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6/1/2012 c4 An93lsGl0ry
The story was nice and simple , I was actually thinking if that really happened in the game hahahah , I really chapter 3 the most heheh I think Light and Fang were .. Jealous . I was Also wondering author if this story is already completed or your still going to add more chapters , Anyways Nice Story again !

An93ls Gl0ry :3
4/2/2012 c4 5H-thar
That was gorgeous. I'm glad I took the trouble to re-check the listing of Hope/Light stories if only because I found THIS one. Your Lightning is perfectly introspective and your Hope is just the right blend of insecure and determined. The 'moments' - as you've divided it - are all very moving, and I can't wait to experience more of them!

- Hthar
3/21/2012 c4 Revan Farron
Nice work. Very believable. It's hard to create moments like this that could have happened in-game without conflicting with how things turned out in the end but you pull it off. This is my favorite update so far.
3/19/2012 c4 Miyaaa
Awww..hope is a man! XD putting his jacket on light:) He would be harassed by Snow and Light would be teased by Fang on the next day XD
3/16/2012 c3 Miyaaa
Were they jealous XD? So cute :D I love how Sazh and his chocobo acted ! A kind father and a cute baby chocobo*smirk* Snow is stupid sometime but it suits his personality ..( just my opinion ) wait for the next chapter :)
3/16/2012 c3 zenbon zakura
fang sending death glares at hope? whatever for?
3/16/2012 c2 Miyaaa
I love the way you described the detail :) This atmosphere was unique! Wait for your next chapter :D
3/15/2012 c2 zenbon zakura
poor hope

lol

hurry update!

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