for Moments6/1/2012 c4 An93lsGl0ry
The story was nice and simple , I was actually thinking if that really happened in the game hahahah , I really chapter 3 the most heheh I think Light and Fang were .. Jealous . I was Also wondering author if this story is already completed or your still going to add more chapters , Anyways Nice Story again !
An93ls Gl0ry :3
The story was nice and simple , I was actually thinking if that really happened in the game hahahah , I really chapter 3 the most heheh I think Light and Fang were .. Jealous . I was Also wondering author if this story is already completed or your still going to add more chapters , Anyways Nice Story again !
An93ls Gl0ry :3
4/2/2012 c4
5H-thar
That was gorgeous. I'm glad I took the trouble to re-check the listing of Hope/Light stories if only because I found THIS one. Your Lightning is perfectly introspective and your Hope is just the right blend of insecure and determined. The 'moments' - as you've divided it - are all very moving, and I can't wait to experience more of them!
- Hthar
5H-tharThat was gorgeous. I'm glad I took the trouble to re-check the listing of Hope/Light stories if only because I found THIS one. Your Lightning is perfectly introspective and your Hope is just the right blend of insecure and determined. The 'moments' - as you've divided it - are all very moving, and I can't wait to experience more of them!
- Hthar
3/21/2012 c4 Revan Farron
Nice work. Very believable. It's hard to create moments like this that could have happened in-game without conflicting with how things turned out in the end but you pull it off. This is my favorite update so far.
Nice work. Very believable. It's hard to create moments like this that could have happened in-game without conflicting with how things turned out in the end but you pull it off. This is my favorite update so far.
3/19/2012 c4 Miyaaa
Awww..hope is a man! XD putting his jacket on light:) He would be harassed by Snow and Light would be teased by Fang on the next day XD
Awww..hope is a man! XD putting his jacket on light:) He would be harassed by Snow and Light would be teased by Fang on the next day XD
3/16/2012 c3 Miyaaa
Were they jealous XD? So cute :D I love how Sazh and his chocobo acted ! A kind father and a cute baby chocobo*smirk* Snow is stupid sometime but it suits his personality ..( just my opinion ) wait for the next chapter :)
Were they jealous XD? So cute :D I love how Sazh and his chocobo acted ! A kind father and a cute baby chocobo*smirk* Snow is stupid sometime but it suits his personality ..( just my opinion ) wait for the next chapter :)
3/16/2012 c2 Miyaaa
I love the way you described the detail :) This atmosphere was unique! Wait for your next chapter :D
I love the way you described the detail :) This atmosphere was unique! Wait for your next chapter :D
