for Don't Look Back1/14 c5 liamvarley666
Love the story loved every chapter! Miss Aaron and jackson on my tv thank you for bringing them back and loved the missing brother part! chas only has gay sons class ;-_))))))
Love the story loved every chapter! Miss Aaron and jackson on my tv thank you for bringing them back and loved the missing brother part! chas only has gay sons class ;-_))))))
4/7/2012 c5
27Sinceslicedbread
Eden- you've been a good plot device but you can bog off now.
A&J well done sweethearts, well done.
27SinceslicedbreadEden- you've been a good plot device but you can bog off now.
A&J well done sweethearts, well done.
4/6/2012 c5 CazB
Glad once Aaron calmed down, he realised Jackson would never cheat on him but Eden definitely is trouble. Still not sure i believe his past history. So pleased the boys have got their happy ending together in Spain. Loved this, thanks for updating.
Glad once Aaron calmed down, he realised Jackson would never cheat on him but Eden definitely is trouble. Still not sure i believe his past history. So pleased the boys have got their happy ending together in Spain. Loved this, thanks for updating.
4/5/2012 c5 Shawnyola
Hi Keith, wow, another story comes to an end, just likes Aaron's on screen one earlier! I agree with you that both Danny and Marc have been brilliant as Aaron and Jackson on screen and their chemistry and magic that they had will never be forgotton.
I'm glad that Aaron came to his senses after his walk; he knows that Jackson would never cheat on him! But Eden - what a piece of work he is! And after Aaron took him under his wing! I can't believe he lied so much!
Worse still was the fact that he caused such friction between Aaron and Chas which resulted in them not speaking, not to mention her outburst at Jackson! I can understand that Aaron pretty much washed his hands with Eden after this , though I can also understand that Chas loves both of her sons and didn't want to lose either again.
Eden does seem to have got off scot free though, Chas has only told him off and he gets to keep his job and home,as well a his relationship with her, though he has lost the relationship he was starting to build with Aaron which is a shame.
Nice to see the boys heading off to Spain to start again with new jobs but a shame that Aaron felt slightly pressured because of what had happened with Eden, though I'm glad Aaron and Jackson stayed together - just as how it should be! Thanks for writing Keith xx.
Hi Keith, wow, another story comes to an end, just likes Aaron's on screen one earlier! I agree with you that both Danny and Marc have been brilliant as Aaron and Jackson on screen and their chemistry and magic that they had will never be forgotton.
I'm glad that Aaron came to his senses after his walk; he knows that Jackson would never cheat on him! But Eden - what a piece of work he is! And after Aaron took him under his wing! I can't believe he lied so much!
Worse still was the fact that he caused such friction between Aaron and Chas which resulted in them not speaking, not to mention her outburst at Jackson! I can understand that Aaron pretty much washed his hands with Eden after this , though I can also understand that Chas loves both of her sons and didn't want to lose either again.
Eden does seem to have got off scot free though, Chas has only told him off and he gets to keep his job and home,as well a his relationship with her, though he has lost the relationship he was starting to build with Aaron which is a shame.
Nice to see the boys heading off to Spain to start again with new jobs but a shame that Aaron felt slightly pressured because of what had happened with Eden, though I'm glad Aaron and Jackson stayed together - just as how it should be! Thanks for writing Keith xx.
4/5/2012 c5
5dreamgirlmiller
I Absolutly love this ending. This is what should have been played out on screen. Aaron and Jackson together not the creep that is ed (sorry if this offends anyone). It is sad that aarson will never be again on screen but like what has been said they will always remain in our hearts.
End of an era. Good things must
come to and end ay
A & J forever xx
5dreamgirlmillerI Absolutly love this ending. This is what should have been played out on screen. Aaron and Jackson together not the creep that is ed (sorry if this offends anyone). It is sad that aarson will never be again on screen but like what has been said they will always remain in our hearts.
End of an era. Good things must
come to and end ay
A & J forever xx
4/5/2012 c5
2If I Could
Hi Keith,
Another happy ending I'm glad to see. I love reading your Aaron and Jackson stories, they remind me how good they were together on screen.I know you've said you probably won't write any more stories after this one but, as we've said before, never say never eh? xx
2If I CouldHi Keith,
Another happy ending I'm glad to see. I love reading your Aaron and Jackson stories, they remind me how good they were together on screen.I know you've said you probably won't write any more stories after this one but, as we've said before, never say never eh? xx
4/5/2012 c5 Nicster
Thanks again for this story Keith and for your thoughts on this sad day! I'm gutted that both Aaron and Jackson are now gone from our screens but not from our hearts, fanfics or YouTube!
I would much rather think of Aaron with funny, sarcastic, gorgeous multi facial expressioned Jackson in Spain than irritating, dead pan Ed in France!
Thanks again for this story Keith and for your thoughts on this sad day! I'm gutted that both Aaron and Jackson are now gone from our screens but not from our hearts, fanfics or YouTube!
