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1PeetaGirl21
I see that you haven't updated in awhile and I hope you did abandon the story. I really like it. And I have to know if Lily and Scor find each other!
1PeetaGirl21I see that you haven't updated in awhile and I hope you did abandon the story. I really like it. And I have to know if Lily and Scor find each other!
9/7/2012 c10 2Tathiana
One different fic, please continue updating ' cause I' m loving this so much that' ll keeping reading.
2TathianaOne different fic, please continue updating ' cause I' m loving this so much that' ll keeping reading.
9/5/2012 c10 11Jenn222
So freakin good. Amazing. Please update soon! If you don't I may have to hunt you down and murder you. This story is fantastic.
Great plot. Great emotions. Just very good.
Love and a little scared by how Lily is acting (kind of like a robot) Nicely written.
Update please!
11Jenn222So freakin good. Amazing. Please update soon! If you don't I may have to hunt you down and murder you. This story is fantastic.
Great plot. Great emotions. Just very good.
Love and a little scared by how Lily is acting (kind of like a robot) Nicely written.
Update please!
7/15/2012 c10 Infinity Lily
pls update soon im dying of boredom
pls update soon im dying of boredom
7/3/2012 c10 Clove x
You did say that the original story and this sequel would be different, and it really is, but I love this just as much! I got so upset when I realised I was at Chapter Ten and that was the most recent one.. I never read In-Progress work, but this is definitely an exception because I couldn't wait to start this.
You did say that the original story and this sequel would be different, and it really is, but I love this just as much! I got so upset when I realised I was at Chapter Ten and that was the most recent one.. I never read In-Progress work, but this is definitely an exception because I couldn't wait to start this.
5/20/2012 c1 jo bel3
bITCH GO FUK URSELF U DONT EVAN NO HOO 2 RITE A good STURY!111
bITCH GO FUK URSELF U DONT EVAN NO HOO 2 RITE A good STURY!111
4/28/2012 c10 Appzz
I wanna know wht happens oh...! God amazing story I want to know wht hppns to scorpious...!plsss... update fast..! Ur an awesome writer I suggest u shud keep writing...! P.S: I just wanted to ask r u making dis a trilogy..?
I wanna know wht happens oh...! God amazing story I want to know wht hppns to scorpious...!plsss... update fast..! Ur an awesome writer I suggest u shud keep writing...! P.S: I just wanted to ask r u making dis a trilogy..?
4/24/2012 c10 16it's jusst me
Great chapter! Now, I know you must be busy but if your interested in a challenge why don't you check out my The "First Kiss" Challenge.
Here's the link if your interested!
http:/forum(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/topic/44309/61228746/1/#61228746
16it's jusst meGreat chapter! Now, I know you must be busy but if your interested in a challenge why don't you check out my The "First Kiss" Challenge.
Here's the link if your interested!
http:/forum(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/topic/44309/61228746/1/#61228746
4/11/2012 c10 dbquills
Please update soon, I hate cliffhangers and I'm dying to know what happens next!
Please update soon, I hate cliffhangers and I'm dying to know what happens next!