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10GVLuver
I think it's funny that all the males are trying to hide their feelings and not wanting to be all mushy! Men! Get over it! LOL Great chapter!
10GVLuverI think it's funny that all the males are trying to hide their feelings and not wanting to be all mushy! Men! Get over it! LOL Great chapter!
5/5 c30 Morisako83
I was wondering if you was ok hope that your migraines get better soon .hate when I have those as vegeta coming out of the wet all water was quite sexy .17 is try too hard to get Kalona love . But we all know she loves trunks and trunks is going to knock 17 on his flat butt .
I was wondering if you was ok hope that your migraines get better soon .hate when I have those as vegeta coming out of the wet all water was quite sexy .17 is try too hard to get Kalona love . But we all know she loves trunks and trunks is going to knock 17 on his flat butt .
5/5 c30 6LilLaoRyo704
Haha, I love the part where you had Vegeta doing the run as fast as you can part, it was funny. Aw, of course she loves Trunks and Seventeen is bringing Kalona back really fast, I wonder what Trunks is going to do Can't wait for the next update x3
6LilLaoRyo704Haha, I love the part where you had Vegeta doing the run as fast as you can part, it was funny. Aw, of course she loves Trunks and Seventeen is bringing Kalona back really fast, I wonder what Trunks is going to do Can't wait for the next update x3
5/5 c30 5Writer'sFantasy
Eep nono no mOah jackal is nothing watch 17 is gonna get beat *I warned you* I imagined vegeta like a drowned cat and started giggling in insanity. I saw i saw i saw you remembered. Vegeta is all talk yes siree he is.
Update soon!
5Writer'sFantasyEep nono no mOah jackal is nothing watch 17 is gonna get beat *I warned you* I imagined vegeta like a drowned cat and started giggling in insanity. I saw i saw i saw you remembered. Vegeta is all talk yes siree he is.
Update soon!
4/12 c29 Guest
good chapter :)
good chapter :)
4/2 c29 Morisako83
Enjoy all the fighting and sure hope you do get better soon . Also like how 17 is watch them make love .it show a side to him that we didn't know lol
Enjoy all the fighting and sure hope you do get better soon . Also like how 17 is watch them make love .it show a side to him that we didn't know lol
4/1 c20 Morisako83
Read your Bio and love it .I hate TWILIGHT so much I wish I could blast all of it to kingdom come .but I have be enjoy your story so much .
Read your Bio and love it .I hate TWILIGHT so much I wish I could blast all of it to kingdom come .but I have be enjoy your story so much .
3/23 c29 6LilLaoRyo704
Trunks is getting jelly, he so jelly of Seventeen and Vegeta's comment about Goku not coming back to life,being scared o Chichi xD Ya! Frying Pan of Doom can scare even the strongest!
6LilLaoRyo704Trunks is getting jelly, he so jelly of Seventeen and Vegeta's comment about Goku not coming back to life,being scared o Chichi xD Ya! Frying Pan of Doom can scare even the strongest!
3/23 c29 5Writer'sFantasy
OHOOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHO 17 is gonna get a bitch load out of me . .17. i have capabilities unknown to you. Little mofo should leave before trunks dismantles him. Vegeta don't you dare land a single finger on her or I will find you and *he will kill me you know what forget about it* Yeah trunks is probbably a better sex god than 17 sorry not sorry
Update soon! Yupp i GOT MY COMP BACK *screams in happiness* This is by far the best day becauuuuseeee 2 of my favorite fanfics have updated frozen yogurt woop
5Writer'sFantasyOHOOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHO 17 is gonna get a bitch load out of me . .17. i have capabilities unknown to you. Little mofo should leave before trunks dismantles him. Vegeta don't you dare land a single finger on her or I will find you and *he will kill me you know what forget about it* Yeah trunks is probbably a better sex god than 17 sorry not sorry
Update soon! Yupp i GOT MY COMP BACK *screams in happiness* This is by far the best day becauuuuseeee 2 of my favorite fanfics have updated frozen yogurt woop
2/18 c28 mslegend92
Vegeta being an ass is always pleasant to read about. The love triangle T/17/K should be interesting as it should keep Trunks on his toes and prove to Kalona even they are already bonded that he is committed at her. Chapters are fairly short for this fic as chapters that are at least half of that of Dragon ball legends by Veema should be better. Thank you and keep up the good work!
Vegeta being an ass is always pleasant to read about. The love triangle T/17/K should be interesting as it should keep Trunks on his toes and prove to Kalona even they are already bonded that he is committed at her. Chapters are fairly short for this fic as chapters that are at least half of that of Dragon ball legends by Veema should be better. Thank you and keep up the good work!
2/16 c28 Writer'sFantasy
THE HELL IS 17 FLIRTING WITH KALONA OH NO NO NO *good news i got my comp back and i was able to update card to life hahahahha finally lol* i missed this update how can i miss this update. i wonder how old do you believe i am idk just some random question AHHH but i hate the tension between trunks and kalona THANK GOD ITS ENDING it was hell reading that.
update soon *how this was short i read it in 3 minutes* i will probs have to go back and reread
THE HELL IS 17 FLIRTING WITH KALONA OH NO NO NO *good news i got my comp back and i was able to update card to life hahahahha finally lol* i missed this update how can i miss this update. i wonder how old do you believe i am idk just some random question AHHH but i hate the tension between trunks and kalona THANK GOD ITS ENDING it was hell reading that.
update soon *how this was short i read it in 3 minutes* i will probs have to go back and reread
2/16 c28 5Tiffany7898
Cliffy! How could you! Ugh! Too much suspense for this 14 year old :( You must update again! Like, now lol ;D
5Tiffany7898Cliffy! How could you! Ugh! Too much suspense for this 14 year old :( You must update again! Like, now lol ;D