for Crona's longing1/25 c1 anniy
YOU*TAKES BREATH*ARE*TAKES BREATH*AWSOME!
YOU*TAKES BREATH*ARE*TAKES BREATH*AWSOME!
6/29/2012 c1 Guest
i loved it!
i loved it!
3/15/2012 c1 
5wrestlingfan438
This story... Is basically unreadble. This is something you should know if you're going to write a story; when a new character speaks, make a new paragraph. Having this giant blob makes this story makes reading the story a chore and actually sort of hurts the eyes.
5wrestlingfan438This story... Is basically unreadble. This is something you should know if you're going to write a story; when a new character speaks, make a new paragraph. Having this giant blob makes this story makes reading the story a chore and actually sort of hurts the eyes.
3/15/2012 c1 1Confetti108
I usually dont read and like Crona and Kid fanficts but this one was really good and cute which a loved! :)
1Confetti108I usually dont read and like Crona and Kid fanficts but this one was really good and cute which a loved! :)
3/14/2012 c1 9GoddessOfZombies
Ok out og all the crona and kid storys i have read this is thi cutest!
Keep it up please
9GoddessOfZombiesOk out og all the crona and kid storys i have read this is thi cutest!
Keep it up please
3/14/2012 c1 djlee6
omg soooooo cuuuuute~!
i also like how u made chrona come off pretty gender neutral to avoid those flames! lol x)
omg soooooo cuuuuute~!
i also like how u made chrona come off pretty gender neutral to avoid those flames! lol x)
3/14/2012 c1 Supersoul7691
This is very good. I think Kid and Crona make a good couple together. Hope you keep up your good work
This is very good. I think Kid and Crona make a good couple together. Hope you keep up your good work