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This is a pretty amazing first chapter. It's unbelievable that this is your first story here. Really, really good.
And sorry for being anonymous, I'm just too lazy to sign in.
This is a pretty amazing first chapter. It's unbelievable that this is your first story here. Really, really good.
And sorry for being anonymous, I'm just too lazy to sign in.
4/6/2012 c6 
18Massu Chan
Who's that sex God? Gray is the sex God (for me)! heehee An update, yay! thank you ^^ Things get more interesting now that Kai is in the picture. Will Gray be jealous, I wonder? :)) I'm so so so waiting for the next chapter. And that typo in the game, it's a bit annoying yet amusing ^^ I even found one of the conversation in Rick's house isnt translated to English it's all in Kanji lmao Anyway have a wonderful weekend and much love ^^
18Massu ChanWho's that sex God? Gray is the sex God (for me)! heehee An update, yay! thank you ^^ Things get more interesting now that Kai is in the picture. Will Gray be jealous, I wonder? :)) I'm so so so waiting for the next chapter. And that typo in the game, it's a bit annoying yet amusing ^^ I even found one of the conversation in Rick's house isnt translated to English it's all in Kanji lmao Anyway have a wonderful weekend and much love ^^
4/5/2012 c6 14TheMaskedGirl
If someone saw me while I was reading this, then they might think I'm crazy. Hahahaha. I was trying so hard not to laugh out loud. But I was smiling like an idiot.
Wait. Let me do this virtually.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Oh my goddess. This chapter was so funny. TOTALLY. REALLY. I still can't stop laughing inside my mind. Oh my goddess.
I have to agree with you though. KAI IS A SEX GOD. Unf. So hot.
And I love that bodigizer part. Poor Jeff. Hahahaha.
Claire. Hahahaha. That girl is simply bad **. Mwahahaha.
I wonder what is Gray's reaction to this. Haha. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure it's as awesome as this one.
Keep it up!
-TMG
14TheMaskedGirlIf someone saw me while I was reading this, then they might think I'm crazy. Hahahaha. I was trying so hard not to laugh out loud. But I was smiling like an idiot.
Wait. Let me do this virtually.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Oh my goddess. This chapter was so funny. TOTALLY. REALLY. I still can't stop laughing inside my mind. Oh my goddess.
I have to agree with you though. KAI IS A SEX GOD. Unf. So hot.
And I love that bodigizer part. Poor Jeff. Hahahaha.
Claire. Hahahaha. That girl is simply bad **. Mwahahaha.
I wonder what is Gray's reaction to this. Haha. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure it's as awesome as this one.
Keep it up!
-TMG
4/2/2012 c5 TheMaskedGirl
Okay, so I'm really emotional.
Hullo there. First of all, I would like to apologize because I wasn't able to leave a review for the first four chapters. You can say that I have a lazy bum, but actually I was reading this on my phone. And damn, it was really hard. So now I'm going to leave a review to apologize for my mistakes.
This. Is. Great. This is a new Claire. Usually it would be like the small, bubbly Claire and not this awesome kind of Claire. I like it. I like feisty heroines more than damsels in distress. Hehe.
Gray was Gray. And I love it! Gray is definitely my favorite Harvest Moon bachelor and my all-time favorite character. He's just too damn adorable, sweet, ugh! If I could only marry him in real life.
Your writing style. Wow. It doesn't sound forced, it's like it comes to you naturally. It also doesn't bore people (well, it didn't bore me!). Some writers tend to bore people because it's all dialogue. (An example of that kind of writers is me! Haha.) So this was really great.
This chapter was actually really good. We got a look of Claire's past which was really awesome. The story's starting to unfold now. I'm really excited for the next chapter.
Keep up your awesomeness. Go for the gold!
-TMG
Okay, so I'm really emotional.
Hullo there. First of all, I would like to apologize because I wasn't able to leave a review for the first four chapters. You can say that I have a lazy bum, but actually I was reading this on my phone. And damn, it was really hard. So now I'm going to leave a review to apologize for my mistakes.
This. Is. Great. This is a new Claire. Usually it would be like the small, bubbly Claire and not this awesome kind of Claire. I like it. I like feisty heroines more than damsels in distress. Hehe.
Gray was Gray. And I love it! Gray is definitely my favorite Harvest Moon bachelor and my all-time favorite character. He's just too damn adorable, sweet, ugh! If I could only marry him in real life.
