for What Life Has Come To11/25/2012 c1
12Giulietta Marescotti
Aw! That was adorable! And cute and sweet! No worries Sasuke wasn't OOC. Just right. I LOVE IT!
12Giulietta MarescottiAw! That was adorable! And cute and sweet! No worries Sasuke wasn't OOC. Just right. I LOVE IT!
9/6/2012 c1 jessi
Great story!
Great story!
6/23/2012 c1
18VeniVediVici
It was a good story. But a bit overreacting much at the beginning? People won't review if you demand it. I've learned that.
18VeniVediViciIt was a good story. But a bit overreacting much at the beginning? People won't review if you demand it. I've learned that.
3/18/2012 c1 Ur worst nightmare452
This was so freakin cute keep up the good work! :)
This was so freakin cute keep up the good work! :)
3/18/2012 c1 xXxtellmewhyxXx
Well, since you want a review: it wasn't horrible, but there were a lot of gramatical and mechanical mistakes. I suggest you edit or have someone else do so before you post. I, personally, don't enjoy reading fics that haven't been edited for grammar and mechanics; I believe that it's an obvious thing to do before you post. But it was a cute story and I wish you luck with your writing! :)
Well, since you want a review: it wasn't horrible, but there were a lot of gramatical and mechanical mistakes. I suggest you edit or have someone else do so before you post. I, personally, don't enjoy reading fics that haven't been edited for grammar and mechanics; I believe that it's an obvious thing to do before you post. But it was a cute story and I wish you luck with your writing! :)
3/18/2012 c1 DivineKitten
oh... oh my... this was so AMAZING! i cannot fathom on how fluffy my insides feel atm. greatly written and very in-character. thank you for delivering a great fic with us!
oh... oh my... this was so AMAZING! i cannot fathom on how fluffy my insides feel atm. greatly written and very in-character. thank you for delivering a great fic with us!
