for Cold Gem5/21 c5 Dunno
What's going to happen? What's going on? Keep writing and update! Don't leave us hanging like that. It's been so long since this was updated, looks like it's been a year now. Better have not given up on this idea. Keep going!
What's going to happen? What's going on? Keep writing and update! Don't leave us hanging like that. It's been so long since this was updated, looks like it's been a year now. Better have not given up on this idea. Keep going!
5/8/2012 c5 
6MistressChi08
O...o
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~~
why you have to stop there!
hehehe.. i guess now they're have visitor..
that would triple fun to read it...
i cant really wait to see more..
keep it up good work Jo-chan~
and have fun to write more!
6MistressChi08O...o
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~~
why you have to stop there!
hehehe.. i guess now they're have visitor..
that would triple fun to read it...
i cant really wait to see more..
keep it up good work Jo-chan~
and have fun to write more!
5/6/2012 c5 1Berry Doyle
Even if he's still being rather harsh, Johan's adorable. Pulling Juudai in out of the rain.
Well, Manjoume's appearance is certainly unexpected. Now I'm curious.
1Berry DoyleEven if he's still being rather harsh, Johan's adorable. Pulling Juudai in out of the rain.
Well, Manjoume's appearance is certainly unexpected. Now I'm curious.
4/1/2012 c4 6MistressChi08
QwQ poor Johan... i can't blame him...
i know judai can break the ice cold gem of johan~~~
kyaaaaa! hope judai don't give up!
thanks a lot updated this!
i really like the way you wrote this story...
awww... i feel judai hurts..shouting by johan angry
seeing hi old family... good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ soooo awesome!
can't really wait for it~
6MistressChi08QwQ poor Johan... i can't blame him...
i know judai can break the ice cold gem of johan~~~
kyaaaaa! hope judai don't give up!
thanks a lot updated this!
i really like the way you wrote this story...
awww... i feel judai hurts..shouting by johan angry
seeing hi old family... good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ soooo awesome!
can't really wait for it~
4/1/2012 c4 2JudaiLover74
OMG! Johan's such a jerk to Juudai! All he's doing is helping him. Shoot, when you said Johan changed, Johan really DID Change. What plans do you have in mind to get Johan into dueling again? How would Johan go back to his old self? Gosh, this is suspenceful! I hope Johan is back to normal in the end! D:
I saw no mistake, and no OoCness. Keep it up! xD x3
2JudaiLover74OMG! Johan's such a jerk to Juudai! All he's doing is helping him. Shoot, when you said Johan changed, Johan really DID Change. What plans do you have in mind to get Johan into dueling again? How would Johan go back to his old self? Gosh, this is suspenceful! I hope Johan is back to normal in the end! D:
I saw no mistake, and no OoCness. Keep it up! xD x3
3/31/2012 c4 4krystalanimeheart
Omg! Johan is so mean to judai when all he does is try and help! So I have an idea for ur story its a plan for johan to...well I guess get into dueling a little bit its hard to explain! By the way if you want to know more of my idea just PM me! Oh and awesome chapter cant wait for more!
4krystalanimeheartOmg! Johan is so mean to judai when all he does is try and help! So I have an idea for ur story its a plan for johan to...well I guess get into dueling a little bit its hard to explain! By the way if you want to know more of my idea just PM me! Oh and awesome chapter cant wait for more!
3/29/2012 c3 6MistressChi08
i like this story~ ;3
cause they're both seke! this is pretty rare one of fic i ever read on GX archive~
Hope you got plenty time to wrote this fic~!
Thanks anyway for the watched Johan-Chan on DA... hehehe
6MistressChi08i like this story~ ;3
cause they're both seke! this is pretty rare one of fic i ever read on GX archive~
Hope you got plenty time to wrote this fic~!
Thanks anyway for the watched Johan-Chan on DA... hehehe
3/9/2012 c2 natsumefruit
I wonder who's the uke .. I secretly hope it's Johan. *not a secret anymore*
Anyway, get on the 3. chapter! :D
I wonder who's the uke .. I secretly hope it's Johan. *not a secret anymore*
Anyway, get on the 3. chapter! :D
3/9/2012 c1 natsumefruit
It sounds definitely nice and I like the topic - especially Judai being the one who has to win Johan back! :)
Please continue!
- Btw, I love Johan - my fave!
It sounds definitely nice and I like the topic - especially Judai being the one who has to win Johan back! :)
Please continue!
- Btw, I love Johan - my fave!
3/9/2012 c2 2JudaiLover74
Okay, all I could point out is: You spelled "Apology" wrong. You put "Apoligy" instead of "Apology". Other then that: Awesome! I loved how you portayed the story, and I LOVED The ending of this chapter! AYYYYYYE! Update soon~! xD x3
2JudaiLover74Okay, all I could point out is: You spelled "Apology" wrong. You put "Apoligy" instead of "Apology". Other then that: Awesome! I loved how you portayed the story, and I LOVED The ending of this chapter! AYYYYYYE! Update soon~! xD x3