for New neighbour4/10/2012 c3 BB
This is an interesting story and well-written. I'm looking forward to reading more.
This is an interesting story and well-written. I'm looking forward to reading more.
4/6/2012 c3 
3adorkable-mommie
that was not dry! that was awesome! I loved it can't wait for more. I love "John smith" stories!
3adorkable-mommiethat was not dry! that was awesome! I loved it can't wait for more. I love "John smith" stories!
3/28/2012 c2 adorkable-mommie
I like it so far, I enjoyed the scene in the cafe and hope you update soon.
I like it so far, I enjoyed the scene in the cafe and hope you update soon.
3/22/2012 c1 diggs
cute please continue i'd like to see where this is going
cute please continue i'd like to see where this is going
3/21/2012 c1 10GoldenHeart92
This seems like a great start to an interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
-Goldenheart
10GoldenHeart92This seems like a great start to an interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
-Goldenheart