for LOWTSAR7/20/2012 c5 
33Scyphi
Well that ended a little anti-climatically, but will be looking for future installments in the story as they arise. :)
33ScyphiWell that ended a little anti-climatically, but will be looking for future installments in the story as they arise. :)
7/8/2012 c5 4WolfenAmphithere
So wait, you said FFN's been screwing up formatting; Were the chevron things indicating the standard alphabet (or whatever the intergalactic one is, I'm being a derp and forgot), or just FFN being weird? Also, I wish my mom would let me sleep all day after an all-nighter... Can't wait for ISOTA!
4WolfenAmphithereSo wait, you said FFN's been screwing up formatting; Were the chevron things indicating the standard alphabet (or whatever the intergalactic one is, I'm being a derp and forgot), or just FFN being weird? Also, I wish my mom would let me sleep all day after an all-nighter... Can't wait for ISOTA!
6/6/2012 c4 WolfenAmphithere
That ending was sure a surprise O_o; Rayton's blood is acidic or something? O_o;
That ending was sure a surprise O_o; Rayton's blood is acidic or something? O_o;
5/19/2012 c3 33Scyphi
Well, again I am late to read and review. Need to stop that.
Anyway, good chapter. Loved Mortimer's response to CK's plan. :D
33ScyphiWell, again I am late to read and review. Need to stop that.
Anyway, good chapter. Loved Mortimer's response to CK's plan. :D
5/1/2012 c3 4WolfenAmphithere
Not "Lots of Ways to Skin a Rat"? :/
Anyway, that was pretty brilliant XD
4WolfenAmphithereNot "Lots of Ways to Skin a Rat"? :/
Anyway, that was pretty brilliant XD
4/10/2012 c2 33Scyphi
Dun dun dun! I KNEW we hadn't seen the last of Rayton.
Hmm...but this e-mail wasn't really what I was expecting. I'm very hesitant to take it as genuine after what happened last time, but at the same time, I'd like to think he'd know better than to try again, and that CK would additionally know better than to trust him.
Eh, I guess time will tell. Therefore, awaiting for more. :)
33ScyphiDun dun dun! I KNEW we hadn't seen the last of Rayton.
Hmm...but this e-mail wasn't really what I was expecting. I'm very hesitant to take it as genuine after what happened last time, but at the same time, I'd like to think he'd know better than to try again, and that CK would additionally know better than to trust him.
Eh, I guess time will tell. Therefore, awaiting for more. :)
4/9/2012 c2 12Treacle Parcheesi
Wow, you always keep us guessing. It sure was nice to meet Molly again after all these years. I have a feeling that Mortimer's, um, emotional imbalance is gonna cost him...
12Treacle ParcheesiWow, you always keep us guessing. It sure was nice to meet Molly again after all these years. I have a feeling that Mortimer's, um, emotional imbalance is gonna cost him...
4/2/2012 c2 4WolfenAmphithere
Suddenly busier than before, eh? I'm already so confused by this XD Rayton certainly is an enigma, eh? *would probably understand better if she'd get off her butt and install all of the eps and knew more about Mortimer*
4WolfenAmphithereSuddenly busier than before, eh? I'm already so confused by this XD Rayton certainly is an enigma, eh? *would probably understand better if she'd get off her butt and install all of the eps and knew more about Mortimer*
3/15/2012 c1 12Treacle Parcheesi
Your writing has certainly changed a lot in a year. I can tell from the absence of intermittent author notes and better spell checking, as well as shorter chapters. Can't stress enough their importance^^ You've always been a great writer, but now you're really going places. That's awesome.
It's always difficult to review the first chapter, because you can't really tell where the story is going.
Also I noticed you've named Billy's siblings. In TMASOT I named them Danny and Amanda. It's hard to tell if they'll show up again, but if they do I'll probably use my own names.
You've done a great job with the first chapter. Thank you!
12Treacle ParcheesiYour writing has certainly changed a lot in a year. I can tell from the absence of intermittent author notes and better spell checking, as well as shorter chapters. Can't stress enough their importance^^ You've always been a great writer, but now you're really going places. That's awesome.
It's always difficult to review the first chapter, because you can't really tell where the story is going.
Also I noticed you've named Billy's siblings. In TMASOT I named them Danny and Amanda. It's hard to tell if they'll show up again, but if they do I'll probably use my own names.
You've done a great job with the first chapter. Thank you!
3/15/2012 c1 4WolfenAmphithere
...Every time I read these I get the urge to try to install those games again... This urge is only blocked by my need to do homework, and only surpassed by my urge to go live in the wild for a week... (don't ask, I have no idea what's come over me, it's like I HAVE to do it)
Anyway, is "Altered" something I should be familiar with from the games? If not, I assume you'll explain next chapter, but I just wanted to make sure XD I am liking this so far :D
4WolfenAmphithere...Every time I read these I get the urge to try to install those games again... This urge is only blocked by my need to do homework, and only surpassed by my urge to go live in the wild for a week... (don't ask, I have no idea what's come over me, it's like I HAVE to do it)
Anyway, is "Altered" something I should be familiar with from the games? If not, I assume you'll explain next chapter, but I just wanted to make sure XD I am liking this so far :D