for From Pirates to Mages1/25 c8 AnimatorKing
i feel he should be there for mira's fight although you are changing the story a lot i feel you should still let natsu have some fights
i feel he should be there for mira's fight although you are changing the story a lot i feel you should still let natsu have some fights
1/13 c11 
2iliketosmile
Please update I love this story and it's so good. Also mirajane and Zoro have to get together!
2iliketosmilePlease update I love this story and it's so good. Also mirajane and Zoro have to get together!
1/4 c11 fairyloverxoxo03
PLEASE UPDATE!your story is so interesting and i want to know what happens next! :)
PLEASE UPDATE!your story is so interesting and i want to know what happens next! :)
1/3 c8 3ANIME LOVER OTAKU
during the laxus arc id like to read about zoro help mira fight fried and also about his impression of seeing mira in her demon mode,however its just my own desire,chose the one you want to write, it doesnt matter which you write about i will still read it!so do your best and keep up the good work!(btw you have great imagination!):)
3ANIME LOVER OTAKUduring the laxus arc id like to read about zoro help mira fight fried and also about his impression of seeing mira in her demon mode,however its just my own desire,chose the one you want to write, it doesnt matter which you write about i will still read it!so do your best and keep up the good work!(btw you have great imagination!):)
12/17/2012 c11 Mr. E
Given time this story can reign, not even a divoted reader could pass this through deign.
Mr. E here to say this story has the right decorum. Yes. The right decorum. Great plots, intriguing word structure, obviously an educated hand except for one problem. Well, there may be more but I ignore. Spelling my friend. Do not rush through your work. It is, although electic, riddled with spelling errors. Take time, patience, tranquil perusal to read your story after typing it. You have great potential but having to second guess a word at times can hurt your story. Other then that! Great story, perfect character casting. It is original, thrilling and a joy to read. One of the most important scenes in an action story are the fight scenes and in that area you are excelling without a doubt!
I leave you, yes you and everyone reading this, a riddle.
A sharpshooter hung up his hat and put on a blindfold, he then walked 100 yards, turned around, and shot a bullet through his hat. The blindfold was a perfectly good one, completely blocking the mans vision. How did he manage this?
Given time this story can reign, not even a divoted reader could pass this through deign.
Mr. E here to say this story has the right decorum. Yes. The right decorum. Great plots, intriguing word structure, obviously an educated hand except for one problem. Well, there may be more but I ignore. Spelling my friend. Do not rush through your work. It is, although electic, riddled with spelling errors. Take time, patience, tranquil perusal to read your story after typing it. You have great potential but having to second guess a word at times can hurt your story. Other then that! Great story, perfect character casting. It is original, thrilling and a joy to read. One of the most important scenes in an action story are the fight scenes and in that area you are excelling without a doubt!
I leave you, yes you and everyone reading this, a riddle.
A sharpshooter hung up his hat and put on a blindfold, he then walked 100 yards, turned around, and shot a bullet through his hat. The blindfold was a perfectly good one, completely blocking the mans vision. How did he manage this?
11/26/2012 c11 SinOfDisaster
This is a great story hope you continue at some point. I also agree with the zoro and chopper pair. Everyone in the crew treats chopper as a kid brother and zoro is the only one serious without someone insulting their friends. Question will chopper be able to make more rumble balls since I doubt they will have the same ingredients or will he have some different properties for them?
This is a great story hope you continue at some point. I also agree with the zoro and chopper pair. Everyone in the crew treats chopper as a kid brother and zoro is the only one serious without someone insulting their friends. Question will chopper be able to make more rumble balls since I doubt they will have the same ingredients or will he have some different properties for them?
11/14/2012 c11 Chasenyx
Haha good story dude :) very funny and good to read so keep writing :D
See ya
Haha good story dude :) very funny and good to read so keep writing :D
See ya
10/21/2012 c11 1evilsugarnazioverlord
Zoro's horrible sense of direction has been discovered! Hahaha! Love this! Update soon!
1evilsugarnazioverlordZoro's horrible sense of direction has been discovered! Hahaha! Love this! Update soon!