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5Ravenclaw125
Oh my gosh! This story was fantastic! I loved how you made the title the last words. Some things just don't work out. Bravo. You are an amazing author with some real potential.
5Ravenclaw125Oh my gosh! This story was fantastic! I loved how you made the title the last words. Some things just don't work out. Bravo. You are an amazing author with some real potential.
2/19 c5 4Rubes99
I would never have guessed you were bullshitting the stuff with the computers. It seemed professional enough to me - although I know absolutely zero about hacking. I guess if you put in enough detail and make it sound really complicated, you can get anyone to believe anything!
Loving the story so far...but the grammar is still annoying me.
4Rubes99I would never have guessed you were bullshitting the stuff with the computers. It seemed professional enough to me - although I know absolutely zero about hacking. I guess if you put in enough detail and make it sound really complicated, you can get anyone to believe anything!
Loving the story so far...but the grammar is still annoying me.
2/19 c1 Rubes99
Very interesting opening chapter. My only criticism would be the grammar. Apostrophes are used to signify ownership or whata-ya-call-ems...contractions? Yeah, that sounds about right. It's just a bit distracting to be reading through a really good story and then finding a random apostrophe sitting in the middle of a sentence. Sorry. :)
Very interesting opening chapter. My only criticism would be the grammar. Apostrophes are used to signify ownership or whata-ya-call-ems...contractions? Yeah, that sounds about right. It's just a bit distracting to be reading through a really good story and then finding a random apostrophe sitting in the middle of a sentence. Sorry. :)
10/5/2012 c16 a person
U did are really fantastic job with this story! I'm sooooooooo happy I read it :-). Thanks for writing!
U did are really fantastic job with this story! I'm sooooooooo happy I read it :-). Thanks for writing!
8/15/2012 c16 2grimmich
wow this was an awesome fic! I loved it! though I am disappointed they didn't get to see the rest of his scars, I am content with what they did see, it makes the fic that much better that you get to see some of the damage done to his outsides, I think it show cases his strength better than just about anything, other than the fact that he can still function like a normal human, for the most part. I love how you wrote his personality too.
2grimmichwow this was an awesome fic! I loved it! though I am disappointed they didn't get to see the rest of his scars, I am content with what they did see, it makes the fic that much better that you get to see some of the damage done to his outsides, I think it show cases his strength better than just about anything, other than the fact that he can still function like a normal human, for the most part. I love how you wrote his personality too.
8/14/2012 c16 Atheriia
Good ending but now I'm excited and impatient for the sequel! So please please post it soon!
Good ending but now I'm excited and impatient for the sequel! So please please post it soon!