for Preference9/8/2012 c1 Jill
Why did I never review this? I read it ages ago - more than once. Sorry about that... This is cute! :) I see how it fits in with Pride, but I think I like it better on its own. Kind of gives the reader an opportunity to fill in the rest themselves and go where they want to with it. I very much like your style of writing (which is why you can't seem to be rid of me XD). It's easy to follow, and very captivating, plus your plots have been rather fun, with unexpected twists that add so very much to the stories you write. Keep up the awesomeness, 'cause I plan to keep reading! :D
Why did I never review this? I read it ages ago - more than once. Sorry about that... This is cute! :) I see how it fits in with Pride, but I think I like it better on its own. Kind of gives the reader an opportunity to fill in the rest themselves and go where they want to with it. I very much like your style of writing (which is why you can't seem to be rid of me XD). It's easy to follow, and very captivating, plus your plots have been rather fun, with unexpected twists that add so very much to the stories you write. Keep up the awesomeness, 'cause I plan to keep reading! :D
3/20/2012 c1
3AliceMarieSwan
OMC! Amazing! I wish this weren't a one shot! Darn! Well anyways, keep writing and update Pride soon~!
3AliceMarieSwanOMC! Amazing! I wish this weren't a one shot! Darn! Well anyways, keep writing and update Pride soon~!
3/4/2012 c1
29me malum
Heh. Short and snappy- I like. It's not rough at all; it reads very smoothly.
I really like your Kaiba. Really really.
Thanks for sharing!
29me malumHeh. Short and snappy- I like. It's not rough at all; it reads very smoothly.
I really like your Kaiba. Really really.
Thanks for sharing!
3/4/2012 c1
4ilovemanicures
Oh no! Not rough at all! I actually really liked this!
It was soo interesting to imagine WHY Kaiba is constantly neck I'm neck with Jou.
I've never given it real thought before (shocker) and I really love the idea that it's all linked with jealousy xD
That is soo something I can actually see happening between the three of them lol
So I'm really happy you posted this for us! I agree that it really wouldn't fit anywhere in Pride. But I think it made a damn good one-shot ;D
Thanks for sharing! If you get any more random drabbles stuck in your head, don't hesitate to share them! :D
4ilovemanicuresOh no! Not rough at all! I actually really liked this!
It was soo interesting to imagine WHY Kaiba is constantly neck I'm neck with Jou.
I've never given it real thought before (shocker) and I really love the idea that it's all linked with jealousy xD
That is soo something I can actually see happening between the three of them lol
So I'm really happy you posted this for us! I agree that it really wouldn't fit anywhere in Pride. But I think it made a damn good one-shot ;D
Thanks for sharing! If you get any more random drabbles stuck in your head, don't hesitate to share them! :D
