for Honeymoon11/9/2012 c1 tehe
good writing but alchohol doesn't belong in the gundam seed equation, it always annoys me to read someone writing about a character years later with drug abuse involved because it makes little sense, and the characters are not as feeble minded as the writers seem to think. other than that tho the writing was well done.
good writing but alchohol doesn't belong in the gundam seed equation, it always annoys me to read someone writing about a character years later with drug abuse involved because it makes little sense, and the characters are not as feeble minded as the writers seem to think. other than that tho the writing was well done.
3/21/2012 c1 
1Kuwabara99
very interesting dynamic to their relationship.
you write it pretty well too.
be sure to check out my fic: Fllay's Decision. I should have chapter 2 up soon as well
nice work^^
1Kuwabara99very interesting dynamic to their relationship.
you write it pretty well too.
be sure to check out my fic: Fllay's Decision. I should have chapter 2 up soon as well
nice work^^
3/21/2012 c1 9EmperorDraco7
This is a pretty impressive and touching story, I really liked how Kira and Flay are slowly letting go of their past as well as the cute moments in the end. Well done.
9EmperorDraco7This is a pretty impressive and touching story, I really liked how Kira and Flay are slowly letting go of their past as well as the cute moments in the end. Well done.