for That '70s Poetry Compilation9/8/2012 c24 
6topher girl0102
Love it ! You write E/D sooooo well ...
****One more step toward her
That's all it takes
For us to fall in love again.****
soo true ...
6topher girl0102Love it ! You write E/D sooooo well ...
****One more step toward her
That's all it takes
For us to fall in love again.****
soo true ...
9/6/2012 c24 68nannygirl
Such a fabulous job on this one!
I loved how it not only fit so well with Eric, his voice and his emotions that he must have had at that moment but it also fit with the episode voer all and how was the finale. You could really feel that bittersweetness as you read on. Really liked seeing the things Eric saw when he got there and the ways he described them and then the last part here “One more step toward her That's all it takes For us to fall in love again.” Wonderfully written!
Really nice work once again! I really enjoyed these poems. Looking forward to reading more! Till then keep up the terrific work!
68nannygirlSuch a fabulous job on this one!
I loved how it not only fit so well with Eric, his voice and his emotions that he must have had at that moment but it also fit with the episode voer all and how was the finale. You could really feel that bittersweetness as you read on. Really liked seeing the things Eric saw when he got there and the ways he described them and then the last part here “One more step toward her That's all it takes For us to fall in love again.” Wonderfully written!
Really nice work once again! I really enjoyed these poems. Looking forward to reading more! Till then keep up the terrific work!
9/6/2012 c23 nannygirl
Wonderful work on this poem.
Again you capture Donna’s emotions so well and especially in this scene of the show that was not as light as the other. Really great work on choosing the questions and wording them in a way that really made them sound like Donna asking them. Nice job there. I could very much see those questions being some that were running through her mind at that time.
Very nice work on this one! Of to the next!
Wonderful work on this poem.
Again you capture Donna’s emotions so well and especially in this scene of the show that was not as light as the other. Really great work on choosing the questions and wording them in a way that really made them sound like Donna asking them. Nice job there. I could very much see those questions being some that were running through her mind at that time.
Very nice work on this one! Of to the next!
8/2/2012 c23 6topher girl0102
Hey TSR, loved this E/D poem ...you get them very well ...I loved the prom reference and the first time reference :-)...keep writing these T7S poems pls !
6topher girl0102Hey TSR, loved this E/D poem ...you get them very well ...I loved the prom reference and the first time reference :-)...keep writing these T7S poems pls !
8/1/2012 c19 9PrettyinPink33
I don't usually like poetry but you really dropped the ball on this one. You manage to tell a story with each piece and it is so beautiful.
Way to utilize your talent! Amazing job!
9PrettyinPink33I don't usually like poetry but you really dropped the ball on this one. You manage to tell a story with each piece and it is so beautiful.
Way to utilize your talent! Amazing job!
7/15/2012 c21 nannygirl
Another very lovely and heartbreaking poem.
Thought it fit very well with Jackie and Kelso especially in season 4. Good call! You could really feel Jackie’s pain and despair as you read on. And I like the repetitive words but how they were kinda split up between other repetitive words and lines. Very very nice formatting! And a very fitting poem for JK and the downs of their relationship.
Very great job once more! Be back to read the next soon! Till then keep up the good work!
Another very lovely and heartbreaking poem.
Thought it fit very well with Jackie and Kelso especially in season 4. Good call! You could really feel Jackie’s pain and despair as you read on. And I like the repetitive words but how they were kinda split up between other repetitive words and lines. Very very nice formatting! And a very fitting poem for JK and the downs of their relationship.
Very great job once more! Be back to read the next soon! Till then keep up the good work!
7/7/2012 c22 6topher girl0102
Wow, TSR, you get the E/D relationship so well , I love this new poem from Hyde's POV...its very apt for S1 / S2. I love the line , 'you will always have your sights set on him'...:-)
6topher girl0102Wow, TSR, you get the E/D relationship so well , I love this new poem from Hyde's POV...its very apt for S1 / S2. I love the line , 'you will always have your sights set on him'...:-)
6/13/2012 c20 68nannygirl
Wow this was something unexpected. Think this was your first Fez poem, no? It was really nicely done. Almoast dark and somber and serious though which you normally wouldn’t think was something that would fit with Fez. Still it was a good poem that added to more of the mystery of Fez.
Nice work. And good luck on finals.
68nannygirlWow this was something unexpected. Think this was your first Fez poem, no? It was really nicely done. Almoast dark and somber and serious though which you normally wouldn’t think was something that would fit with Fez. Still it was a good poem that added to more of the mystery of Fez.
Nice work. And good luck on finals.
6/13/2012 c19 nannygirl
Very nice job on this poem!
Again the reptive line was very great! And the fact that it was ’I want to be the girl’ was a good choice because I could hear Jackie saying and thinking that over and over again—especially in late season two early season 3. Lots of nice examples and lines.
Job well done on this one. Thanks for sharing keep up the nice work.
Very nice job on this poem!
Again the reptive line was very great! And the fact that it was ’I want to be the girl’ was a good choice because I could hear Jackie saying and thinking that over and over again—especially in late season two early season 3. Lots of nice examples and lines.
Job well done on this one. Thanks for sharing keep up the nice work.
6/5/2012 c18 DFT
I have to say I think you caught Donna's feelings when the nerd tells her he is going away ! very good writing !
I have to say I think you caught Donna's feelings when the nerd tells her he is going away ! very good writing !