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Applejack keeps changing her name.
Applejack keeps changing her name.
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9ShiningShadow1965
Again another brilliant job on the writing and plot work you have done a major wow on my part bravo.
9ShiningShadow1965Again another brilliant job on the writing and plot work you have done a major wow on my part bravo.
11/4/2012 c19 Omar
Im sorry to say I will not only review about this chapter but all the others as well I never had somepony whom has so much passion over applejack I know this because no matter how I hate that applejack is with somepony else but at the same time I would love her to be heart is shaken badly but I can say this "Keep Up The Good Work" I am proud to call you an AppleJack Fan.
Im sorry to say I will not only review about this chapter but all the others as well I never had somepony whom has so much passion over applejack I know this because no matter how I hate that applejack is with somepony else but at the same time I would love her to be heart is shaken badly but I can say this "Keep Up The Good Work" I am proud to call you an AppleJack Fan.
11/4/2012 c19 ShiningShadow1965
Poor aj she needs to sit down and really need to open up her true feelings with elusive. If they really love each other then they could go beyond this its up to elusive now. Excellent job on this chapter you rock bravo.
Poor aj she needs to sit down and really need to open up her true feelings with elusive. If they really love each other then they could go beyond this its up to elusive now. Excellent job on this chapter you rock bravo.
10/26/2012 c18 ShiningShadow1965
That is so touching aj getting more an inside look of trixie/Bea awesome I said the very essence of redemption and change bravo.
That is so touching aj getting more an inside look of trixie/Bea awesome I said the very essence of redemption and change bravo.
10/17/2012 c17 9ShiningShadow1965
That was a very sweet chapter excellent job. Now things are getting better and better. Keep up the great writing bravo.
9ShiningShadow1965That was a very sweet chapter excellent job. Now things are getting better and better. Keep up the great writing bravo.
10/14/2012 c16 ShiningShadow1965
Awesome now the syndrome that's been bugging Alex poor guy. Aj as a very good supportive sister as ever been for Alex bravo Beatrix explaining the ITS syndrome bravo also. The writing is so intriguing and spot on bravo my friend.
Awesome now the syndrome that's been bugging Alex poor guy. Aj as a very good supportive sister as ever been for Alex bravo Beatrix explaining the ITS syndrome bravo also. The writing is so intriguing and spot on bravo my friend.
10/4/2012 c15 ShiningShadow1965
AJ you are doing it again. You can't do this to poor Alex. This is getting from bad to worse and Dash not being loyal to her future husband. Thinking the whole Gilda episode all over again damn great job on this chapter bravo.
AJ you are doing it again. You can't do this to poor Alex. This is getting from bad to worse and Dash not being loyal to her future husband. Thinking the whole Gilda episode all over again damn great job on this chapter bravo.
9/14/2012 c14 ShiningShadow1965
What's going on I will read the other story great writing lets see what happens next bravo.
What's going on I will read the other story great writing lets see what happens next bravo.
8/26/2012 c13 123chipmunkfanantic
I can't wait for the update of if an when Elusive and AJ tell Alex and Rainbow Dash this should be fun anyway though update soon though
123chipmunkfananticI can't wait for the update of if an when Elusive and AJ tell Alex and Rainbow Dash this should be fun anyway though update soon though
8/17/2012 c12 9ShiningShadow1965
That is so beautiful how elusive and aj taking their time with each other. Aj never kissed a stallion like that I'm so happy she had moved on with her life and have a special pony in her heart bravisimo.
9ShiningShadow1965That is so beautiful how elusive and aj taking their time with each other. Aj never kissed a stallion like that I'm so happy she had moved on with her life and have a special pony in her heart bravisimo.
8/17/2012 c13 ShiningShadow1965
I'm so happy for AppleJack she finds her special somepony in heart to be complete. I'm speechless you have done well bravo *with tears eyes*
I'm so happy for AppleJack she finds her special somepony in heart to be complete. I'm speechless you have done well bravo *with tears eyes*
7/10/2012 c11 Guest
and his was not bad*
I think that was the only typo here.
AND OH MY GOD THE EMOTIONS.
and his was not bad*
I think that was the only typo here.
AND OH MY GOD THE EMOTIONS.
7/9/2012 c11 ShiningShadow1965
AppleJack I'm so proud of you, elusive is your special pony. Made me tear this great revelation as usual your writing is crisp and spot on bravo.
AppleJack I'm so proud of you, elusive is your special pony. Made me tear this great revelation as usual your writing is crisp and spot on bravo.