for Role Reversal: The Road Not Taken3/27 c2 Keiren-Kun89
So, you should get a beta. Your sentence structure is impossible to follow and the story seems to be flat out missing some words as it transitions from one scene to the next or even within one scene. Can't tell if it's good or not, as I have no idea whats going on.
So, you should get a beta. Your sentence structure is impossible to follow and the story seems to be flat out missing some words as it transitions from one scene to the next or even within one scene. Can't tell if it's good or not, as I have no idea whats going on.
3/10 c18 Guest
Great story! . But Sasuke's personality and everything makes him seem more like the one destined to have the curse mark...just saying it's only my opinion. I like it and hope somebody can continue it soon!
Great story! . But Sasuke's personality and everything makes him seem more like the one destined to have the curse mark...just saying it's only my opinion. I like it and hope somebody can continue it soon!
9/14/2012 c19 Ely
Jackpot777! NOOOOOO!
I was hoping for a new chapter!
And sorry for stopping our e-mail conversations, my life is such a mess right now (I won't go into more detail but the 26th I'll be at Uni, so I'll be able to get away from everything and talk to you back). Things have been… diffcult.
I hope you are OK.
Jackpot777! NOOOOOO!
I was hoping for a new chapter!
And sorry for stopping our e-mail conversations, my life is such a mess right now (I won't go into more detail but the 26th I'll be at Uni, so I'll be able to get away from everything and talk to you back). Things have been… diffcult.
I hope you are OK.
6/17/2012 c18 
1FlameOfAFriend94
Great chapter! I loved the change when Anko was the one who fought off Kabuto, instead of Kakashi. The changes in the tournament will be interesting, especially with Naruto not fighting Neji. I wonder, how will that affect Neji's development in character? Naruto was the reason that Neji changed, that he learned about his father, that he strived to overcome the seal on his forehead, that he abandoned his Fate believes, and that he became nicer towards Hinata and Hiashi. Will Sasuke be able to do all of that?
Nice job. I really do wonder why you do not have more reviews, as this story is good.
1FlameOfAFriend94Great chapter! I loved the change when Anko was the one who fought off Kabuto, instead of Kakashi. The changes in the tournament will be interesting, especially with Naruto not fighting Neji. I wonder, how will that affect Neji's development in character? Naruto was the reason that Neji changed, that he learned about his father, that he strived to overcome the seal on his forehead, that he abandoned his Fate believes, and that he became nicer towards Hinata and Hiashi. Will Sasuke be able to do all of that?
Nice job. I really do wonder why you do not have more reviews, as this story is good.
6/16/2012 c18 IWishIWasACheescake
I really enjoy this story and I hope u can update soon... Please? :)
I really enjoy this story and I hope u can update soon... Please? :)
6/16/2012 c18 anime-induced-coma
Very interesting so far, I really enjoy the role reversal and I think it's more fitting that naruto is the one to turn dark. I hope you update soon!
Very interesting so far, I really enjoy the role reversal and I think it's more fitting that naruto is the one to turn dark. I hope you update soon!
6/4/2012 c17 FlameOfAFriend94
This story is absolutely great! It's a shame it doesn't have more reviews. The character development is logical and makes sense, and the details and descriptions of everything is very good. The only critisism I would have at all is that Sasuke talks a lot more than in cannon and is more friendly, but then again, this story isn't cannon.(:
Good job on everything! I can't wait for the next chapter.
This story is absolutely great! It's a shame it doesn't have more reviews. The character development is logical and makes sense, and the details and descriptions of everything is very good. The only critisism I would have at all is that Sasuke talks a lot more than in cannon and is more friendly, but then again, this story isn't cannon.(:
Good job on everything! I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/4/2012 c1 Yeeeeeeeeh
I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time. I thought I might have to write it myself at one point, but you did it and you did it well. Well, so far, anyway.
I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time. I thought I might have to write it myself at one point, but you did it and you did it well. Well, so far, anyway.
5/11/2012 c14 Randomperson
I LOVED it!
I LOVED it!
4/27/2012 c12 Randomperson
Yay! :D
Yay! :D
4/27/2012 c12 elyddmm
Hi! It's Ely!
This chapter, Naruto vs. Kiba, was absolutely great! You're really improving your fight scenes! And it was awesome.
Sorry for not answering when you answered me (and you're right, we should take this conversation to a mroe private place), but all the problems I've had since January finally came to a head and now I'm a sitting duck. Family stuff. Nevermind.
This story is turning out to be epic! It will definitely have more than 25 chapters (25 chapters is my measuring stick since the first epic fanfiction I read had 25) and I will be devouring every single one of it! Several times :D
I'm getting sidetracked.
Spelling is excellent and the chapters areshort and to the point :D And I like all the little details, like how Jiraiya is different from Orochimaru (and Orochimaru's such an airhead XD) when collecting pupils and how he would relate to everybopdy. And you have made me very intrigued. What happened to Jiraiya to become like this? It obviously has to be after he taught the 4th because he was the one who developed the rasengan.
As to why Jiraiya would do that, it has to do with how I think Naruto's mind works (which of course is open to interpretation). too bad you don't have an account on AOL or anything. Well, I guess you have hotmail. Anyway,
Have a nice day and thank you for answering me!
PD: Got it? Now we can communicate!
Hi! It's Ely!
This chapter, Naruto vs. Kiba, was absolutely great! You're really improving your fight scenes! And it was awesome.
Sorry for not answering when you answered me (and you're right, we should take this conversation to a mroe private place), but all the problems I've had since January finally came to a head and now I'm a sitting duck. Family stuff. Nevermind.
This story is turning out to be epic! It will definitely have more than 25 chapters (25 chapters is my measuring stick since the first epic fanfiction I read had 25) and I will be devouring every single one of it! Several times :D
I'm getting sidetracked.
Spelling is excellent and the chapters areshort and to the point :D And I like all the little details, like how Jiraiya is different from Orochimaru (and Orochimaru's such an airhead XD) when collecting pupils and how he would relate to everybopdy. And you have made me very intrigued. What happened to Jiraiya to become like this? It obviously has to be after he taught the 4th because he was the one who developed the rasengan.
As to why Jiraiya would do that, it has to do with how I think Naruto's mind works (which of course is open to interpretation). too bad you don't have an account on AOL or anything. Well, I guess you have hotmail. Anyway,
Have a nice day and thank you for answering me!
PD: Got it? Now we can communicate!
4/26/2012 c11 Randomperson
I want naruto to fight already! I'm so EXCITED!
I want naruto to fight already! I'm so EXCITED!
4/26/2012 c10 1Vordax0110
I guess Sakura could go of fan-girl duty to be worried about someone other than Sasuke. It does kinda sound like the person she is.
Update soon!
1Vordax0110I guess Sakura could go of fan-girl duty to be worried about someone other than Sasuke. It does kinda sound like the person she is.
Update soon!