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19dyingimmortal
Aw. D: Well, it's your fic, so you can do whatever you like. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in your future writing endeavors!
19dyingimmortalAw. D: Well, it's your fic, so you can do whatever you like. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in your future writing endeavors!
1/7 c13 Kerri
thanks for the Zutara even though Zuko is a little mean.
thanks for the Zutara even though Zuko is a little mean.
1/7 c9 Kerri
MORE KATARA AND ZUTRA
MORE KATARA AND ZUTRA
1/3 c15 Guest
Continue writing. Its pretty good and I spend my free time reading fan fiction.
Continue writing. Its pretty good and I spend my free time reading fan fiction.
12/25/2012 c14 dyingimmortal
This is pretty interesting so far; can't wait to see where you'll take it, since all the tributes seem pretty friendly with each other. Hope to see an update sometime (:
By the way, this fic is in past tense, but you switched to present tense for a few sentences in the middle of chapter 9:
"Hey," she replies reluctantly.
She feels Cinna began to circle around her, expecting every inch of her. This time self-consciousness gets the better of her and she starts to rock back and forth on her feet. And she tries her best not cover her chest. "You have the most beautiful hair," he states simply.
"Uh, thanks I guess," she stammers in response.
This is pretty interesting so far; can't wait to see where you'll take it, since all the tributes seem pretty friendly with each other. Hope to see an update sometime (:
By the way, this fic is in past tense, but you switched to present tense for a few sentences in the middle of chapter 9:
"Hey," she replies reluctantly.
She feels Cinna began to circle around her, expecting every inch of her. This time self-consciousness gets the better of her and she starts to rock back and forth on her feet. And she tries her best not cover her chest. "You have the most beautiful hair," he states simply.
"Uh, thanks I guess," she stammers in response.
12/6/2012 c13
2NavyBlurd
I love your story! Please, please, please star updatibg again. I really don't care if the chapters are short
2NavyBlurdI love your story! Please, please, please star updatibg again. I really don't care if the chapters are short
10/19/2012 c13
2PiperDaughterOfAphrodite
Hey! Your story is simply awesome! Please update soon and Im following ur story! )
2PiperDaughterOfAphroditeHey! Your story is simply awesome! Please update soon and Im following ur story! )
10/10/2012 c5
6FoxHerra
i hate ZukoKatara too XD lol it drives me crazy.
oh and if your still looking for ideas maybe you should look into keeping the avatar part (not sure if you were planning on doing that) mayb look into how Soka and Suki get there (tho if you plan on doing the hole HG series that wont be to hard). know for some pointless questions
does Zuko have his scar?
will Oppa and Momo be in the story?
are you going to mix the HG and A story lines together?
will you be doing the LOK version after this? (that would be pretty cool -shrugs-
p.s sorry for all my fangirl stupid question XD
6FoxHerrai hate ZukoKatara too XD lol it drives me crazy.
oh and if your still looking for ideas maybe you should look into keeping the avatar part (not sure if you were planning on doing that) mayb look into how Soka and Suki get there (tho if you plan on doing the hole HG series that wont be to hard). know for some pointless questions
does Zuko have his scar?
will Oppa and Momo be in the story?
are you going to mix the HG and A story lines together?
will you be doing the LOK version after this? (that would be pretty cool -shrugs-
p.s sorry for all my fangirl stupid question XD
8/29/2012 c13 chicadefuega3
THIS IS AMAZING! I love both ALTA and Hunger Games and now there's both :) Please update as fast as you can! :)
THIS IS AMAZING! I love both ALTA and Hunger Games and now there's both :) Please update as fast as you can! :)
7/5/2012 c13
1Misleading Potato
I just saw this on your profile after reading the story 'first'. I love the hunger games and Taang so I just had to check it out. I love it! Nice job. Update soon!
1Misleading PotatoI just saw this on your profile after reading the story 'first'. I love the hunger games and Taang so I just had to check it out. I love it! Nice job. Update soon!
6/28/2012 c10 Guest
this is a great story i like it a lot please continue
this is a great story i like it a lot please continue
