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9/3/2012 c1 9LifeIsNotForever-NotEvenClose
And time just kept on ticking by.

Not always a good thing. This story is really meaningful. You really understand Zach and Cammie and their relationship. That;s really hard to do. It's really amazing that you could do this.
4/14/2012 c1 Gg4eva
If my other review didn't go through this won't make sense so forget about it but maybe Solomon could be saying that gg and bb kids are done and the schools closed cos every1 died so yeah and it was dangerous and the spy life is over? Also a question so EVERONE READ THIS PLEASE! HOW COME SOME GG OR BB KIDS DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THE OPPOSITESCHOOL CUZ THEY WOULD HAVE HAD BROTHERS OR SISTERS WHO GO THERE SO THEY WOULD KNOW AND THE TELL OS YEAH HOW COME THATS THE ONLY. GG BOOKS FLAW!
4/14/2012 c1 Gg4eva
Okay so I just read this and thought it was an amazing one shot and I think your writing is a making and you really got the feelings in this was so sad maybe you could do some of he survivors stories like Bex without grant and maybe dead people like all the gg and bb boys from heaven looking over Solomon zach camomile and Bex and then. Think Bex zach and commie should all commit suicide holding hands together and Solomon giving a final POV of all the dead gg and bb and grown ups so matt Rachel Abby townsend and yeah thats just me rambling but it was good and a potential gg ending? Anyway good job
3/19/2012 c1 4GenuineQT
Really beautiful. I would love a sequel, but this is perfect enough for me. I've read GG5 and after I finished it (don't worry no spoilers) I got the sense that Zach and Cammie couldn't seperate if they tried, their lives are too intertwined and the two of them have this perfect...connection. So I'm glad you ended it the way you did. And I love the fact Zach isn't some cocky player who just happens to remember Cammie. Your writing is mature, and I absolutely love it. Please keep up the good work!
3/17/2012 c1 missmareexx
Amazing. its so cute and sad and i love it! sequel?
3/14/2012 c1 14violets-are-violet
This was pretty cute:) And I really like the way you tied in GG5.. it made it better I think.

The ending was my favorite part:D

Anyways, bravo. And fantastic job! :)

Ash(:
3/14/2012 c1 1Bookwormz-4-life
i really just wanted to cry just now. sometimes when you read a book where the 2 main characters are together you just expect them to stay together..
3/14/2012 c1 finish please
I cannot believe you are making this a oneshot! this deserves to be a full and complete story! you already have such an amazing story line you could go so many places with this, zach could come and visit and then maybe he finds out josh is cammie's neighbor and they are good friends so he gets jealous that josh and cammie have been able to spend time with eachother while cammie was hurt and josh comforted her, so zach tries to win her back again fast. or you can just have their reunion and maybe they will spend a lot of time with eachother and eventually zach will ask her out again and the story will pick up about what happens with their relationship from their (honeymoon,zach cheats/jealous,zach proposes, etc.) What do you think? me and my friends think this is an awesome story so keep writing!

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