for The Brother I Never Had6/8/2012 c7 AnimeGirl433
Stop. I'm going to flood my house. At the end when Zack said that. I felt so bad. Just update soon. This story is wonderful and beautiful. It shows how true friendship is.
Stop. I'm going to flood my house. At the end when Zack said that. I felt so bad. Just update soon. This story is wonderful and beautiful. It shows how true friendship is.
5/22/2012 c6 Supersoul7691
Please update soon!
I love the relationship between Zack and Kayoko.
Friends.
I hate when people think of a scene like that they automatically assume they're a couple...
Very well done.
Please update soon!
I love the relationship between Zack and Kayoko.
Friends.
I hate when people think of a scene like that they automatically assume they're a couple...
Very well done.
5/21/2012 c6 Xienbec551
Still love the story so far!
Keep it up!
Still love the story so far!
Keep it up!
5/20/2012 c6 
1Confetti108
See all he wants to do is help! Zack is so amazing! we need more friends like himout there please update.
1Confetti108See all he wants to do is help! Zack is so amazing! we need more friends like himout there please update.
5/20/2012 c6 AnimeGirl433
You nearly made me cry when I read how she felt.
No joke.
I just want her to be happy.
Zack Fair you better make her happy! :D
You nearly made me cry when I read how she felt.
No joke.
I just want her to be happy.
Zack Fair you better make her happy! :D
5/20/2012 c6 Clack-WWBM-Lover
Great work! Loved it! I feel sorry for her, but...maybe she will be reunited with Cloud soon?
SC
Great work! Loved it! I feel sorry for her, but...maybe she will be reunited with Cloud soon?
SC
5/7/2012 c5 Xienbec551
HOLY SHI* YOU UPDATED?
I had no idea...
All I gotta say is that you gotta write more chapters.
This story is a very good one and gets the readers consumed by it!
Can't wait for chapter 6!
HOLY SHI* YOU UPDATED?
I had no idea...
All I gotta say is that you gotta write more chapters.
This story is a very good one and gets the readers consumed by it!
Can't wait for chapter 6!
4/29/2012 c5 AnimeGirl433
YES! YES YES YES YES YES!
SHE FINALLY TRUSTS HIM! :DDDD
*ahem* I loved it! Absolutely loved it! I really hope you continue!
Btw, you make awesome OC stories. Everyone else just throws them in the plot and does nothing about it. It's kind of annoying. You portray Zack's character very well.
I totally agree with Zack! If I were her I would be like "DHOKVYJGDIVSIBCUHHGHH" with excitement. Wasn't Kayoko the one who wanted to join in the first place? Huh... :/
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
P.S I was surprised myself when Zack grabbed Kayoko's shoulders. I didn't expect that coming! XD
YES! YES YES YES YES YES!
SHE FINALLY TRUSTS HIM! :DDDD
*ahem* I loved it! Absolutely loved it! I really hope you continue!
Btw, you make awesome OC stories. Everyone else just throws them in the plot and does nothing about it. It's kind of annoying. You portray Zack's character very well.
I totally agree with Zack! If I were her I would be like "DHOKVYJGDIVSIBCUHHGHH" with excitement. Wasn't Kayoko the one who wanted to join in the first place? Huh... :/
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
P.S I was surprised myself when Zack grabbed Kayoko's shoulders. I didn't expect that coming! XD
4/26/2012 c4 Xienbec551
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I can't wait to see what happens to Kayoko and Zack! :D I can't wait for the next update!
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I can't wait to see what happens to Kayoko and Zack! :D I can't wait for the next update!
4/25/2012 c4 AnimeGirl433
How can she not trust Zack? D: He's so freaking adorable!
Love the song. Though I've never played XIII, loving that song. ;)
I felt so bad for her when she kept on having the memories!
Loving the story so far, but you should make longer chapters. :P
How can she not trust Zack? D: He's so freaking adorable!
Love the song. Though I've never played XIII, loving that song. ;)
I felt so bad for her when she kept on having the memories!
Loving the story so far, but you should make longer chapters. :P
4/23/2012 c4 Supersoul7691
I...Love...this story... You're an amazing author and I even made an account! I hope that you'll read my stories once they come up!
I...Love...this story... You're an amazing author and I even made an account! I hope that you'll read my stories once they come up!