for When Love comes Knocking2/5 c3 diana015
i love this fic i love babys and they being moms but..is it that easy to take the baby home ? im not a expert but i think social service has a lot to say and stuff isnt ?
i love this fic i love babys and they being moms but..is it that easy to take the baby home ? im not a expert but i think social service has a lot to say and stuff isnt ?
9/1/2012 c33 Laughingkiddo
To be perfectly honest, I thought the first few chapters were rather bland and boring. But as the story builds up, with the drama coming in, I think this has now become a nice one. Though the Valerie-near-death one nearly gave me an heart attack. Though I would like to see you explore the relationship between Andy and Valerie, and how can she hide such a big secret!
To be perfectly honest, I thought the first few chapters were rather bland and boring. But as the story builds up, with the drama coming in, I think this has now become a nice one. Though the Valerie-near-death one nearly gave me an heart attack. Though I would like to see you explore the relationship between Andy and Valerie, and how can she hide such a big secret!
5/24/2012 c33
2arianagleek
This story was so nice, I loved it so much! It was just really sweet although it was a shame to see Valerie get so rebellious at the end... she always seemed like a good girl to me! Anyway, I loved it and please write a sequel!
2arianagleekThis story was so nice, I loved it so much! It was just really sweet although it was a shame to see Valerie get so rebellious at the end... she always seemed like a good girl to me! Anyway, I loved it and please write a sequel!
5/6/2012 c33 Brittana4eva
HI! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS AMAZING! I was wondering if maybe you would consider doing a sequel becauase i reckon it would be cool to see what the kids are up to in 1o years or so! plz but no pressure or anything!
HI! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS AMAZING! I was wondering if maybe you would consider doing a sequel becauase i reckon it would be cool to see what the kids are up to in 1o years or so! plz but no pressure or anything!
5/5/2012 c33 Abby182
This is the first time i write a comment but you did a really cool story! :D hope to see more of your writting! :D
This is the first time i write a comment but you did a really cool story! :D hope to see more of your writting! :D
4/30/2012 c30
11MiniDiannax
Brilliant Chapter, I know how u feel when u have such little time to make the biggest of decisions the best thing to do is to go with ur heart do what you want to do also ask ur parents believe it or not when it comes to this sort of stuff u'll be glad to listen to them ramble on and on :D x
11MiniDiannaxBrilliant Chapter, I know how u feel when u have such little time to make the biggest of decisions the best thing to do is to go with ur heart do what you want to do also ask ur parents believe it or not when it comes to this sort of stuff u'll be glad to listen to them ramble on and on :D x