Your writing style. Wow. It doesn't sound forced, it's like it comes to you naturally. It also doesn't bore people (well, it didn't bore me!). Some writers tend to bore people because it's all dialogue. (An example of that kind of writers is me! Haha.) So this was really great.
This chapter was actually really good. We got a look of Claire's past which was really awesome. The story's starting to unfold now. I'm really excited for the next chapter.
Keep up your awesomeness. Go for the gold!
-TMG
4/2/2012 c5 1KRoseC1013
I really like this :) I personally think its not the typical Claire and Gray story, it's a bit of a twist I think ;)
Its a really awesome and well written story!
Keep going with it!
1KRoseC1013I really like this :) I personally think its not the typical Claire and Gray story, it's a bit of a twist I think ;)
Its a really awesome and well written story!
Keep going with it!
4/2/2012 c5 18Massu Chan
Aww, Gray, how could you? *pout* Anyway, I really like ur writing style. It flows so nicely that I enjoyed reading every chapters so much ^^ This one about Claire's past is so touching. U did a great job in describing Claire's insecurity. Awesome ^^ well, I look forward for the next. Good luck with the finals ^^
18Massu ChanAww, Gray, how could you? *pout* Anyway, I really like ur writing style. It flows so nicely that I enjoyed reading every chapters so much ^^ This one about Claire's past is so touching. U did a great job in describing Claire's insecurity. Awesome ^^ well, I look forward for the next. Good luck with the finals ^^
3/24/2012 c4 8Ancient Liddel
I'm liking this!
Keep up the good work here! :)
I look forward to future chapters!
8Ancient LiddelI'm liking this!
Keep up the good work here! :)
I look forward to future chapters!
3/23/2012 c4 18Massu Chan
Hi, I like it so far. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter ^^ keep up the good work and happy weekend xD
18Massu ChanHi, I like it so far. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter ^^ keep up the good work and happy weekend xD
3/23/2012 c1 The Mere Reviewer
I must say, you are off to an amazing start for your first fanfic. I have to say, you have me quite interested and quite anxious to read on. Very detailed and mature writing. Splendid (:
I must say, you are off to an amazing start for your first fanfic. I have to say, you have me quite interested and quite anxious to read on. Very detailed and mature writing. Splendid (:
3/23/2012 c4 6hmgurl4evr
It just get's better and better... XD
Very nice job on the chappie, you did great!
I NEED the next chapter; It's getting good! *smiles like an idiot,waves hands around,and dances while people stare at her like she is retarded*
-hmgurl4evr
6hmgurl4evrIt just get's better and better... XD
Very nice job on the chappie, you did great!
I NEED the next chapter; It's getting good! *smiles like an idiot,waves hands around,and dances while people stare at her like she is retarded*
-hmgurl4evr
3/23/2012 c4 1SunnyElla16
Awesome! You did a good job on Grays POV :) I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update :)
1SunnyElla16Awesome! You did a good job on Grays POV :) I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update :)
3/22/2012 c3 7hendrixthenicecow
Wow. This is pretty excellent. Another wunderbar attempt at trying to convey the Gray/Claire scene thingamabobber. I do like the cliffhanger effect you have here, it fits well, even though I know some people who don't like them. It totally works, so I hope you keep the story rollin'!
7hendrixthenicecowWow. This is pretty excellent. Another wunderbar attempt at trying to convey the Gray/Claire scene thingamabobber. I do like the cliffhanger effect you have here, it fits well, even though I know some people who don't like them. It totally works, so I hope you keep the story rollin'!
3/21/2012 c1 15RosyRain
Nice fic going on here. I really can't believe this is the first one you've written. I like.
Also, you're Filipino too! Yes! So I'm not the only fanfic writer in the country! Hahaha
15RosyRainNice fic going on here. I really can't believe this is the first one you've written. I like.
Also, you're Filipino too! Yes! So I'm not the only fanfic writer in the country! Hahaha
3/20/2012 c3 6hmgurl4evr
Wow! You're stories are awsome! It seriously looks like it's done by a professional!
You have some real talent, girl *thumbs up*
I HAVE to hit those fav story buttons cause I'm rooting for u!
P*L*E*A*S*E U*P*D*A*T*E*!*!*!
6hmgurl4evrWow! You're stories are awsome! It seriously looks like it's done by a professional!
You have some real talent, girl *thumbs up*
I HAVE to hit those fav story buttons cause I'm rooting for u!
P*L*E*A*S*E U*P*D*A*T*E*!*!*!