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9StrictlySomething
Loved it! You are definitely becoming one of my favorite star wars authors, and very quickly too!
9StrictlySomethingLoved it! You are definitely becoming one of my favorite star wars authors, and very quickly too!
4/11/2012 c15 Chades
Aaand we have a happy end! I loved the council scene! A very gripping story you´ve written there since I couldn´t stop reading! (I´ve been awake for a few hours now and I haven´t even stopped to eat breakfast-I´d better remedy that now.)
Brilliant as always!
Aaand we have a happy end! I loved the council scene! A very gripping story you´ve written there since I couldn´t stop reading! (I´ve been awake for a few hours now and I haven´t even stopped to eat breakfast-I´d better remedy that now.)
Brilliant as always!
4/11/2012 c12 Chades
I just swore a blue streak..so much about not cursing. (Since I can´t curse once I´m back at work tomorrow it´s only fair if I do so now.)
I hope it´s not going to get worse before it gets better..I have mentioned that I love your writing style and your stories and that you´re just plain awesome,right?
I just swore a blue streak..so much about not cursing. (Since I can´t curse once I´m back at work tomorrow it´s only fair if I do so now.)
I hope it´s not going to get worse before it gets better..I have mentioned that I love your writing style and your stories and that you´re just plain awesome,right?
4/11/2012 c10 Chades
I knew there was a catch. When something´s too good to be true..it probably is. It´s such a thrilling ride that I´m excitedly rushing through the chapters wanting to know how this story ends. (Okay,mainly how much damage there´s going to be because we all know you´d never do anything to harm them permanently.)
I knew there was a catch. When something´s too good to be true..it probably is. It´s such a thrilling ride that I´m excitedly rushing through the chapters wanting to know how this story ends. (Okay,mainly how much damage there´s going to be because we all know you´d never do anything to harm them permanently.)
4/11/2012 c7 Chades
We hope so,too. Piell is growing on me,I haven´t felt like cussing in this chapter and all seems to be going according to plan. That´s almost too good to be true.
We hope so,too. Piell is growing on me,I haven´t felt like cussing in this chapter and all seems to be going according to plan. That´s almost too good to be true.
4/11/2012 c6 Chades
Wahaha! That conversation between Piell and Anakin was funny! No more shackles for Obi Wan and the situation seems to be improving-we´ll see whether or not there´s a catch,won´t we?
Wahaha! That conversation between Piell and Anakin was funny! No more shackles for Obi Wan and the situation seems to be improving-we´ll see whether or not there´s a catch,won´t we?
4/11/2012 c5 Chades
I´ll just silently raise an eyebrow this time..oh,Anakin! I do understand that it´s impossible for him to wait (being forced to wait while you could theoretically do something to help..yeah,I understand why he chose to do what he did.)
Ow..he poked him? Oww!That´s not nice! (haha,really?:/)
Mating ritual? I don´t really want to know what that entails but that post sure comes in handy now.
Kat
Oh,sorry for flooding your inbox..:S
I´ll just silently raise an eyebrow this time..oh,Anakin! I do understand that it´s impossible for him to wait (being forced to wait while you could theoretically do something to help..yeah,I understand why he chose to do what he did.)
Ow..he poked him? Oww!That´s not nice! (haha,really?:/)
Mating ritual? I don´t really want to know what that entails but that post sure comes in handy now.
Kat
Oh,sorry for flooding your inbox..:S
4/11/2012 c4 Chades
I´m not quite sure what to say this time (not that my ramblings so have been very eloquent..)
I love your Yoda..the way he talks just makes me grin like a loon and "having a talent for avoiding the worst"? Mhm,at least there´s no torture this time. (Rescue him already! ;D)
I´m not quite sure what to say this time (not that my ramblings so have been very eloquent..)
I love your Yoda..the way he talks just makes me grin like a loon and "having a talent for avoiding the worst"? Mhm,at least there´s no torture this time. (Rescue him already! ;D)
4/11/2012 c3 Chades
If you keep this up I´ll chip a tooth trying to keep silent. Poor Anakin and typical of Obi Wan-always getting in trouble. (I wonder if the author has something to do with this or if she´s merely an innocent bystander like the rest of us..?)
