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8h ago c46 30jmolly
I liked the gargle. LOL
9h ago c33 LizzyAtTheLake
I love figure drawing sessions. Our local art center has them sometimes. However, most of the time I have to work from photographs
10h ago c42 beachlovers
I am way behind but I was kind of hoping to get thru some of the bumpy angst, looks like I am going to get stuck in the middle of it ;-(
16h ago c32 jeanette70
You are an awesome writer...it doesn't feel like fanfiction..honestly I wouldn't be surprised if you are already being published and if not you should be. Excellent!
17h ago c35 divyvicki
Great way for him to let the girl down easy.
18h ago c46 Babyface Carter
New reader to your story (and I've finally caught up!)...I believe I saw this recommended in a thread over at ADF recently. Apologizes for not reviewing before now.

I like your story line and how all the players are intertwined somehow. I'm waiting for Edward to see who Bella's male model is ...I'm assuming that's James from Renaissance Escorts, yes?

So much to look forward too - especially what Edward plans to do for work; his competition, Bella's art display...etc. Can't wait for the next update :)
22h ago c31 LizzyAtTheLake
It sounds like their house is in a beautiful part of Seattle. I was just there in March, visiting from the Midwest. I don't think he will be able to continue for much longer at all. I really feel for these two. And, ill continue to worry about her period until it arrives!
6/18 c30 LizzyAtTheLake
That was beautiful. I can totally understand how they would get Lost in one another. I wonder if it will effect the plot...of course it will! Why do it if It won't. No I'll be all angsty until she gets her period!

They have quite the dilemma on their hands
6/17 c46 keyecullen
He's done! Yay!
6/17 c34 divyvicki
Boy, with friends like Jessica who need enemies.
6/17 c22 LizzyAtTheLake
I'd have to say that the drama and angst make up for the lack of lemons. I likea little plot and substance with my fic relationships.
6/14 c46 Guest
Jessica's tongue should be the least of Bella's worries - makes her seems really foolish to be so bothered by this, when that bodily contact is absolutely nothing compared to the hundreds of places his body, tongue, etc. have been, and the corresponding number of skanks and cougars who have literally been all over him, and vice versa. Once again, Bella completely misses the point.
6/16 c46 robfans
Jessica is a bitch and it came back biting her in the ass
6/16 c46 2SatinCoveredSteel
Loved the chapter. Bella showed she's got guts with that speech she gave to the room; I especially love the last line: "He may have come here with Jessica, but he's leaving with me. He'll always end up with me." You tell em, girl!

Now I wonder what struggles will come, with Edward trying to make ends meet while he waits for his big chance at the contest. I'll certainly be along for the ride. :)
6/15 c46 AMP2004
just beautiful! love seeing them come together and finally move forward.
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