent in forever. In my terms lol. Oh and being the yuki hater i am, thank you for dropping her. No offense to the yuki supporters of the world btw.
11/29/2012 c10 Wolfswaechterin Tala
Well, will there be a pairing in this story or not? I would like Kaname/Zero like some others xD
But that aside. I like your story I would really like to read more, so I'm waiting for the next chapter.
(Sry if it's bad english, I'm good at reading english but when it comes to forming a sentence... not so, it's just as if all the words flew out of my brain xD)
Well, will there be a pairing in this story or not? I would like Kaname/Zero like some others xD
But that aside. I like your story I would really like to read more, so I'm waiting for the next chapter.
(Sry if it's bad english, I'm good at reading english but when it comes to forming a sentence... not so, it's just as if all the words flew out of my brain xD)
10/21/2012 c10 Guest
This is really good! You should keep going!
This is really good! You should keep going!
9/4/2012 c10 1VampireRules
Love your story! :D but I would really like it if you wrote something about yuuki :)
1VampireRulesLove your story! :D but I would really like it if you wrote something about yuuki :)
8/19/2012 c9 thingofmyth
Alright, now to review this chapter. I adored that chunk towards the end where Kaname is trying to pull away and Zero's making it hard for him. XD That deserves an award. I loved this chapter. Mainly because it was full of Zero being Zero, instead of faking that pleasant attitude because he's surrounded by other students. -barf- He almost turns into Umbridge! (Okay, that's going a bit far, but you get my point. ;) )
FINALLY, Harry has a reason to be wary. He just saw a vampire doing a vampire thing. xD That's always the best. I hope to the high heavens that he tells Ron and Hermione soon, just because I want to see their reactions. Ron will blow up about it and Hermione will attempt to downplay it to the best of her ability, I predict.
I think you did a good job of keeping Zero in character this chapter. You could have a little side chapter or something in the future when you update your normal chapters to feature the rest of the Night Class. Like update normally, then update another chapter along with it as a kind of bonus that focuses mainly on the others. Just a suggestion. Everyone loves a double update, yeah?
If you do have any pairings, again, they would do better on the side. You can let this story progress without a main pairing and it would still be amazing. Everyone seems to be in this mindset of, "Oh, if there's no pairing then this story will be doomed," and so forth. I personally think that's a little ridiculous. I've read several stories without a main pairing that were absolutely fine, that just followed the plotline with a few things thrown in here and there without resorting to romance in an attempt to amp it up. :) Now, I noticed that this story suddenly seems to have a pairing. I honestly hope that Harry and Zero are up there because they're the main characters and not because there's some sort of yaoi being implanted later on. I just really wish there's not, because I really am sick of all the stories like that. I don't have anything against them, it's just that there are more of those than there are straight pairings, it seems! So if you could tell me what you're planning in regards to that, it would be greatly appreciated.
Alright, I'm done ranting. Sorry about that. I tend to rant a lot when something bugs me. :P This long-ass review is over, so I will say keep it up and put up chapter 11 soon, we're all dying to read it. :)
Alright, now to review this chapter. I adored that chunk towards the end where Kaname is trying to pull away and Zero's making it hard for him. XD That deserves an award. I loved this chapter. Mainly because it was full of Zero being Zero, instead of faking that pleasant attitude because he's surrounded by other students. -barf- He almost turns into Umbridge! (Okay, that's going a bit far, but you get my point. ;) )
FINALLY, Harry has a reason to be wary. He just saw a vampire doing a vampire thing. xD That's always the best. I hope to the high heavens that he tells Ron and Hermione soon, just because I want to see their reactions. Ron will blow up about it and Hermione will attempt to downplay it to the best of her ability, I predict.
I think you did a good job of keeping Zero in character this chapter. You could have a little side chapter or something in the future when you update your normal chapters to feature the rest of the Night Class. Like update normally, then update another chapter along with it as a kind of bonus that focuses mainly on the others. Just a suggestion. Everyone loves a double update, yeah?
If you do have any pairings, again, they would do better on the side. You can let this story progress without a main pairing and it would still be amazing. Everyone seems to be in this mindset of, "Oh, if there's no pairing then this story will be doomed," and so forth. I personally think that's a little ridiculous. I've read several stories without a main pairing that were absolutely fine, that just followed the plotline with a few things thrown in here and there without resorting to romance in an attempt to amp it up. :) Now, I noticed that this story suddenly seems to have a pairing. I honestly hope that Harry and Zero are up there because they're the main characters and not because there's some sort of yaoi being implanted later on. I just really wish there's not, because I really am sick of all the stories like that. I don't have anything against them, it's just that there are more of those than there are straight pairings, it seems! So if you could tell me what you're planning in regards to that, it would be greatly appreciated.
Alright, I'm done ranting. Sorry about that. I tend to rant a lot when something bugs me. :P This long-ass review is over, so I will say keep it up and put up chapter 11 soon, we're all dying to read it. :)
8/19/2012 c10 thingofmyth
Oh Umbridge, you evil woman. No wonder a lot of Harry Potter fandoms take place during the 5th year, apparently it's a lot of fun to find some way or another to abuse Umbridge. XD I wonder what she wanted with Zero. Probably to rag on him about his vampireness... or something. o.O
I is le sorry I forgot to review last chapter, I shall claim forgetfulness. xD This chapter was more or less a filler, since Harry didn't decide to act on that amazingly awesome act of I'm-in-control-jackass that Zero pulled on Kaname. Although, it was still a good chapter, and I'm happy that you featured some of the other Night Class students. I'm sure the next one will have an advance in the plot, however menial or grand-scale it may be. :)
Anyway, you're doing a great job with this story. After I submit this review I will go back and review the previous chapter, since I forgot. xD So update soon, ne?
Oh Umbridge, you evil woman. No wonder a lot of Harry Potter fandoms take place during the 5th year, apparently it's a lot of fun to find some way or another to abuse Umbridge. XD I wonder what she wanted with Zero. Probably to rag on him about his vampireness... or something. o.O
I is le sorry I forgot to review last chapter, I shall claim forgetfulness. xD This chapter was more or less a filler, since Harry didn't decide to act on that amazingly awesome act of I'm-in-control-jackass that Zero pulled on Kaname. Although, it was still a good chapter, and I'm happy that you featured some of the other Night Class students. I'm sure the next one will have an advance in the plot, however menial or grand-scale it may be. :)
Anyway, you're doing a great job with this story. After I submit this review I will go back and review the previous chapter, since I forgot. xD So update soon, ne?