for Until the Day Your Eyes Open8/3/2012 c6 
10Gloomy Shadows
Great chapter. Really great plot in this chapter too. Really detailed and descriptive and also very in character. Great job and hope you can update soon! :D
10Gloomy ShadowsGreat chapter. Really great plot in this chapter too. Really detailed and descriptive and also very in character. Great job and hope you can update soon! :D
8/3/2012 c5 Gloomy Shadows
Great job with this chapter. That would have been exactly how Tails would have reacted if he saw Doom right beside Sonic. I really liked this chapter and it was really nicely written. Great job!
Great job with this chapter. That would have been exactly how Tails would have reacted if he saw Doom right beside Sonic. I really liked this chapter and it was really nicely written. Great job!
8/3/2012 c4 Gloomy Shadows
So for now only the commander and Tails knows the truth so far. Great chapter, really detailed, descriptive and in character!
So for now only the commander and Tails knows the truth so far. Great chapter, really detailed, descriptive and in character!
8/3/2012 c3 Gloomy Shadows
Shadow meets Black Doom again. Really great chapter. I wonder who this 'friend' will be.
Shadow meets Black Doom again. Really great chapter. I wonder who this 'friend' will be.
8/3/2012 c2 Gloomy Shadows
The commander would have done exactly that. Well done keeping the story very in character and detailed!
The commander would have done exactly that. Well done keeping the story very in character and detailed!
8/3/2012 c1 Gloomy Shadows
Poor Black doom. He does not even know who he is and he seems so nice... how can Black doom be nice though? Even though he forgot who he was how can he be nice.. I wonder... great introduction to the story. Very nicely detailed and descriptive!
Poor Black doom. He does not even know who he is and he seems so nice... how can Black doom be nice though? Even though he forgot who he was how can he be nice.. I wonder... great introduction to the story. Very nicely detailed and descriptive!
3/11/2012 c5 12Ultima the Fox
BD...Doing the puppy eyes and having a sweet innocent voice...*shudders* I can't imagine that EVER happening...Shawn? It's a good name, but Shade seemed to suit him best...Sonic's gonna regret helping BD...Big time...I can't wait for the next chapter! This is so awesome!
12Ultima the FoxBD...Doing the puppy eyes and having a sweet innocent voice...*shudders* I can't imagine that EVER happening...Shawn? It's a good name, but Shade seemed to suit him best...Sonic's gonna regret helping BD...Big time...I can't wait for the next chapter! This is so awesome!
3/8/2012 c4 Ultima the Fox
Whoa...I don't whether Tails would want to help BD recover his memories...You know...In fear of him remembering everything and planning his revenge?
Whoa...I don't whether Tails would want to help BD recover his memories...You know...In fear of him remembering everything and planning his revenge?
3/7/2012 c3 Ultima the Fox
Shadow was captured? Cool! Father son break out! If BD remembers everything, then Shadow might regret saving him...Or not, seeing as he might wanna bond with his "dad"...
Shadow was captured? Cool! Father son break out! If BD remembers everything, then Shadow might regret saving him...Or not, seeing as he might wanna bond with his "dad"...
3/7/2012 c2 6BlazePyro
Poor black doom TT_TT the commander is treating him no better than black doom did to others when he didn't have amnesia. Great chap ! Looking forward to the next chap^^
6BlazePyroPoor black doom TT_TT the commander is treating him no better than black doom did to others when he didn't have amnesia. Great chap ! Looking forward to the next chap^^
3/6/2012 c2 12Ultima the Fox
Now I feel pity for Black Doom...For a second, I thought that the Commander would mistake Black Doom for Shadow...
12Ultima the FoxNow I feel pity for Black Doom...For a second, I thought that the Commander would mistake Black Doom for Shadow...