By the way..bystander looks wrong..yup,random and not really connected to your story. Mhm,okay,getting back to the task on hand-reading. :)
Kat
If you keep this up I´ll chip a tooth trying to keep silent. Poor Anakin and typical of Obi Wan-always getting in trouble. (I wonder if the author has something to do with this or if she´s merely an innocent bystander like the rest of us..?)
By the way..bystander looks wrong..yup,random and not really connected to your story. Mhm,okay,getting back to the task on hand-reading. :)
Kat
4/11/2012 c2 Chades
Uuuuh,not good! Grinding my teeth,fingers pushed into my hair,pulling at some strands,staring at the screen with grim determination to finish this story without cursing even once..I´m curious whether or not I´ll be able to pull it off. (The odds are not in my favor.-potty mouth)
Uuuuh,not good! Grinding my teeth,fingers pushed into my hair,pulling at some strands,staring at the screen with grim determination to finish this story without cursing even once..I´m curious whether or not I´ll be able to pull it off. (The odds are not in my favor.-potty mouth)
4/11/2012 c1 Chades
Sounds promising so far and I marvel again at how good you are at the..great,I don´t even know the word..you´re good at getting the whole interaction/relationship/feelings between to people down and make it feel believable.(Gah,stuttering like a fool.)
Favorite line in this chapter is for some reason the "Dangerous habit,Padawan mine." I started smiling,mentally going "Aww!"
Kat
Sounds promising so far and I marvel again at how good you are at the..great,I don´t even know the word..you´re good at getting the whole interaction/relationship/feelings between to people down and make it feel believable.(Gah,stuttering like a fool.)
Favorite line in this chapter is for some reason the "Dangerous habit,Padawan mine." I started smiling,mentally going "Aww!"
Kat
3/30/2012 c15 7FyreFlyte
*crawls out from hiding*
So, I have been a very bad reader, as I haven't reviewed in a while. :/ I thought Spring Break was supposed to be a /break/ in which I'd have /more/ time. Nope, apparently not. *sigh*
That out of the way...I LOVE THIS STORY. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE. There was very clear character development in everyone, just the right amount of wit/humor, angst, and drama, and a beautiful and fitting ending. I simply adore your Even Piell and the way he interacts with Obi-Wan and young Anakin.
And Obi-Wan shocking Anakin by taking the blame in front of the Council! That...I just...oh, it was so very Obi-Wan. I'm glad Anakin still realizes he's in the hot seat with his master. :) A part of me wonders, though, what would have happened if this had been a Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan mission (or a Qui-Gon and Anakin mission) - same Council result, or not? The world will never know.
I'm going to have to add this to my favorites list. :D (I think you win the prize for author with the most stories on my favorites list!) Thank you so much for writing my request. I simply loved it to pieces and will be back many times to read it again. :)
Keep Writing!
FyreFlyte :)
7FyreFlyte*crawls out from hiding*
So, I have been a very bad reader, as I haven't reviewed in a while. :/ I thought Spring Break was supposed to be a /break/ in which I'd have /more/ time. Nope, apparently not. *sigh*
That out of the way...I LOVE THIS STORY. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE. There was very clear character development in everyone, just the right amount of wit/humor, angst, and drama, and a beautiful and fitting ending. I simply adore your Even Piell and the way he interacts with Obi-Wan and young Anakin.
And Obi-Wan shocking Anakin by taking the blame in front of the Council! That...I just...oh, it was so very Obi-Wan. I'm glad Anakin still realizes he's in the hot seat with his master. :) A part of me wonders, though, what would have happened if this had been a Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan mission (or a Qui-Gon and Anakin mission) - same Council result, or not? The world will never know.
I'm going to have to add this to my favorites list. :D (I think you win the prize for author with the most stories on my favorites list!) Thank you so much for writing my request. I simply loved it to pieces and will be back many times to read it again. :)
Keep Writing!
FyreFlyte :)
3/28/2012 c15 5MobiObi
Completely forgot to review this one earlier! Really liked the development of the Togorian chief and his growing frustration at Obi's "tricks". Piell was a great CW character and Anakin's description of him is perfect. I loved the scene where he's taking on the Togorian at the end there. Another cracking good read!
5MobiObiCompletely forgot to review this one earlier! Really liked the development of the Togorian chief and his growing frustration at Obi's "tricks". Piell was a great CW character and Anakin's description of him is perfect. I loved the scene where he's taking on the Togorian at the end there. Another cracking good read!