I would much rather think of Aaron with funny, sarcastic, gorgeous multi facial expressioned Jackson in Spain than irritating, dead pan Ed in France!
4/5/2012 c5
4Faggy
Mixed feelings about this.
I'm pleased that Aaron confronted Eden and stuck by Jackson. Also nice that they've got a new life planned.
BUT Eden seems to have not only got away with his behaviour with no consequences but he's also got Chas on his side as well. I know she eventually apologised to Aaron but she should have spoken to Jackson directly.
Eden's definitely a wrong 'un. I wouldn't trust the sneaky little runt one bit.
4FaggyMixed feelings about this.
I'm pleased that Aaron confronted Eden and stuck by Jackson. Also nice that they've got a new life planned.
BUT Eden seems to have not only got away with his behaviour with no consequences but he's also got Chas on his side as well. I know she eventually apologised to Aaron but she should have spoken to Jackson directly.
Eden's definitely a wrong 'un. I wouldn't trust the sneaky little runt one bit.
4/4/2012 c4 Nicster
I knew it! Naughty naughty Eden! What a way to pay back Aaron for his kindness. Poor Aaron, he doesn't trust easily this will be a big blow for him. I don't think he'll react well which could have a negative impact on him and Jackson.
I'm not sure I believe Eden's back story either now? Good stuff Keith
I knew it! Naughty naughty Eden! What a way to pay back Aaron for his kindness. Poor Aaron, he doesn't trust easily this will be a big blow for him. I don't think he'll react well which could have a negative impact on him and Jackson.
I'm not sure I believe Eden's back story either now? Good stuff Keith
4/3/2012 c3
27Sinceslicedbread
I did not see that coming!
Oh poor Eden, everything in the garden is not rosy after all.
:(
27SinceslicedbreadI did not see that coming!
Oh poor Eden, everything in the garden is not rosy after all.
:(
4/2/2012 c4 CazB
What a way for Eden to repay Aaron's trust and kindness! Can't wait to see how Aaron reacts to this!
What a way for Eden to repay Aaron's trust and kindness! Can't wait to see how Aaron reacts to this!
4/1/2012 c4 Shawnyola
Uh-oh! You just know that Aaron isn't going to react well to this! Walking in to find his boyfriend and brother kissing - talk about worst case scenario!
I think with the initial shock, Aaron will react badly and maybe blame Jackson or maybe he'll just do a runner which is what Aaron is famous for on screen! I just hope after he gets over the shock, he'll realise that Jackson wouldn't cheat on him.
Eden can't think very much of Aaron to try it on with his boyfriend after everything Aaron's done for him. I'm thinking that Eden will try and say that Jackson came on to him, trying to drive a wedge between them.
I'm also wondering if the rape story that Eden told is actually true? He's seen what Aaron has and maybe he's trying to worm his way into Aaron's life - he already shares his mum, now he's moving into the pub and seems to want his boyfriend too! It's like he trying to edge Aaron out.
Really enjoying this, Keith and well written as always. I really enjoyed the scene where Jackson was made up that Aaron suggested they move into Dale Head. Very sweet! Trust Eden to come along and spoil it! Please update soon, my friend x.
Uh-oh! You just know that Aaron isn't going to react well to this! Walking in to find his boyfriend and brother kissing - talk about worst case scenario!
I think with the initial shock, Aaron will react badly and maybe blame Jackson or maybe he'll just do a runner which is what Aaron is famous for on screen! I just hope after he gets over the shock, he'll realise that Jackson wouldn't cheat on him.
Eden can't think very much of Aaron to try it on with his boyfriend after everything Aaron's done for him. I'm thinking that Eden will try and say that Jackson came on to him, trying to drive a wedge between them.
I'm also wondering if the rape story that Eden told is actually true? He's seen what Aaron has and maybe he's trying to worm his way into Aaron's life - he already shares his mum, now he's moving into the pub and seems to want his boyfriend too! It's like he trying to edge Aaron out.
Really enjoying this, Keith and well written as always. I really enjoyed the scene where Jackson was made up that Aaron suggested they move into Dale Head. Very sweet! Trust Eden to come along and spoil it! Please update soon, my friend x.
4/1/2012 c4
7Asa1612
I had a feeling that something like this would happen. I wonder whats going to happen. Will Eden say that Jackson came on to him or be honest and say that it was his fault. You just know that Aaron isn't going to like it either way. Loving this. Asa x
7Asa1612I had a feeling that something like this would happen. I wonder whats going to happen. Will Eden say that Jackson came on to him or be honest and say that it was his fault. You just know that Aaron isn't going to like it either way. Loving this. Asa x
4/1/2012 c4
6Gillian Kearney Fan
:O Just as Aaron and Eden were getting on so well. I reckon there is going to be a fighnt between the boys...
Hope you can update soon. :)
6Gillian Kearney Fan:O Just as Aaron and Eden were getting on so well. I reckon there is going to be a fighnt between the boys...
Hope you can update soon. :)
