for The Great Mouse Detective 25/6 c12 
5ASianSuccessor2012
I absolutely love it! I can already feel the Basil/Olivia (Basilivia) vibes coming :") I love your writing style, the drama, the humor, the mystery...you're an incredibly inspiring and thoroughly creative writer!
Please update soon! I simply can't wait! Keep it up :)
5ASianSuccessor2012I absolutely love it! I can already feel the Basil/Olivia (Basilivia) vibes coming :") I love your writing style, the drama, the humor, the mystery...you're an incredibly inspiring and thoroughly creative writer!
Please update soon! I simply can't wait! Keep it up :)
3/12 c12 Guest
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
3/12 c10 Guest
awwwww so he has got a soft you got his charcter really well :)
awwwww so he has got a soft you got his charcter really well :)
3/10 c12 C.G
Love this chapter. I didn't mind that it was short, because it had alot of emoition and as my old teather said "Quality i bette than quantity". Thank you for updating. i hope you will update soon.
Love this chapter. I didn't mind that it was short, because it had alot of emoition and as my old teather said "Quality i bette than quantity". Thank you for updating. i hope you will update soon.
3/8 c12 1DizzyPirate
Yay you're back! XD I think this was a wonderful chapter. It had a lot of emotion going on and, although subtle or perhaps not so much, it has begun to grow the seeds of love that you have planted in our two heroes. To this, all I can say is awwwwwwwww! And btw, as I've said before, although I prefer the longer chapters, I understand that as an author it is not always so easy to write a lot in a short time so as long as there is something and you're keeping the quality up (which you are) long, short, doesn't matter. I most certainly cannot wait for chapter 13! XD
1DizzyPirateYay you're back! XD I think this was a wonderful chapter. It had a lot of emotion going on and, although subtle or perhaps not so much, it has begun to grow the seeds of love that you have planted in our two heroes. To this, all I can say is awwwwwwwww! And btw, as I've said before, although I prefer the longer chapters, I understand that as an author it is not always so easy to write a lot in a short time so as long as there is something and you're keeping the quality up (which you are) long, short, doesn't matter. I most certainly cannot wait for chapter 13! XD
3/7 c12 russipaola101
si! ya extrañaba esta historia y pobre Basil,jamas es fácil la partida de un ser querido (créeme,lo se) pero me encanto el razonamiento de Olivia y la despedida en la habitación de ella fue tan linda! y perdona por aun no enviarte el dibujo pero el colegio me ah tenido ocupada y muchas cosas mas .
de todas maneras te felicito y espero con ansias el próximo capitulo :D
si! ya extrañaba esta historia y pobre Basil,jamas es fácil la partida de un ser querido (créeme,lo se) pero me encanto el razonamiento de Olivia y la despedida en la habitación de ella fue tan linda! y perdona por aun no enviarte el dibujo pero el colegio me ah tenido ocupada y muchas cosas mas .
de todas maneras te felicito y espero con ansias el próximo capitulo :D
3/7 c12 squamosa0688
OMG! You really made a great job on BasilxOlivia shipping! I love how u put some tension between them, and a lot of hints here and there about their feeling! 3 Please update soon :D
OMG! You really made a great job on BasilxOlivia shipping! I love how u put some tension between them, and a lot of hints here and there about their feeling! 3 Please update soon :D
3/4 c12 batbinmyheart
Love the story so much so far and can not wait for more chapters.. The thought of a 52 chapter story is so very exciting to I promise to be as loyal as a reader and reviewer as possible. And Great Mouse Detective has always been special to me and I have also loved the idea of Basil and Olivia as a couple so pleas update soon!
Love the story so much so far and can not wait for more chapters.. The thought of a 52 chapter story is so very exciting to I promise to be as loyal as a reader and reviewer as possible. And Great Mouse Detective has always been special to me and I have also loved the idea of Basil and Olivia as a couple so pleas update soon!
3/3 c12 XxThe-Crest-Of-AnubisxX
Please update soon...
Can't wait for next chapter
But good luck with your story and school
Please update soon...
Can't wait for next chapter
But good luck with your story and school
3/3 c12 77Masked Mouse
Don't put yourself out Moon Witch. It is a lovely chapter of how it shows Basil and Olivia's thoughts about th eother and their past. I understand you have too much to do. Please udpate soon.
77Masked MouseDon't put yourself out Moon Witch. It is a lovely chapter of how it shows Basil and Olivia's thoughts about th eother and their past. I understand you have too much to do. Please udpate soon.
2/11 c5 russipaola101
Me gusto mucho tu historia,esta muy linda y tierna.
La verdad me inspiro para hacer un dibujo
Me gusto mucho tu historia,esta muy linda y tierna.
La verdad me inspiro para hacer un dibujo
1/30 c11 91kaycee
Oh, I can't wait to see as Genie stated so crassly the two jump each others bones! Ratigan! Don't you dare touch Olivia or to quote a similarly famous rodent "You mess with me I go loko on you!" After all "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" or in this case a protective reader. Anyway love the story so far look forward to reading more from you.
(to bad you don't own the great mouse detective i'd love to see this on the big screen.)
Oh, I can't wait to see as Genie stated so crassly the two jump each others bones! Ratigan! Don't you dare touch Olivia or to quote a similarly famous rodent "You mess with me I go loko on you!" After all "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" or in this case a protective reader. Anyway love the story so far look forward to reading more from you.
(to bad you don't own the great mouse detective i'd love to see this on the big screen.)