for A New Life4/26/2012 c8 HannahBerry96
Leopard is alex' daddy :) I knew that! I just didn't review :/ haha oops sorry! The chapter is good! I like the way you brought ben in, and how they acted :)
Leopard is alex' daddy :) I knew that! I just didn't review :/ haha oops sorry! The chapter is good! I like the way you brought ben in, and how they acted :)
4/26/2012 c7 HannahBerry96
Im guessing Ben is back? Haha a bit predictable but everyone loves it :) well I know I do! Haha
Im guessing Ben is back? Haha a bit predictable but everyone loves it :) well I know I do! Haha
4/26/2012 c7 HannahBerry96
Im guessing Ben is back? Haha a bit predictable but everyone loves it :) well I know I do! Haha
Im guessing Ben is back? Haha a bit predictable but everyone loves it :) well I know I do! Haha
4/25/2012 c7 Atheriia
Great story so far I love the many point of views but alex's is still the best please continue writing!
Great story so far I love the many point of views but alex's is still the best please continue writing!
4/25/2012 c7 
8Dani9513
Much longer, much better, and it took me a second to realize who Leopard was. :)
8Dani9513Much longer, much better, and it took me a second to realize who Leopard was. :)
4/25/2012 c7 3Buninsun
OMG I LUUUUV IT! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the update! Did I mention that I LOVE it?
3BuninsunOMG I LUUUUV IT! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the update! Did I mention that I LOVE it?
4/25/2012 c7 16youngjusticefanatic
OH MY DAYS OH MY DAYS OH MY DAYS! IS THAT BEN! oh I am on my knees begging you now! please update please please please. now now now!
16youngjusticefanaticOH MY DAYS OH MY DAYS OH MY DAYS! IS THAT BEN! oh I am on my knees begging you now! please update please please please. now now now!
4/18/2012 c6 9It'sFun2BCrazy
If you feel you've made him unrealistically awesome, rest assured with the fact that your only about the 100th person to do it. Thats terribly unhelpful of me, I know, but yes, he's very good. Whether he's that good in "real life", not mine to judge. Anthony Horowitz would be great right now, but since he's not on hand, It's kind of your decision. FANfiction, right?
~CrAzY
9It'sFun2BCrazyIf you feel you've made him unrealistically awesome, rest assured with the fact that your only about the 100th person to do it. Thats terribly unhelpful of me, I know, but yes, he's very good. Whether he's that good in "real life", not mine to judge. Anthony Horowitz would be great right now, but since he's not on hand, It's kind of your decision. FANfiction, right?
~CrAzY
4/18/2012 c1 6nagagoo
in stormbreaker alex is 14 u say he will be dead before his 17th b-day yet it was three years since jack died? wouldnt that mean alex is already 17
6nagagooin stormbreaker alex is 14 u say he will be dead before his 17th b-day yet it was three years since jack died? wouldnt that mean alex is already 17
4/17/2012 c6 Ginaheartscupcakes
tiger?
cheetah?
monkey?
hedgehog?
chicken?
lol im getting goofy.
i like this story, and you are doing awesome(:
tiger?
cheetah?
monkey?
hedgehog?
chicken?
lol im getting goofy.
i like this story, and you are doing awesome(:
4/17/2012 c6 J'aime lire
you REALLY need to make your chapters longer. and Alex is WAY to perfect. it is so unrealistic it is cheesy and weird. there is no way ANYONE could do what Alex is doing and do it that good! he doesn't show enough emotion either.
you REALLY need to make your chapters longer. and Alex is WAY to perfect. it is so unrealistic it is cheesy and weird. there is no way ANYONE could do what Alex is doing and do it that good! he doesn't show enough emotion either.