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8/7/2012 c2 8Q-A the Authoress
Aww, how sweet. I can't wait to read how Goofy and Clarabelle deal with each other. :)

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
7/31/2012 c2 22Fizzy Starburst
Yay! Update! I don't mind the wait, the wuality is well worth it :)

Beginnings: This was cute. I like how you took on Mickey's POV, as in the movie, we only see Minnie's. Now I can't help but think that must've been what was going on in his head.

Accuastions: This one might be my favorite. I really enjoyed how it was Daisy-centric, and the way you chose to go with it was a great choice. The bit at the end about her changing her shoes was the perfect ending to the cute little drabble.

Restless: I absoutely ADORE the way you wrote the relationship between Daisy and Minnie. That was always one of my favorite part sof the movie. And Mickey is so sweet! I wanna cuddle him.

Snowflake: I have only one word for this. Adorable.

Haze: Interesting take on the prompt. I enjoyed it, though I feel like ti was lacking something. What, I do not know, maybe it just could've been fleshed out a little more. Still very cute, as all of your Minnie/Mickey bits are :)

Flame: This was really well done. I really love your interpretation of most of these prompts, and this one is a prime example. I like how you didn't use names in this one, leaving the reader to decide who it's about.

Formal: Another sweet Mickey and Minnie bit. Not much else to say about it.

Companion: I'm infatuated with this one. The story is amazing, and it fits the theme of the prompts perfectly. Exploring Pluto and Minnie's relatioship was something I hadn't even ever pondered. Really, fantastically well done.

Move: Another cute one. I really like the dyanmic you've created in this 'verse for Mickey and Daisy, and this story shows it so well.

Silver: I really liked this one. The way you used the prompt was fantastic, and I loved the goings on in both Mickey and Minnie's heads :)

Prepared: This is adorable. probably my favorite of the Mickey/Minnie ones.

Knowledge: It was Minnie's Student-teacher relationship revelation that sold me on this one. Minnie's got some strange views of love XD

Denial: I absoultely LOVE this one. The only thing I feel the need to bring up is that I'm not sure how it ties into the prompt. But it's so good that I don't even care :)

Wind: This was a good one. Really well crafted.

Order: This one is great, especially after having read "Accusations"

Thanks: I love the physical side of Mickey and Minnie's relationship in this 'verse, and this drabble was suc a great elboration on it. Really enjoyable :)

Look: I absoultely ADORE the way you get inside Minnie's head in this 'verse, and her POV in this was so much fun to read :)

Summer: ADORABLE. All there is to say :)

Transformation: This is something I'd LOVE to see fully animated.

Tremble: OMG, I love this one. The words you chose were perfect and made the drabble so enjoyable :)

Sunset: Another really cute one :)

Mad: Yes. This. Just. Yes.

Thousand: This was a fun one. You get to see Mickey actually dislking something that Minnie's involved in, which is great :)

Outside: I love the way this one gets tied up.

Winter: This is another I'd like to see fully animated. It seems like so much fun to watch :)

Diamond: OMG. MICKEYS LINE. YES.

Letters: I love this one. It's so cute. The concept alone is adorable, and you executed it so well :)

Simple: D'awwwwww...so cute :)

Future: SO CUTE. WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE THE OVERWHELMING CUTENESS.
3/22/2012 c1 Fizzy Starburst
This story is so freaking epic. I know the movie inside and out, and I still love it, and make a point of watching it at least once a year.

This chapter was very well done. You captured Mickey's dialogue perfectly, and I thouroughly enjoyed the relationship the two share after the movie. Very well planned on your part.

I can't wait to see what you have in store for the other couples! All of the plots sound really good. I'm hooked already!
3/21/2012 c1 4Landofmusicandmelody
YAY! Three musketeers! I loved this!
3/21/2012 c1 9loonytunecrazy
Intresting start here loved that movie that sneaky of Minnie
3/21/2012 c1 4Mighty Agamemnon
Awww...this was so sweet! lol...Princess Minnie...proper princess by day, wild girl by night! I'm really glad you're writing a fic about the Three Musketeers! I loved that movie...even if they made Donald OOC. Anyway, great job!

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