for Requiem of The Cursed7/13/2012 c1 Junday
I really enjoy to read this first chapter and wait for the next one, wich will be, I hope, with our friends of Fairy Tail :)
And I also love your skits at the end, especially the first one
I really enjoy to read this first chapter and wait for the next one, wich will be, I hope, with our friends of Fairy Tail :)
And I also love your skits at the end, especially the first one
7/6/2012 c1 TiFu
Oh, this seems really promising. Even if I have limited if not nonexistant knowledge of fairy tail... I do hope you continue this further, I've never seen a crossover that crosses over the actual characters! MARVELO- I'm joking, I won't do that. XD Really excited now.
Oh, and maybe you can put only a few skits, or intersperse them in through the chapter? It might look better? I dunno. You've got a few small problems with the tense of certain words (which are small enough that I've already forgotten them lol) but other than that, AWESOME. No spelling mistakes, and last but most IT'S NOT A MASSIVE BLOCK OF TEXT YAAAAYYYY.
Anyway, good job and keep going, yes? Yes. XD
Oh, this seems really promising. Even if I have limited if not nonexistant knowledge of fairy tail... I do hope you continue this further, I've never seen a crossover that crosses over the actual characters! MARVELO- I'm joking, I won't do that. XD Really excited now.
Oh, and maybe you can put only a few skits, or intersperse them in through the chapter? It might look better? I dunno. You've got a few small problems with the tense of certain words (which are small enough that I've already forgotten them lol) but other than that, AWESOME. No spelling mistakes, and last but most IT'S NOT A MASSIVE BLOCK OF TEXT YAAAAYYYY.
Anyway, good job and keep going, yes? Yes. XD
4/10/2012 c1 
4Micky Moon
OMG. SO I SUCK. THROW TOMATOES AT ME! T.T
Gomen, I had so much to do this vacation, I didn't get a chance to read your fic! But okay, better late than never, ne? :D
Okay, so wond-er-ful fic you've got here! ^^ I expect no less, judging from the -insert stringful of positive beautiful and poetic words here- reviews you write! :D
Aw, I love Emil's innocence. I don't know much of his original character but I find him quite adorable. Quite appropriate for the age you set him out to be. ^^
Oh, a bit of criticism, the transition for the part when Erza's asking Jellal where their son and the part when she snaps at him, saying Emil's gone is kind of awkward. Threw me off a bit but it's only a bit. ;D
Aside from that, everything's fabulous! Really interesting and love the mystery tone-ish you got here. Keep up the great work and hope to read more! ;D
(I'll write more in my next review when I have more time. SO SORRY for how little I write now. .)
4Micky MoonOMG. SO I SUCK. THROW TOMATOES AT ME! T.T
Gomen, I had so much to do this vacation, I didn't get a chance to read your fic! But okay, better late than never, ne? :D
Okay, so wond-er-ful fic you've got here! ^^ I expect no less, judging from the -insert stringful of positive beautiful and poetic words here- reviews you write! :D
Aw, I love Emil's innocence. I don't know much of his original character but I find him quite adorable. Quite appropriate for the age you set him out to be. ^^
Oh, a bit of criticism, the transition for the part when Erza's asking Jellal where their son and the part when she snaps at him, saying Emil's gone is kind of awkward. Threw me off a bit but it's only a bit. ;D
Aside from that, everything's fabulous! Really interesting and love the mystery tone-ish you got here. Keep up the great work and hope to read more! ;D
(I'll write more in my next review when I have more time. SO SORRY for how little I write now. .)
3/24/2012 c1 45Wild Rhov
Okay, I've read it. Happy?
=^..^= Aye, sir!
Not you, Happy. I hope you're getting plenty of hits, because I know how much love and care you're putting into this story. So DON'T BE A WUSS AND GIVE UP LIKE EVERYONE ELSE DOES.
Cute A/N, by the way. ^_^
45Wild RhovOkay, I've read it. Happy?
=^..^= Aye, sir!
Not you, Happy. I hope you're getting plenty of hits, because I know how much love and care you're putting into this story. So DON'T BE A WUSS AND GIVE UP LIKE EVERYONE ELSE DOES.
Cute A/N, by the way. ^_^
3/20/2012 c1 Zero Cifer
So far this is interesting. I wonder what'll happen next. And when you mean Emil as in Emil you or the Emil as in Emil Castagnier? Either way is fine with me! And youade Jellal and Erza married? I wonder if that'll happen in the anime? And I wonder how? And who's that guy saying Jellal was his student? And when are Natsu, Lucy, Gray, and Happy coming? I hope Gray and Lucy are married (unless you're like the anime. I mean come in I know GrayLu is cute and all but I can tell NaLu is canon or there's no main pairing). So many questions and so many reasons I'm excited. Good Luck!
So far this is interesting. I wonder what'll happen next. And when you mean Emil as in Emil you or the Emil as in Emil Castagnier? Either way is fine with me! And youade Jellal and Erza married? I wonder if that'll happen in the anime? And I wonder how? And who's that guy saying Jellal was his student? And when are Natsu, Lucy, Gray, and Happy coming? I hope Gray and Lucy are married (unless you're like the anime. I mean come in I know GrayLu is cute and all but I can tell NaLu is canon or there's no main pairing). So many questions and so many reasons I'm excited. Good Luck!
3/20/2012 c1 8Hachibukai
Waaaah. You've finally done it! :)
Interesting prologue, but why did you kill Jellal? Will he come back to life? Or he's just playing a minor character in this story?
I'm excited to know how the story would develop. Do update soon!
Nicely written chapter, by the way. :D
P.S You make the funniest A/N as always!
8HachibukaiWaaaah. You've finally done it! :)
Interesting prologue, but why did you kill Jellal? Will he come back to life? Or he's just playing a minor character in this story?
I'm excited to know how the story would develop. Do update soon!
Nicely written chapter, by the way. :D
P.S You make the funniest A/N as always!