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8SnowHelm
Yey, you're back with another awesome chapter. I had to read through the whole story again because i love it so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Alistair, he doesn't stand a chance.
8SnowHelmYey, you're back with another awesome chapter. I had to read through the whole story again because i love it so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Alistair, he doesn't stand a chance.
1/26 c15 10TunelessLyric
Holy cow! I was beginning to think you'd dropped off the face of the planet or something! Nice to have ya back.
Nope, no idea where this is now going. You'll have to just write the next chapter for me, haha.
There are a couple missing quotation marks here and there you might want to add in. Otherwise it was great.
10TunelessLyricHoly cow! I was beginning to think you'd dropped off the face of the planet or something! Nice to have ya back.
Nope, no idea where this is now going. You'll have to just write the next chapter for me, haha.
There are a couple missing quotation marks here and there you might want to add in. Otherwise it was great.
1/26 c15 Mike3207
Not hard to guess-Cailan and Alistair will have it out, maybe with Elissa involved in it.
Not hard to guess-Cailan and Alistair will have it out, maybe with Elissa involved in it.
10/23/2012 c8 Guest
Doooooood. Nathaniel's a tiny fricken' ninja.
Doooooood. Nathaniel's a tiny fricken' ninja.
7/31/2012 c14 1mememoll
I hope this turns into a lengthy novel, it has real potential. I want more please.
1mememollI hope this turns into a lengthy novel, it has real potential. I want more please.
7/29/2012 c14 10TunelessLyric
Hmmm. Interesting. I think Elissa is Bryce's favourite, yes?
Very cute. I love how you have everything down to Alistair's nerves down so easily. I also enjoy how easy this is to read and just lap up.
I can't wait for more!
10TunelessLyricHmmm. Interesting. I think Elissa is Bryce's favourite, yes?
Very cute. I love how you have everything down to Alistair's nerves down so easily. I also enjoy how easy this is to read and just lap up.
I can't wait for more!
7/29/2012 c10 2MapleMaven
Children are such drama queens...wait.
This keeps me amused when I am feeling down. Very fluid writing, I remember reading your first stories, you have come so far. *Parental crying
2MapleMavenChildren are such drama queens...wait.
This keeps me amused when I am feeling down. Very fluid writing, I remember reading your first stories, you have come so far. *Parental crying
6/27/2012 c13 10TunelessLyric
Ooooh. I get busy and this is what happens? After such a long time in limbo you finish stories and work so much on others? I should do that more often.
I like that this has gone from silly plan to serious outing. And that we get to see so many views on the single action of Elissa's. It seems very real to the readers. I love it.
The ease of reading this is great. I can't wait for the rest!
10TunelessLyricOoooh. I get busy and this is what happens? After such a long time in limbo you finish stories and work so much on others? I should do that more often.
I like that this has gone from silly plan to serious outing. And that we get to see so many views on the single action of Elissa's. It seems very real to the readers. I love it.
The ease of reading this is great. I can't wait for the rest!
6/18/2012 c12 Jaden Anderson
Lol! Poor Elissa! Mommy's not happy haha. Don't wanna be her bout now haha
Lol! Poor Elissa! Mommy's not happy haha. Don't wanna be her bout now haha
6/10/2012 c11 2Theevilmetalbear
Another good one! I can imagine Elissa teaching Alistair some dance steps from there on xD
2TheevilmetalbearAnother good one! I can imagine Elissa teaching Alistair some dance steps from there on xD
6/10/2012 c11 bergamot29
I really enjoy this story and am always so happy to see it come into my inbox. I love the way you are portraying them all. Elissa is as I would imagine her to be and poor Alistair just does not stand a chance against her.
I really enjoy this story and am always so happy to see it come into my inbox. I love the way you are portraying them all. Elissa is as I would imagine her to be and poor Alistair just does not stand a chance against her.
6/10/2012 c11 23Jaden Anderson
Haha still cute :) I loved Nathaniels's thoughts on Elissa. She is quite determined isn't she? Poor Cailan being used as the distraction haha
23Jaden AndersonHaha still cute :) I loved Nathaniels's thoughts on Elissa. She is quite determined isn't she? Poor Cailan being used as the distraction haha
6/3/2012 c10 Jaden Anderson
Now, now, Elissa - mind your manners hahaha so cute! I love how protective Fergus and Nathaniel are. Awesome ;)
Now, now, Elissa - mind your manners hahaha so cute! I love how protective Fergus and Nathaniel are. Awesome ;)
5/31/2012 c9 2Theevilmetalbear
Haha i can clearly see little Elissa building up her rage and unleashing it on little Cailand and little Anora. SHUT IT YOU sounds so much like something Alistair would say, it's super cute haha Very good one, my favorite so far :D
2TheevilmetalbearHaha i can clearly see little Elissa building up her rage and unleashing it on little Cailand and little Anora. SHUT IT YOU sounds so much like something Alistair would say, it's super cute haha Very good one, my favorite so far :D